| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:19 EST
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can't wait till teh next one comes out
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:17 EST
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I like the lighter feel to this story. Poor Sesshoumaru, he's spending all his time wanking. LOL... it's only a matter of time before he gets caught... LOL Seriously, though, you nailed the essence of a bad date dead on, the girl being over zealous, the guy recoiling from the girl, the girl thinking it's her fault. So high school and well, it was high school. (grin) From your description of the girl, it's really no wonder his poor... uh... member uh... retreated for the night. This is a fun story. :) Looking forward to seeing it develop.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How sad for that girl... too bad Sesshy was mean to her. Kagome and the guys remind me a lot of what it was like to have a bunch of guy-friends back when I had them before I moved... good memories... I've actually had that spinning experience myself... my mom had a hair salon next to our residence and... you know, the styling chairs spin... hehe
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 01:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! Poor Sesshy! Hehe, I can't imagine how disappointed the girls who nearly got a taste of him were when he couldn't preform. Sesshoumaru should get a doorstop until he gets Kagome so he doesn't have to get his drywall fixed repeatedly... I kind of doubt that he will fix it himself... the mental image of him doing so is quite entertaining. I would burn off that stuff too if I was Kagome.. well, I would just throw it out because I wouldn't want to be inhaling the burnt remains... ick
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH HELL YEAH!!! Love the hentai side of you.. this is a great story.. Yeah can't wait till we find out where Kags wakes up at in Banks bed or Sesshy's. OH yeah, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 22, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.... I just love it! Sesshie is having a HARD time...... ^.~ I am really loving this new hentai side of you Sunset Miko... ^^ You are joing the dark side.... *mewahahahaha..... mewahahahhahaha.* I can only wait to see what interesting predicaments you will have these two in. Maybe something to do with Kags waking up and somehow she ended up in Sess's bed and not Bank's... ooo...ooo.oooo..... or even better.... *cue grin*.. Sess could be in the shower and she could stumble into the bathroom just as he is fantasizing about her..... The possibilites you have opened up are limitless. *sighs* I have never laughed so hard in my life... Sess coming down stairs with an unfinished job....lol... IT is purely evil *grin* I love it!!! kepp it coming... This is way too much fun....lol... Chao Chickie! InuPriestess
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Title: Giggle
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Giggle Lady, the things you think of! Never in a zillion years would I have envisioned Fluffy beating off to Kagome's MySpace page. As disturbing as that visual actually is, I found it highly entertaining. It's actually kind of nice to see Sesshoumaru stick his foot in his mouth ( snigger.. or his hand in his pants...snort...) instead of Kagome feasting on her own foot as is usually the case. Okay, be honest, how many dp films did you have to watch to come up with that party? You did a great job describing the state of affairs at Kagome's house, paying attention to details such as slimy bits dripping from the wall in the stairwell, the pedestal sink taking abuse, the cracked picture frames, and the plentiful supply of pills and spills. ROTFL! Pulling it together for a moment, but with a big smile Seriously, I enjoyed this chapter. snort Thank you so much. I needed a good laugh, and am totally going to read this chapter again. Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 02:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic, please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: future author On: January 20, 2008 22:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Great story. I really enjoyed reading the chapters you have out so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Umm, i don't know if it was already made obvious or was hinted at, but is this a Sess/Kag or Inu/Kag. I just wanted to know the pairing. Great story so far. Update as soon as you're able. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh little Bankotsu and Kagome! How cute! That was such a great chapter, I loved how you actually made them intelligent while still being little kids. Nicely done! Now I'm curious as to how they got involved with the rest of the group. I hope you update the next chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 20, 2008 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey chickie! I love this new story! Did you mean that every odd chapter would be present and every even chapter would be in the past? You said odd for both.. *giggle*. I really can't wait to see what you are going to do with this story... is it going to be a sess/kag? Or are you going to get phunky with it and include a few inu/kag, bankotsu/kag? She seems pretty comfy-cozy with her guy friends.... hmmm... *lets the ideas roll through her head* hehe. It presents itself as an intriguing idea...! happy writings and i hope you write more on this (at your own pace of course) You have my full attention. Hail to the queen of fanfiction (psst... that would be you by the way) chao chickie! InuPriestess ~.~
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. MMMM *Drools* another Sesshy story gotta love them. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 19, 2008 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! a new story. *hugs SunsetMiko until she turns blue* I am so happy! we all love you! keep writing and I would like to be added to your email list for this story... firefly12121 @ yahoo .ca (remove spaces) happy writings. Chao chickie!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's cool how your going to do even chapters in their childhood instead of flashbacks! I never have liked flashbacks that much because they have a tendency to get stuck right were I don't want them and then they go on for too long... I don't really mind them that much, but sometimes there are just too many of them and it breks up the story... so I really like that you're doing it this way. I think it's a brilliant idea! That's so sweet how Kagome and Bankotsu became friends. Are you ever going to explain about his demon marking? I have always wondered how the hell they got those things... Jakotsu's markings would be so much more obvious too... school must have been quite un-fun for him. I'm so glad you put this chapter out now! this is such a cool story. I bet it turns out to be the best AU ever! =D
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:17 EST
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*giggles* oh I like this. and how you pulled Bank and Kagome together was great! That was a good way to explain how Bankotsu got to be so hyper-protective of her. I look forward to the next few chapters to see where this goes. DD
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