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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 04:09 EDT
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ok so now i'm a little confused is the prom thing a long memory? because at last check in the story Kagome lives with the guys sorta as she was evicted from her place. Plus she knows about sesh liking her and he knows that she is interested inhim so he wouldn't be thinking she doesn't even know i exist at this point if the prom thing is a current event and not a memory just looking for some clarification
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh and i forgot to rate so here it is... i would put an 11 or 12 on the enjoyment factor but i couldnt find that option...lol
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 21:19 EDT
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OMG!!! i am in love with this story!!! iread a couple chapters every night and i have finally finished reading wht you have written...i am enjoying this story so much i cant even tell you! i agree with you and i think the back stories just add to the depth of the characters and their personalities! i really hope your father (in law??) finds a job soon! and i will pray that your husband gets better soon, along with your sinusiitis (is that really a word?)! i think your daughter must have the best english teacher ever if you are home schooling her!! good luck with everything and i cant wait for the next installment of 'the syndrome'!!!!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! Another excellent chapter, I love to see the blossoming relationship between those two!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 08:36 EDT
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i love it i love it i love it! please please please update soon. i love the Kagome and sesshomaru parts! i cant wait to find out what happens next i hope they kiss soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 18:46 EDT
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Sorry I haven't been reviewing. Oh wow, I didn't realize how much it would hurt Sesshoumaru for Kagome to walk away from his presence, and I'm so glad she wasn't mad at him. It was good that he was honest with her, though I'm glad he didn't have to fess up to what he did while looking at her pictures on the computer. Heh, Inu thinks she's taking a dog out for a walk when it's really Sesshoumaru. I'm worried what will happen when the two see each other. I hope Sesshoumaru somehow manages to see the error in his view of Inuyasha. Their little trip to the park has been cute. I hope they have a good time before having to go back and face the others. I'm so glad she finally knows that it was Sesshoumaru who was the vampire. That was great! ^_^ Thanks for updating. Snow
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Reviewed By: rowdyjaner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 16:35 EDT
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Wow! I love this story so much! I can't tell you how happy I am that you are working on it againg. It is such a good story! Thank you.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: June 27, 2009 15:32 EDT
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Two words are all I need to say: Thank You!!! Can't wait for more!!! (well okay that's 6 but whatever haha)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 15:09 EDT
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its adorable! you always know just what to say, to make me happy... and now for a flash back chapter, which builds the suspense just that much more, before we get to another current chapter... please dont take so long this time!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 14:27 EDT
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yay! finally they're getting things worked out.and poor yasha's not even gonna have a clue.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 03:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
big lols!!1 fantastic chapter!!!! The sleepy girl in question snorted a laugh into her coffee, barely escaping getting it all down the front of her, and shot Bank a glare. "I wouldn't go that far," she said before giving his arm a halfhearted smack. "And my coffee is not sludge!" "Sure, Babe. Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it the girl who's supposed to be all excited about going to every single store trying on dresses while the guy drags his feet and complains?" Kagome laughed. "That's an easy one. Jak is the bitch in our relationship." Her deadpan delivery had both brothers gasping for breath, everyone in the car lucky they'd been stopped at a red light at the moment. "I know, I know," Bankotsu nodded, turning the car towards their intended destination. He pulled up alongside the curb and got out to open Kagome's door before she could blink. "You do have everything? Didn't forget your wallet?" he asked as Jak climbed out of the back. "I've got it. I am the older brother here. You always seem to forget that," Jak said, faking annoyance. "And you seem to forget that I'm the responsible brother, and the one usually responsible for the precious package I'm entrusting you with today." Jak stood at attention and mockingly saluted Bankotsu. "I've got it under control, Sir! The package will be returned safely as promised, Sir."
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 00:49 EDT
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Yayy! You updated! I love this story so very much and I hope you can finish this and SWTPF!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 22:45 EDT
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you... You don't know how happy I am that you updated... When I commented last night, I didn't expect an update on this story for alteast another month. So you can just imagine my delight when there is an update waiting for me after a long day at work. Fantastic chapter, the flashback chapters really arn't my favorite, honestly, but they are important, and very well written so kudos all around! And because I'm so happy that you actually did update, I won't pester you to do so again... Soon...
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 07:20 EDT
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I gave up on this story once before... But I found it again and its just as amazinf as i remember... So I'll favorite it once more and hope that it doesn't take years to finish...
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Title: Monk Meets Miko Ch. 12
Reviewed By: flower28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so entertaining! I'm very curious to see what happens with Sesshoumaru as well, it's torture to not skim ahead. Kudos! After reading your last chapter, though, I would like to point something out, if you don't mind. It is my experience that children the age of 10 are not as socially advanced as your 10 year old Kagome and Bankotsu. All the 10 year olds I know are clumsy, silly, and just not mature enough for the interactions you have them displaying. These 10 year old children were interacting and thinking more along the lines of an early teenager. Maybe their culture has them more advanced? Anyway, I really like your story. :)
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