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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:15 EST
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Cute! Crayon Kagome-chan! I love the little bit about her hanging upside down on the swing. That is so perfectly kid-dom. I like the light-hearted feel of this story, and the simple sweetness of the two best friends. Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter can't wait for the next one to come out. Can you plz tell me when the next chapters are coming out my E-mail address is phantomphan101@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:40 EST
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I love it! I'm glad you're working on another story because now I get to read two stories by my favorite fan fiction writer! I think it's really cool that Bankotsu is in the group and I'm kinda wondering where the other six are... do they exist in the story? Are they bad guys? Bankotsu seems decent so far... I kinda like when Jakotsu is a good guy. I wonder if Inuyasha is going to be a dumbass again about Kikyou... I have he doesn't catch anything from her... ew. I really want to know who the other two "witches" are. Is Sango one of the tormentors? If I had to guess I would guess that one of the would have to be Kagura... and maybe one could be Ayame. I don't think it would be possible for Rin to be mean... then there are always the trio of girls from "Kagome's time" (I know the time thing is n/a since this is AU)... As usual you have me wishing for the next chapter as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 02:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BTW, i am sooo craving chinese take out now. =P
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO! you've started another story! ^__^ Im super happy now, you have no idea! cant wait for the next chapter....=) c ya!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 14:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I still like your writing and this story is no exception. Interesting beginning. I can only guess what is going to happen next.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: January 17, 2008 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just reading the first chapter got be interested. I wonder what is going to happen next. I do wonder why the story is called that but I guess I'll learn about it later. Ohh I just can't wait to see what chapter 2 brings. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice laying of groundwork. Ready for chapter 2.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, this caught my interest right away. So Kikyo is one roomie, I wonder who the others are? Hope to see another one soon.
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