| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:41 EDT
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I'm sorry that you're sick. updates aren't as important as your health so dont update sleep, drink lot's of juice and sleep some more (well as much as possible with a 5 year old)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshoumaru follows her to school. :] I hope that you get better soon! It's probably best to have lots of bed rest while you're like this - phenomena can kill people if they're not careful! :[
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:20 EDT
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omfg please update soon i wonder what fluffy-sama (aka sessy) went to go do!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
giggle* ~sessh- my bit is much worse than my bark. ~tba- and i bet if u were there they wouldnt have lived. ~sessh- they'd be in the ER ~tba- smirk* ~sessh- wat? ~ba-giggle* ~sessh-wat? ~tba-leaves room laughing* ~sessh-damn those stupid boys and their stupid poem. i cant even get tba to talk. update soon while i try to regain wats left of my dignity. bye. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so cute. I can't wait for them to get together and for Kagome to find out exactly what Sesshoumaru was thinking everytime he seemed aloof. Good job and good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was right he is going to his room to "jack it off." Sesshomaru could probably throw him quite far...
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This story just keeps getting better n better. that last paragraph actually made me cry. poor sessy!!! awwww i would give u a 20/10 if i could. i seriously cant wait for the next chapter!!! gosh... its sooo good!!!!!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story just gets better with every chapter...I sure wish that you would update sooner, but it's cool. I'll be checking my email everyday to find out when you update:D
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 23:02 EDT
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Again, I love this story! I especially love how Sesshomaru keeps doing things anonymously! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru... It's such a shame that they have to suffer in silence for so long. At least Sesshomaru has material proof in his attraction to Kagome (if she doesn't believe him once he admits the length of time he's been in love with her). With any hope, that'll be very soon. Well, congrats on another great chapter. *gives you a cookie* I'm looking forward to the next chapter where we'll hopefully see the end of the skit trip and be back in the present next chapter for some Sess-Kag relationship progression. ^^
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that's so sweet! I hope Sesshoumaru can show her that he was the one who bought the barrettes. Does she know that they're real? I love this story so much, I can't wait for my favorite part next time: the present day chapters! :]
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 13:47 EDT
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This chapter is angst at its best. LOVED IT!!!! Update when you can!!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixFalling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, this chapter just blew me away. I can't wait for more. You are so good. :)
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so agree w/the InuSesshou...he's in for one long ride. Great story! I was absolutely thrilled when the guys agreeded to help InuSesshou out. Oh *sighs* they danced and he revealed himself to her. Yay! Here's to getting to sleep with a big fluffy not to mention soft puppy! ^_^
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: May 02, 2008 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't explain how much your story seems to reach me. It pulls at my heart and I'm glued to the screen when I read it. I wait patiently everyday to see if you've been able to update. I'd seriously wait a whole year if I had to, to finish this story. It's really wonderful. I scored you 10 in style because your story flows nicely in and out of the present and the past. Youre spelling and grammar got 10, because unlike some stories I've never had to pause to reread something that was an error. Your story is highly original and makes me smile. As for enjoying it, I couldn't love it more. I wait patiently for human Sess to catch up with InuSess and I feel the tension right along with the characters. I'm giving you an overall 10 because a story should draw you in and make you a part of it in some way. Your story has done that for me. I can't wait for more. Thank you for your story. Patiently Waiting, puppypal27
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