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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 07, 2008 22:25 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Long time no read....~.~ loved this chappie! keep'em coming... the building suspense in this story is great... sessie has blue balls, Kags is a frustrated female... well all seems normal or as close to normal relationships as it gets.. good goin'. I am loving this one and your one-shot series "What your eyes....".. You are turning into the little creative girl aren't you...lol. your like a hentai energizer bunny that keeps going and going on sexual tension and frustration alone... I LOVE IT!! It makes me laugh in hysterics while trying not to choke on my Chocolate-peanut butter pecan carmel cookies... I loves it a lot... Hope you are having happy writings... lol Chao chickie! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 07, 2008 19:02 EDT Comment/Review: Another fabulous update!!! I am so hooked on this story and I LOVE the way it is written. You have added so much detail and have developed the characters so well that I simply can not believe that people would criticize you for it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: eloquent dreams On: April 07, 2008 18:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OHMAHGOODNESS. you're amazing. that was probably my favorite chapter. I LOVE LOVE LOVE VAMPIRES! they're so sexyily mysterious.. lol. i was squealing so loudly the entire time haha. i can't wait to see an update from you! keep up the awesomeness!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 16:06 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! It would seriously make my day if Sesshoumaru was real and he really did dress up as a vampire! Two of my fav things vamps and Sesshou! God, is it possible to be a little jealous of an anime character in a fanfiction? lol. In your story I will admit Kagome is one lucky gal! Okay stop ceira...breathe...in...and out lol =D. I absolutely adore this chapter (can't you tell). Oh and take your time. I love the feeling of anticipation for the next update so don't listen to those other reviewers. Later for now ^_^
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 12:08 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the story so much. And you know what, I love the past chapters. Especially the one about the Halloween dance. I'm glad your not getting discouraged. Don't listen tot hose party poopers.lol.
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Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 09:44 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: nice chapter, thanks for the update. I'm sorry about the rude reviews, but as always there are the few who are unhappy and tend to bring others down with them. I liked the halloween scene too bad Sesshomaru didn't tell her who he was, but he was insecure so it's understandable. SO I really liked the chapter and can't wait for the next one. But you don't have to rush it, this story is worth the wait. Til your next update, ja!
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Reviewed By: just me On: April 07, 2008 02:52 EDT Comment/Review: i don't care what anyone else says, your story is spellbinding. i enjoy the glimpses into the past, and i think it helps to build the foundation of who the characters are, as well as understanding their points of view. keep up the good work. i love your story. don't ever let anyone tell you that you're not doing a good job. you're not writing for those people. there are plenty of fics out there that jump right into the hentai, and quite frankly, that makes the story a little less enjoyable. the buildup and anticipation is the best part of any romance...
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Reviewed By: SexyLips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:56 EDT Comment/Review: YA LISTIN TO THE LADY, if we knew what we were doing, then why are we reading??? Personally i didnt like the past present at first, but know its like OOOOOO ok so thats were that came from, its like the beggining of a story and the end intertwined and its cool and i love her and everyone else needs to shut up and if you dont like me saying it yall can kiss my furry cheeks, i love you ssm, you are da bomb i love all your storys, yes i am accious like all the others and miss the very quick updating, but hey we all have shit we gotta do, so keep up the good work and have fun, cant wait for the next update on all your storys.
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Reviewed By: Suriko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:52 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm absolutely entranced by this fanfic. I will admit I am one of the people who looks in the hentai and X rating section for the smut scenes, but there always a few that manage to get completely interested even without those scenes. I find both this Fic and What Your Eyes Do to Me exremely enjoyable to read. I also am personally not a fan of most inuyasha fics because I believe that they are too overdone. I can't wait until the next update, no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: sjdae On: April 07, 2008 01:19 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hello. omg i love the way u are writing the story i love how u mix the past with the prsent. i love the story. i completly understand why u r not updating very fast but to all the other people that complain they can just f**k off. u have a life and u need to live it to the fullest. well talk to u later ash
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Title: Not logged in bookwormloverjen Reviewed By: bwlj On: April 07, 2008 00:53 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I for one love the story, past chapters and everything in between. At first it was confusing, but now I love it, And please continue when you can! Life doesn't take a time off for things, as it should. So when you can update its cool with me, I enjoy reading and rereading the past chapters to pass my spare time. I love the story again!!
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Reviewed By: sovereigntystraticigalyplacedsonoonecanseemeintheclassroom On: April 06, 2008 20:22 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wonderfull... (trying not to squeal!)
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:58 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is maddening the way you have set up this story, however, it is delightfully maddening! It leaves the reader wanting more. Ignore the sods who are telling you to write more or update quicker. Ignore the idiots who dislike your previous chapters. Ignore the morons who want you to get on with it. You are doing just fine the way you are. This is a great story and the set up is perfect.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:40 EDT Comment/Review: I have to say that I just enjoy all of the stories that you write. They are just so detailed, the characters and plot. All I can say is that I just hope you never get the urge to just drop a story, they are just way to good!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:35 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sessy as a vampire: HAWTTTTTT!!!!! Just the visual in that caption was awesome!!! And I think his slighty (although not THAT slight)stalker-ish behavior is cute, but then I think HE'S cute, lol. I LOVED this chapter. Is Shippo's chapter coming the chapter after the next? OOOOOOHHHHH!! I can't wait!! But I'll sit on my hands until you're able to update. No rush, we all have our regular lives to live!
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