| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 17:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nothing on V's brother and sister... (I was JUST rereading the chapter that she mentions that she has them) (I've reread all the Purity stories again except for part of this one and the shorts (I've read the Fairy Tales again its very cute... I love the part about speaking Bastard (English)...) Evan was adorable (as almost always...) Evan 1, Lawyer 0;
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Title: Clause or Claws?
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 17:24 PST
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It's a "No Wilber" Clause, oh Lord, I can't stop laughing. Is there anything H-Even doesn't think of? Oh Man, my ribs hurt.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 16:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is a few decades into the future, but, damn, that's a lot of money! And I love that Evan put that little clause in the contract. Very sneaky of him, but I don't blame him. It's V's money, and she shouldn't give it to anyone. And :snort: mental masterbation!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 20:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...your story is amazing!! I've never read a story quite like this one! Your writing is awesome...and the characters are so animated and intriguing. I can't wait to read more of the chapters!! Please update soon... and keep up the amazing work:D:D
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Reviewed By: raebeyy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 14:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cannot wait for the action ta happen bw evan and valerie ! i can just feel it building up!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 18:15 PST
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Number 700 review? I was hoping eventually to find out about what happened that Valerie doesn't talk about her family, and now that the subject's brought up, I almost don't want to know. Yet, I have a streak of morbid curiosity that says, yes, I do want to know. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 21:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they mooned New York... Lovely chapter... know I REALLY want to know what happened to V's Parents... I guess you'll tell us when your good and ready...
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 17:45 PST
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aw I hope V opens up about her past soon! it'll make her and evan bond more. update soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, now we're getting somewhere. I wonder what she means by that. She has a little sister, so I wonder if they were both 'lost', or if it was just V. Many, many questions. I also wonder about the youkai talk that has to come up sooner or later. Will she find out on her own, or will he have to sit her down and tell her. I also wonder if her reaction will be better than Nez's. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 07:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Evan got to say good bye. I doesn't matter how you do it but it's important that you do otherwise things will always feel unfinished.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 05:15 PST
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Ohhh miii gggg!! V's past now maybeh?! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 03:37 PST
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Are we finslly going to delve into THE MYSTERIOUS PAST OF VAL? Oh, but I guess we were right about the ritual... so funny, but so sad...
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 00:28 PST
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bah ha! the panties thing was funny drunk V is a funny V
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 23:24 PST
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That was really engaging. Lol, loved the mooning and the revelation at the end. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 23:04 PST
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Oh that was a good chapter! I hope that tribute helped Evan say goodbye! That's really sad at the end though with Valerie...I wonder if she'll dig in deeper about that anytime soon!
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