| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 10:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I love you more than bunnies"? Awwww! That's officially my favourite love line now... the angsty-fluff between Evana dn Val was beautiful, too. I don't know if I've rated this story yet, so here you go!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez! I need a happy chapter, I think. You keep making me cry. lol. Great chapter. And V's starting to see that maybe he could be good to her - for her. She really doesn't need to ditch Mayvin. I'm guessing the money is for her sister. That was very nice of her. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 08:20 PST
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I have had two thoughts about this story. 1. Dieter was actually driving and Evan was covering for him so he wouldn't go to jail/prison. 2. You know how there are drawings of people with a devil and angel on each shoulder. With Evan I always picture two devils just one is better dressed HAHA
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 06:47 PST
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That was beautiful, especially toward the end. It makes you wonder, will the facade of Zel Roka fade out over time; will the artist Evan Zelig once more make an appearance? Or is this simply a one-time musical showing of the real Evan, without the stage face? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 05:16 PST
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They are so meant for each other it's sad. Poor Evan must suck to love a woman who is engaged.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 03:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again I'm so close to tears. This was a lovely hapter darlin' emotionally stunning.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 03:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right on time!!! I'm now a uni student. I have finished my first day and will tomorrow be going too... Pressing her hand against her heart, she pressed her lips together as she stared at her favourite image. He was holding himself above her, his arms taut, strained. There wasn't a doubt in the world that the man was bare-assed naked in it since his profile was entirely visible, including the length of his very erect penis, but that wasn't what had caught her attention. I hope her Fiancé doesnt find out about that picture...
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Title: Chapter 49: Excellent song choice, Sue! I LOVE 'Paralyzer'!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 13:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, I love to see Evan catering to V so uber domestic-like after a good cuddle but, in the midst of all that fluff, Evan is just...so horny. Poor deprived dude WOULD just read that article about V's undies and get a good chuckle but then--then--he sees the pics--the line that made me choke on a honey roasted peanut: `Fu-u-u-u-uck . . . I'm gonna come . . .' he half whined, reaching down, idly rubbing his burgeoning boner. Mental masturbation, indeed. I think it was very telling that V piked the photo of her and Evan lying together all contented-looking. Are we reaching subconciously, V? I think yes! And, $300,000? Well, SHIT! I'd probably collapse from shock! Go, V! You're quite a looker! And Marvin gets none, huh? Evan, you're so open...and possessive--a TRUE Izayoi/Zelig!
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Title: Chapter 48: From LOL to pouting in 1.7 seconds...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 13:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I mentioned lately how much I love Maddy ie and V scenes, Sue? Cuz I SO do...yes indeedy! I nearly choked when V lost her panties so the further emancipation of the undies sans Maddie was CLASSIC! So, we get to see a tad bit more of her life via the parental units. I just wanted to cuddle her there.V's past...I've got a feeling I'm gonna be able to relate to her a LOT.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 22:06 PST
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Yeah, that is a lot of zeros. With more to come! Heck, V would probably try to retire with just the royalties, with how reserved she is about money! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 19:34 PST
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aw cute. im ready to get into the deep stuff though with V and Zel. update soon
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Title: WOW... five zeros huh?
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 13:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with V. That is a devil of a lot of money. I think I might wanna go find me a hot superhuman who's alter ego happens to be a world-renowned rockstar. Hmm... intriguing indeed! :P It's cute how they're getting closer to each other. I can't wait for more... intimacy. haha But it's good to see Evan getting somewhat back to his normal self. :D
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 09:35 PST
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Yeah, I thnk that many zeroes would cool me off pretty fast, too...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie - I was wondering when those pics would pop up again :) I wonder what V wants to spend her money on :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 21:06 PST
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.____. I, as a photographer, hope I never have to pay a model that much monnies to pose for me .___. V is so damn cute with Evan, I love how she is totally unfazed by sleeping with another man other than her fiance, just because it's him. She has to get a clue XD shes basically his girlfriend the way they act together, and we haven't seen *snortchuckle* 'Edwin' in a while - I suspect where ever he is off to; hes got a wife and 4 kids xD
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