| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude.. this is CRUEL!!! I have to go to school now so I will give you a proper review later!! great chapter!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 15:30 EDT
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thank you for updating this story is so very good. i cant wait to see them at the prom in two chapters, or for jak to realize that he likes guys :)
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Reviewed By: MangoAikoTse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love the story!!!! I hope you will continue the story!
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love the story. its really really good.
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Reviewed By: Jaclyn On: February 08, 2009 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to comment to mention how much I loved reading your story The Syndrome. I also wanted to say how much I HOPE you continue writing your story I would very much LOVE to finish it.
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 16:14 EST
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Every time I read it, this story gets better and better. I do hope one day that you will finish it. Either way, keep up the wonderful writing!
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: January 06, 2009 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there another chapter? I'm hooked on this story, and all of you work!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 04:39 EST
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please update this soon, i love this story.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, I've read it several times over and i just can't wait for the next update. when are you gonna add the next chapter??
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA!! Its been a while since you last updated... 4 months? I hope your going to continue, and Ive been wondering if you have this posted anywhere else. You know, if you update it anywhere else before here.. i dont want to wait much longer. im impatient i know. but its really good and i want to know when they get together.
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Title: hey you!
Reviewed By: mrskouga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 10:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you!!! you haven't updated in months!!! hurry up plzi really like this fanfic!!!!
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Reviewed By: golden_lily On: September 20, 2008 13:02 EDT
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I love this story and have been followig it almost since it started... But why so long between updates??? Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 22:10 EDT
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Hm, I thought I'd reviewed. I do know you've been busy, but that doesn't mean I shouldn't let you know how the chapter came across to me. It might help you with the next chapter. You have no idea how many times I've tried to write this review. It's difficult to do it without believing that I might hurt your feelings or sound condescending, but here goes. I think that you may have lost touch with your characterization of Kagome. Kagome is forgiving and protective, yet she ran roughshod over her friends when she became angry. Her feelings about leeching are no excuse. She gave friends' motivations and feelings no consideration at all. Then, though the guys believed that she would do anything to save Sesshoumaru, and you led us to believe them, she seems all to willing to let Sess die if he's an asshole when he changes forms. So, that was a disappointment. I would expect her to have her doubts, but it sounded as though she would be more than willing to let him die if he didn't please her, which makes her sound selfish, spoiled, and shallow. Perhaps more focus on what she might plan to do to help their relationship/situation would have dispelled that impression. As it is, she's leaving all the work to Sesshoumaru and discounting herself as part of the equation. She even doubts her feelings when she has always been shown to have faith in them, i.e., her decisions trust in her feelings that her friends were fated to be her friends. *thinks* Maybe the focus on Sesshoumaru has slighted insight into Kagome's thoughts and feelings. I'm not sure. Right now, I see her as a spoiled brat, even with the petting. So, that's the impression that the chapter gave me. I want to slap her. On to other things. Aw, we got to see Sess being loving toward her. That was sweet. Humph! Sesshoumaru's beast sure is keeping him on a tight leash. I'm sure you have your reasons though. Poor guy, having to use the yard as bathroom facilities. I feel sorry for him. You must really hate Kouga. *snicker* You never give him a break. Nevertheless, in this fic, he's a great antagonist and he deserved what he got from Sesshoumaru. Heheh. I love Jak. He's such a perverted cutie. The rare scenes with Sesshoumaru wooing Kagome as a vampire, are very hot, as was the kissing scene when his beast freed him for a few minutes. I was in love with Inuyasha's character until he pulled that stunt with Sesshoumaru. That was a Naraku style move. I don't trust him very much now, nor do I like him. Motivated by insecurity or not, he can join Naraku in hell for all I care. I love Inupapa's character. He's a riot. He must trust Kagome an awful lot because he doesn't seem to be fretting too much about Sesshoumaru. I'm a parent and would be worried sick, regardless of the fact that my child was responsible for his mess. I would be constantly calling to check up on him. Then again, I'm a worry wart when it comes to my kids. Despite my whining, I love this story and can't wait to see what your next move will be. You have a talent for keeping me on pins and needles. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my gosh I have followed this story for Fanlib.com to A Single Spark.com to Fanfiction.net and then here I just couldn't let go of this story its just so unique and so in and out of character. Cause Sessh won't show his feelings (in character) but there's something that can actually kill Sessh (out character) But of course the only thing that can kill him is within him (in character) but he loves a human Kagome at that, the women who is supposiblly Inu's wench. (out character). But even with the in, out, of character its is just so awesome. I like long stories but not many long stories can keep my attention. Stories longer than 15 chapters get my attention but can't keep it but I never lost interest in this story, I was on here every day watching fr new updates. Well once again your story is awesome and like ever person before me has said Continue very very very very soon please.
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Title: Love it...
Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have recently gotten back interested in Inuyasha fanfiction. I stopped because I could not find many good Sess/Kag (my favorite pairing) stories anymore. This one has definitely dragged me back! I love your originality, and the story just gets better and better! I am officially a fan of yours, so as always, update when you find the time. I'll be waiting. ^_^
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