| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 15:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, there was no V in this chapter...well, she was mentioned, so I guess that counts. I dont think she would be too happy if she found out what Evan was thinking about her, though. (Or maybe she would be and just wouldn't admit it.)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I heart Evan too...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAAAA ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I hate school, they f*cked up my computer realy badly... and now we are still trying to get all the programs back onto it...) I heart my internet...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 12:57 PST
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Wow Evan, lol, poor Bone, having to sit there watching Evan do his thing. So the tour is coming up I take it, can't wait to see Valerie go with him on it :D!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 11:05 PST
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I think V would definately be hacking SOEMTHING off if she ever found out about that elevator conversation.... more than just "the boys"...
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 09:43 PST
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Glad you liked the devil comment. It is because it seems like in most of the purity stories the youkai is "the voice of reason" but Evan's youkai is as bent as he is.... Poor Bone having to watch that... but I thought he would be use to it by now.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 07:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o Evan...is so bad he's good. Just the right amount of bad boy. Yum...okay, I'll stop drooling now. Thanks for the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 07:26 PST
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Lollll! Scratch n sniff? Jerking off in an elevator? In front of people?! Lmaoo I luv Evan he's so wicked. I dig it I really do. Hehe lol I wonder what that says about me? :-D Oh well..update soon!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 04:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan's a sexual deviant and we all love it! I wonder what V will have to say about it :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 16:10 PST
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That's a pretty sad song Evan wrote at the end! I liked how Valerie just knew where to find him too! I wonder what's this thing she's saving up for though.
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 20:07 PST
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and here i thought i was passed the tears, but reading those song lyrics made more tears pour down my face. sue, you are and always will be the most gifted writer i have ever read..and being as i have over 2k in books, i mean what i say, i will never ever, get sick of reading your fics, NEVER. you are an amazing person i have had the honor of knowning. thank you for the gift of your writing.
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Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. I was rereading Phantasm, with Bas and Sydnie, and I couldn't help but wonder if Bas and evan would ever salvage their relationship. As always, I cannot wait until the next chapter. You will hear from me then. :D
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... Evan's finally getting it out huh? I think he needs to, and singing is definitely a good way to do that. Nothing to me, besides maybe words can express feelings the way a song or a melody can. I love how he calls her "baby". It just makes them so much cuter together. I think Valerie is starting to realize that she does feel something for him. I almost lost a friend over the last week, so this chapter and this story is really starting to hit home...but that is what makes your stories so remarkable. I can't wait for the next chapter. this was truly amazing. ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 14:17 PST
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XD I sometimes tell my boyfriend I love him like Jet Turbines XD, or a potato masher etc. but never said like bunnies lol. I love how V is just drawn to Evan, I have a feeling she is starting to realize feelings she doesn't really want to have, but really she does...sorta thing, but knowing Sue's stories :P V is going to do the backstroke down de Nile. It still bothers me that she still says she loves Pinkle, she never sees the guy, and when they interact it doesn't feel normal, like they seem to kind of act business-like together if you will. Admittedly I am biased to Evan, but V knows the guy, probably better than she knows Pinkle, and shes only been with Evan for a few months. She is comfortable with Evan, understands him better than either of them think...sometimes XD. And Evan loves her DX really, I just wanna get rid of the Pinkle XD
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 13:23 PST
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Bunnies... I have to wonder how he came up with that line. Music's always been Evans escape, and I'm not surprised that he's recording these raw moments. He's not just the hard-core rocker that everyone thinks he is. Keep up the good work, dark
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