| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 11:43 PST
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Interesting form of meditation... I ahve to say i agree with Evan, mind. Val doesn't "get" Evan and Maddy's unique relationship, but that doesn't make it wrong.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 09:57 PST
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V is a really jealous girl lol she shouldnt try to make evan feel bad about everything and make him always seem like the bad guy. if i was evan that would just upset me. but i still want them to get together!!! lol update soon!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 06:09 PST
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I just wanted to take the time to tell you how wonderful of a writer you are. I'm kind of one of those girls who is a closet anime/fanfiction freak. My friends are those girls that everyone wanted to be in highschool and I've never let them see this side of me. In fact the only person who knows my secret obsession is my sister Erin. (who I cosplay with ^^) I guess the point of this obnoxiously long rambling is that ever since I found your stories, I actually read about them in PUBLIC and brag about you to my friends. They sometimes make fun of me but I don't care your stories make me giddy :D! (I used to bring my laptop to work just to check for your latest updates!) Anywho I'm re reading one of your non purity stories and your ability to come up with original plot, non OC characters, and phenomenal dialog just blows my mind. I wish I had the drive to finish my ideas out and keep my readers guessing. this last chapter about Evan made me love him even more. I just love how he can outsmart the super intelligent Vallerie
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 02:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 23:17 PST
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It really is Valerie refusing to look beyond her initial thoughts that's not letting things work out. And what plans does she have anyway? Afraid Marvin might pop in unexpectedly since he scedule was cleared of anything not pertaining to Evan in the first place. Or is she afraid that she might actually let herself feel what she already knows she feels. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! Four whole weeks of being on a US tour with the sexy Evan...What is wrong with V!? I would have jumped right on that! I wonder how Martin...um...Marvin will take the news. lol. Well crap. Now my chi is blocked. Excuse me while I get naked and try to find someone to unblock it. lol!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 22:41 PST
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Wow, I really hope V changes her mind about the tour, that would be really bad if Evan had to cancel it; not to mention how pissed Mike would be, but I'm sure that Evan would probably be just as mad, considering he loves what he does! I love Bitches and her chi, she's freaking awesome! I hope we get to see lots more of her in the future chapters, I'm sure we will though :D! That aside, how are you and your family doing, Sue? Hope everything is settling down!!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 09:46 PST
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Ah! I never got the email notification for a new chapter! Good thing I check MM every other day just in case!! Anywho.. I love Val's jealousy. And, awe.. she cares about Evan getting hurt.. how sweet!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 05:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome I loved this chappie - lot's of reflections :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 13:06 PST
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it is as it should be. The stalkee pays for the stalker's drinks/foods 8DDD I LOVE how he Always brings up the bushes thing on her lol, she always gets so flustered lol gah! If I haven't said it already I'll say it now.. I think Evan and V are my favorite Purity pairing so far lol
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 10:25 PST
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Ah-ha, Val's falling for Evan! Well, it's easy to understand, isn't it? I can't wait to see what she gets up to tonight... *mutters "free the fishies" with a stupid grin*
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 22:09 PST
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Evan's a bad boy in the public eye, and at home most of the time, but he's sweet. I like him...and V, I think she's good for him. You write so beautifully my dear. I hope this series keeps up for years, lol. It'd be quite the shame to lose an artist like you.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:55 PST
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Aw, I like Bone!!! I'm glad that we got to see just a little more of him and his character in this chapter! I hope you and your family are doing better; thank you for the update, Sue!
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:24 PST
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AH! Yay, another chapter! AH! lol, I sound like an overexcited fangirl...but really when I got the notification that Purity had been updated I could hardly believe my eyes! I've been waiting a long time for this. My life is complete...lol!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm wondering HOW long it will take for her to actually think "some thing is VERY, VERY weird with these people, other than the fact that they are rockstar/groupie/other... I was looking up on the internet about visual kei bands.. and they all look like girls... mostly... Evan is nothing like that is he???? (as long as he is meant to the voice that sell the tickets and CD's I dont really care.... but if it was all looks... I'd be very sad...)
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