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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 › » ] | Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another awesome chapter. Oh my gosh, that Evan! I can't believe he showed up dressed like that! And then what he said to the judge! It was hilarious! I like Evan, but out of all of the characters in your stories, Mamoruzen seems to have become my favorite! I've been reading your stories for four years and you are still my absolute favorite author. I love your stories and I look forward to what is yet to come. Since I haven't been able to read or review your stories in a VERY long time, I am very excited about finally getting the chance! It seems that whenever I read someone else's fanfic, I sit there thinking about yours instead! Thank you for writing another great chapter and thank you for writing such amazing stories!
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 18:59 PDT
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Some day really soon, Valerie's gonna snap at Evan and he's gonna get what he deserves... too bad he won't feel it as badly as a human would when she's done! Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor V! She just can't catch a break. And for some reason, I just knew that Evan wouldn't wear the suit she got for him. He is too funny. I'm with V. I really, really doubt the credibility of this so called 'gig'. I wonder what he's really up to and if it has anything to do with what he was planning eariler.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:21 PDT
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Poor V, Evan just loves making her skin crawl. Lol.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 13:35 PDT
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Great chapter! Keep up the excellent work and update soon please! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 13:01 PDT
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lol no underpants! Thats classic. I couldnt stop laughing this entrire chapter. it made my monday that much brighter. see you next chapter and keep up the great work
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 12:23 PDT
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V must be a Saint, I would have killed him by now.
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 10:54 PDT
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I love Evan's character. So care-free and happy compared to Valerie. I just cant wait to see Evans serious side. The one that Valerie had a quick glimpse of. I also cant wait to see what other mischief Evan and Valerie get into when together. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next chater to come out!
| Title: Chapter 11: For a head-slapping, helplessly guffawing, 'bout to pee your pants good time, folks...Chapter 11's your fix!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 09:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, more randomness from Evan to start my week off right! THANK YOU, Sue! Poor V...she's so stressed out and flumouxed (sp?) that Half of me is feeling her pain while the other half is chuckling helplessly. Evan is so incorrigable!! And, okay, when Evan spoke to the judge and I nearly knocked my eyebrows loose when I smacked my forehed (Oh, Evvie...) The lines are running through my head on LOOP, Sue: Evan shrugged off-handedly and lifted his feet to rest on the table. Valerie knocked them off a second later. * "I dunno, Your Judge-ness," he'd said in a slow drawl. "Probably for the same reason that my lawyer was crawling around in my bushes . . ." I just KNEW if he opened his mouth in trail, he'd be off the chain. Poor V...LOL! I can't BE-LIEVE she blurted out the underwear comment out loud! Almost got a citation for her temper. Watch it, V. Be good, Eva--oh, hell, let's keep it real...that's a shot in a million, huh? Well, no, he CAN be obedient--sometimes. I can't wait to see how the gig goes and V's next gripping session with Maddie--hell, Evan's next chat with Maddie, too! Hmmm, I wonder if Cain knows about the trial. Then again, with Mike on the case, I'd imagine so. Great chappie, Sue! I LMAO!
| Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 07:06 PDT
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Lol no he didn't rock the hugh heff getup! Ah yes he did! I absolutely adore him! More Evan I can wait. P.s. How do u pronounce nezumis real name Dierdre?
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 07:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe oh the fun!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 06:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor V he's a little hellion if there ever was one :)
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was hilarious!! An I found the last chapter damn near sweet as well, you painted Evan (from the last chapter) in a totally different light, one that we haven't seen in any of the other stories he's been privvy to. Nice work, Sue!!
| Reviewed By: jable [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read all your stories so far, all of them are great. just want to make 1 little itty bitty correction... Valerie states that ''the toxicology reports indicated that he had enough marijuana in his system to kill a horse'' it might make more sense to change ''marijuana'' to ''alcohol'' because its impossible to overdose on THC, the drug found in marijuana, and a bottle of good ol' JD will put lesser men in the hospital. please don't take offense to this suggestion.
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 00:11 PDT
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Paparazzi would be really bad at that moment. Especially when Valerie learns that she spent the Night at Evan's house, even if it's just the guest room (I'm assuming that he's gentleman enough, and Valerie's drunken enough, to have her stay with him for the night, and not try to make it to her home.). Her hangover's going to be bad the next morning, with all that drink she had. And that means that she's going to do the nastiest things she can to Even in retaliation. Keep up the good work, dark
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