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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh little Bankotsu and Kagome! How cute! That was such a great chapter, I loved how you actually made them intelligent while still being little kids. Nicely done! Now I'm curious as to how they got involved with the rest of the group. I hope you update the next chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 20, 2008 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey chickie! I love this new story! Did you mean that every odd chapter would be present and every even chapter would be in the past? You said odd for both.. *giggle*. I really can't wait to see what you are going to do with this story... is it going to be a sess/kag? Or are you going to get phunky with it and include a few inu/kag, bankotsu/kag? She seems pretty comfy-cozy with her guy friends.... hmmm... *lets the ideas roll through her head* hehe. It presents itself as an intriguing idea...! happy writings and i hope you write more on this (at your own pace of course) You have my full attention. Hail to the queen of fanfiction (psst... that would be you by the way) chao chickie! InuPriestess ~.~
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. MMMM *Drools* another Sesshy story gotta love them. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 19, 2008 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! a new story. *hugs SunsetMiko until she turns blue* I am so happy! we all love you! keep writing and I would like to be added to your email list for this story... firefly12121 @ yahoo .ca (remove spaces) happy writings. Chao chickie!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's cool how your going to do even chapters in their childhood instead of flashbacks! I never have liked flashbacks that much because they have a tendency to get stuck right were I don't want them and then they go on for too long... I don't really mind them that much, but sometimes there are just too many of them and it breks up the story... so I really like that you're doing it this way. I think it's a brilliant idea! That's so sweet how Kagome and Bankotsu became friends. Are you ever going to explain about his demon marking? I have always wondered how the hell they got those things... Jakotsu's markings would be so much more obvious too... school must have been quite un-fun for him. I'm so glad you put this chapter out now! this is such a cool story. I bet it turns out to be the best AU ever! =D
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:17 EST
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*giggles* oh I like this. and how you pulled Bank and Kagome together was great! That was a good way to explain how Bankotsu got to be so hyper-protective of her. I look forward to the next few chapters to see where this goes. DD
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:15 EST
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Cute! Crayon Kagome-chan! I love the little bit about her hanging upside down on the swing. That is so perfectly kid-dom. I like the light-hearted feel of this story, and the simple sweetness of the two best friends. Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter can't wait for the next one to come out. Can you plz tell me when the next chapters are coming out my E-mail address is phantomphan101@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:40 EST
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I love it! I'm glad you're working on another story because now I get to read two stories by my favorite fan fiction writer! I think it's really cool that Bankotsu is in the group and I'm kinda wondering where the other six are... do they exist in the story? Are they bad guys? Bankotsu seems decent so far... I kinda like when Jakotsu is a good guy. I wonder if Inuyasha is going to be a dumbass again about Kikyou... I have he doesn't catch anything from her... ew. I really want to know who the other two "witches" are. Is Sango one of the tormentors? If I had to guess I would guess that one of the would have to be Kagura... and maybe one could be Ayame. I don't think it would be possible for Rin to be mean... then there are always the trio of girls from "Kagome's time" (I know the time thing is n/a since this is AU)... As usual you have me wishing for the next chapter as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 02:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BTW, i am sooo craving chinese take out now. =P
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO! you've started another story! ^__^ Im super happy now, you have no idea! cant wait for the next chapter....=) c ya!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 14:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I still like your writing and this story is no exception. Interesting beginning. I can only guess what is going to happen next.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: January 17, 2008 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just reading the first chapter got be interested. I wonder what is going to happen next. I do wonder why the story is called that but I guess I'll learn about it later. Ohh I just can't wait to see what chapter 2 brings. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice laying of groundwork. Ready for chapter 2.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, this caught my interest right away. So Kikyo is one roomie, I wonder who the others are? Hope to see another one soon.
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