| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 12:54 PST
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No no no! Zere are ways! Go to your public library--they ususally have computers you can use to access the internet! I've thought about it, too--cut down on groceries, or do without the phone/cable/internet package. Food is overrated. In the meantime, I'm praying things will turn around--for all of us!!!! Keep on writing! (And by writing I mean posting!)
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 10:35 PST
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Aaahhh... sounds liek Evan's helping Val to work through her issues, just a little. He's not cuasing her to be perma-blushing anymore, either, so i guess she must be pretty used to him, right? Come on, Val, you know you love him... Sorry to hear about your recession difficulties. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 09:48 PST
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ooo the anticipation is killing me, but it's the one thing that i know i'll miss once evan and valerie get their happily ever after. thanks for the update and rock on SOUTH!!!!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 06:01 PST
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This was a good chapter. The more I see them grow closer, the more I wonder who it will be that makes the first move. Hopefully you and your family will make it through this recession peaceably. May fortune smile upon your husband.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 05:55 PST
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"I'm a lawyer. Lawyers don't dance." - that made me lol for real xD as did Even bringing up "Why were you in my bushes?" xD hilarious. V stealing an earring right out of Evan's ear was cute, gah! I just want them to finally be together ;___; but I know it will be worth the wait once they do/ D8 I hope your husbands work... works out .___.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 05:29 PST
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Oh no! I wish the best for your family, and I pray that your husband finds another job very soon.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 04:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie darlin' I loe the times when these two are just quietly sat together you learn so much more about them :) I'm sorry to hear about your husband - this recession really sucks. I hope it all gets sorted out soon. I shall wait patiently for your next chappie :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 00:15 PST
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I like all the stories Evan has from where he's been; it gives insight into how he value's other people's cultured! I hope things work out for you and your family in the financial means, Sue!
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 19:53 PST
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It took me two days but I finally read through up to the most recent chapter and I am overwhelmed by how addicted I am to your story. I have theories about the accident and I really hope that we get to here V's story (preferably told to Evan) and I can't wait to see her stand up to Marvin and tell him that what they have is sub par and not good enough. I'm in awe of the raw emotions that sweep over me throughout your story and were this an actual bound novel I know I wouldn't be able put it down. Thank you and can't wait for more. Something tells me I will need tissues in the future before all is said and done.
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Title: Chapter 51: D-Damn, Evan...feelin' the lack, huh?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 09:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...wow. Evan's a MESS! In the ELEVATOR, Evan? Why did that surprise me? And Bone...Dude's got quite a constitution, lemme tell ya. Then again, Bone's about as freaky as Evan is. Hell, re-reading this chapter (and, you KNOW me, Sue--of COURSE I re-read it...3 times...), he's surrounded by horndogs or folks so used to his rampant sexuality that it barely registers (Mike, you poor thing--ROFL!) Gawd, I almost feel sorry for V when they finally get to intimacy. Okay, that's a damned LIE--hell, I'd like to switch, honestly. Yeah, it's a fictional story, I know--don't care! Evan's my kind of youkai. And the Unca Bone part...that was really sweet. Makes me want to draw a fanart of the two of 'em horseplaying...and that elevator scene...hmmm, maybe...
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Title: Chapter 50: Get a little closer...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 08:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all, Sue, that song was jus touching! Is that a Sue Original cuz, if so, you've got skillz! And with the parts where Evan and V feel each other out just turn my stomach to jelly--so SWEET! Friends, V? Uh huh...sure. Well, you'll see soon enough. Evan's you baby daddy, honey! Great chappie!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 06:09 PST
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My two cents on V and Evan...She loves him, there's already proof enough of that with how she reacted when the shooting happened and she was left out of the loop. Evan's already recognized her as his mate, or something akin to it. Valerie's just afraid. It was mentioned earlier that she was with Marvin because he's 'safe'. So it stands to reason, that the only reason she isn't with Evan, is because she believes that to love is to be hurt. If Evan can find out where that belief stems from and help her move past it, maybe take her to see her family even, she'd let herself love him - truly love him. At least, that's how I see it.
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Title: Good God!!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 22:26 PST
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First, wonderful as per usual!! Second, I actually feel badly for Evan now (with regard to his love life... or lack there of). I can't wait for your next chapter. And may I say poor Bone I mean really no one needs to see your boss' junk. Personally I would be scared for life (then agian my boss isn't a uber-hot rock star/underwear model- hehehe). Anyway again wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 20:48 PST
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I love Evan XD The mama talk made me lol Gin could beat all their asses at once XD
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 17:02 PST
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I... almost don't want to know what Bone puts in his hip flasks. Keep up the good work, dark
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