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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 › » ] | Title: Chapter 53: **snort**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**falls on Sue's neck and weep for joy** LOVING the new OS, BELIEVE me, Sue. But I'd be lying my hentai arse off if I said I wasn't fienin' me some P9 (I was just being VERY patient...aw, hell, I'm lyin'! I MISSED EVAN!!!). But, you had things going on and, well... I get it. But onto the chapter. This was so damn funny! Oh, my forehead stings a little from smacking it too hard as I tried to stifle. In a library, as usual. And the chapter had MADDIE!!!!! HUZZAH!!!!! Oh that joke was so funnya dn V's JEALOUSLY--"I'm V! Me! One V-only one, and it's not her, it's me! Me! Valerie! You know-V!"--was help-me-LAWD funny! Love, love, LOVED this chappie, Sue! Thank ya and thank ya one mo'gain!!!!! **kisses Sue on the 4head**
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 21:52 PDT
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I would buy your purity stories...hell I read them all over and over again..it makes sense to pay you for it right? Honestly the only joy I find now seems to be in the stories I read. It helps to immerse myself in another world, away from my own problems. And to tell you the truth, you are probably one of my favorite authors, right up there with Jane Austen and Bram Stoker. You're style is definitely more modern...lol....but the way you bring your characters to life....the way you plan out 12 stories, and the way your plot just seems to flow; it just blows my mind. I look forward to your stories more so than sequels to some of my favorite books. So if there is any way we can help you keep this story going...let us know. I know there are more crazy fans who feel the same way as me. anywho this chapter was awesome and yet again it left me craving more. I'm just dying to read the chapter where V realizes she loves Evan so they can have some sort of happily ever after and I want to know her history. I have so many questions! you are well loved sueric and I will remain a devoted fan :) JA!!
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 12:36 PDT
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Oh, V... so very eay to manipulate... this video oughta be GOOD... :P
| Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg great chapter=D when i saw that there was an pdate i was sooo excited!!! lol this is probably the only fanfic i wait impatiently for for updates...its really goodXD i love ll your stories...oh and about how you said that you werent as motivated anymore to write the purity series because you couldnt make money off of it...couldnt all of your purity stories be considered your own original series? with the exception of the first one...because all of the characters are the characters that you created...all you would have to do is take out take out purity 1 with kagome and inuyasha, and you have 8 othere original stories...honestly, if you sold these...i wouldve have bought them for sureXD and im sure alot of people would as well...youre actually really popular over the internetXD so please dont give up on purity=D
| Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 06:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!! I almost wet myself laughing so hard. Brilliant!!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 04:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie darlin'. I hope the economy pics up to you shouldn't feel guilty about doing something you clearly enjoy so much. Can't wait to see V dance and Evan's reaction :)
| Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 17:18 PDT
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WHen I first saw that there was a new chappie I could hardly believe it. And then, it was GREAT! lol! I'm glad that you've decided to do your original story to help your family along and I know that all of your readers are just grateful for you to still be around. Thanks for the update, and I loved it ^-^
| Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 15:26 PDT
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Nice chappie. Glad to see you still writing, but don't mind you if you leave this story for a while. You should write what you want to and what feels right. Good luck with your original story!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 14:20 PDT
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I'd like to think it was brilliant! V in the video is going to be awesome, though Evan will probably be suffering after it! Hey, and don't feel bad about wanting to do something to help your family out! Their well being always comes first!
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 19:54 PDT
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http://ladydragontamer.deviantart.com/art/Blazing-Olivia-Zelig-119057162 Tadum! Fanart for joo. ^^ I hope you like!
| Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 09:43 PDT
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Could we maybe get a little love in this story? If it's not an inconvenience.
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 18:28 PST
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Gomen! I just didn't know if you were one of those authors who continued reading the reviews of stories you wrote a long time ago. I will be sure to remember that in the future but back to subterfuge...I liked the Christmas Story reference that was ingenious! also I'm sure all of us understand the economy situation, after all...we are all struggling to make ends meet. Good Luck and your family is in my prayers. Ja!
| Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 17:36 PST
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So Val's from the South. We do say 'yall' quite a bit down here, I guess. I suppose you just don't notice it that much when you grow up with it. Amazingly cute chapter, and the recession is indeed unfortunate. Do what you have to do, and we will patiently wait. :D
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 17:27 PST
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The situation that our economy is in is definitely unfortunate. I do hope that everything works out for you and your family. My family is struggling too, my mom just lost her job so I understand how it feels. But on a lighter note, this chapter was cute! Valerie took his earring, he serenades her with sexy songs and we find out that V was born in Kentucky. Ooh... very interesting indeed. Can't wait to hear more on her backstory. Keep up the fantastic work! I'll be awaiting your return anxiously! ~MSMND
| Title: Chapter 52: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 15:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter! Oh, she took his EARRING! Oh, HOLD me! That invisible pull is so endearing and slowly it's gathering those little lost parts in the both of them and cradling them in care. Somehow, the thought of a homeless kitten being taken in and adored comes to mind. Also, their personalities balance so well. I'm actually sighing here, Sue, like a lovesick sap. Gawd, that's how much I got drawn into this chapter. I LOVE her refering to him as ADHD, too--my thoughts EXACTLY! **choked snort** Oh, and those "leisurely thrown out" lyrics after the proclamation of his proud endowment to women--V handled that very well, actually--poor horny Evan. And, the ever-so-popular question to deflect every and all V protestations: "Why were you in the bushes?" Oh, someone give me a bag to breath INTO, that never ceases to get a good couple belly laughs or hearty chuckle out of me. Okay, maybe Im a damn hornball for saying it but...oh, hell, I'm gonna type it! I can't wait for their first KISS! (thought I was gonna go all HENTAI, didn'tcha, Sue? Go on, admit it. **nudgenudge**) Okay, so I'm thinking a bit more than smooching...on the lips...on the mouth...okay, nuff with that. NEwho, wonderful chapter indeed and about the unfortunate recession, my heart truly goes out to you and though it's not much, I hope my offering helped some. We'd miss you if you didn't come online sometimes. Can't wait till the next chapter but, of course, in your own time! God bless you and yours.
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