| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly know how to hit the highs and the lows.....
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy you updated! This chapter was so bitter sweet. It's really too bad Kagome didn't remember his revelation to her. Maybe he can give that to her in a dream sequence so that she'll stop being so angry at him for that? Keep up the AMAZING work, this is one of my favorite stories out there! Oh and PS - Congratulations on placing in the IYFG Best Comedy! You totally deserve it! :]
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Sesshomaru! He needs to quit being so stoic and open up to Kagome. I feel sorry for the guy with the way things turned out.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 15:20 EDT
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i hope you are feeling better. poor sess, no matter what he does, he gets the short end of the stick. please update soon. the story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 28, 2008 22:25 EDT
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i hope you're feeling better. if it wouldn't gum up the works, i'd send you some chicken noodle soup via email...but i doubt even high-speed internet is capable of such feats.
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, I'm so sorry that you're sick. Don't worry about updating until you feel better again! Your health is so much more important than the story. That was an absolutely wonderful chapter though! I sure wish I could write like that when I'm sick...most of mine come out gibberish! Anyways, I hope you feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:42 EDT
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hahaha, barks bites and drools! very clever!
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 20, 2008 23:22 EDT
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i love this story. it really does get better and better every chapter. don't worry about not updating. you need to get well. i can't wait to see what happens next, and how kagome goes about getting sesshy to prove himself. do you think he'll be getting his real form back anytime soon?
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Reviewed By: NoOneSpecial [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the syndrome, and frankly my favorite parts happen to be the past chapters. It is wonderful to see how she touched each and everyone of them. It gives the story depth and all the people who tell you otherwise should be slapped upside the head with a large object like tetseiga. Ignore them, they can't tell a great story when they see it.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 20, 2008 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Rolling over the floor laughing!!!! I love the end. The 'mary/lamb' rewording was hilarious.! great start to my morning... coffee and the syndrome! great job. I almost snorted coffee because of that last little tid bit of the chapter! HAHa! keep it coming Sunset Miko Christina! Woohoo.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Take all the time you need to rest and get better. We care more about your health than getting a new chapter.
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Title: Oh Dear
Reviewed By: bwlj On: May 20, 2008 08:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you get to feeling better and getting more sleep. After all, health is one of the most important things. Continue when you can, is what I say. I love the story, but take your time, get healthy and teach your kid the value of nap time.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the song was great!!!
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Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: May 20, 2008 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been writing for awhile. School has been killing me and also I am taking a summer class to get more credits. Though I have been taking the time to read the story everytime a new chapter comes up. Like I use to say this story keeps getting better and better. It is getting so interesting. Everything is falling in to place and I hope that Sesshomaru can get everything to work out. I really want to see what else the syndrome does in helping Sessho. Well anyways this is a great story and please continue to write. I hope you do get better and get alot of rest. Maybe try to get someone to watch your daughter for a day to get the proper rest cause you don't want to get even sicker. I really hope you feel better and everything gets better. One time my sister was sick so we just watched my niece for her so that she could get better. Just try not to over work yourself too much. Hope you get better really soon.
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Title: Lizzie Welling
Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've recently found your fic, and absolutely adore it. The unique plot is very entertaining, and I like how each chapter jumps back to the past to develop the characters. I especially love your characterization of Kagome--she's so sassy! I love how she's making it hard for Sesshomaru. Keep up the good work, and feel better!
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