| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 14:10 EDT
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O.O *faint* *gets up again* I must say that was the most fluffiest, cute scene between those two! *starry eyes* YOU are an absolutely pure genius! I love your story :D
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...if he wants to stop drinking he should ween himself off of the stuff. My uncle had a drinking problem and he was violent when he was drunk. He hit his wife...and when he was sober he saw what he had done to her And he quit cold turkey and ended up getting really sick.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:57 EDT
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aw! it was adorable! perfect chapter to read before running off to bed! their are a few spelling errors in the very beginning but thats all that i noticed. anywho, i loved it! definatly progressing. he likes her, hes trying to do the right thing for her, hes becoming more of a cuddly drunk and less of a hazardous (sp?) drunk. fantastic, now just hurry up and update!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: April 16, 2009 22:01 EDT
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aaaw inuyasha's last sentences soo cute! can't wait for the next chapter, and to see how naraku starts exerting himself. also looking fwd to more awkward inuyasha and kahome fluff
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wanted to reach into the story and smack Ito, though. What a self-serving jerk. I know he's in business to make money but....still. It's really trashy for him to try to manipulate a guy who's clearly in a lot of pain emotionally. Uh! And as for Inuyasha and Kagome, once again ADORABLE. But from Inuyasha's comments, she has a long way to go in convincing him that he's worth saving. I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:06 EDT
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aww such a cute ending to the chapter. Kagura's meeting with Inuyasha was really amusing. I'm kind of beginning to dislike Iro though...although he is sorta looking out for Inuyasha. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work as always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 12:07 EDT
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ya know, everytime i get the email saying theres been an update for this story i start singing jukebox hero and have to go look it up on youtube so that i can listen to it... chapter was fantastical! wonder beginning to an otherwise dreary day... thanks for making me a little happier...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha was too cute here! It was so sweet what he said about protecting Kagome from himself by trying to stop drinking. But Kagome was absolutely right. Sweet though that was, it wasn't the right reason. I just wonder how long it will take the poor guy to realize that he alone is reason enough to stop abusing his body that way, that he deserves more than just drinking his life away. Since his self-esteem is still so low, it looks like that will take a while. But Kagome is absolutely what he needs. And, whether she knows it or not, it is extremely significant that Inuyasha is now willing to admit that he likes her and wants her around. He has come MILES from where he was in the beginning. Terrific story.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 21:22 EDT
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O.O *starry eyes* that was so cute!!!!!!!! awesome chappie like always. I really hope those to become a couple in the end. thanks for taking the time to make this chapter. Have a great spring break :D
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 21:02 EDT
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aww I love Inuyasha's reaction and declaration. I was just as confused about Kagome's rejection as Inuyasha at first but then I understood. I like how it can't be that easy, it makes it more realistic. I can't wait to see more adventures with these two! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kimber On: April 01, 2009 17:31 EDT
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One of my absolute favorite fics right now! That last chapter left me all jelly-legged. You always manage to do that. I hope you don't mind but I've included a link to your fic on my blog: http://citrusandlemons.blogspot.com/ It was actually the first one I posted! Just because I love it so much! Hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu! Maybe this is the beginning of his recovery. I don't think Kagome or or Inu realize how much he's come to depend on her and care for her. I hope Inuyasha isn't too upset that Kagome told Sango about him breaking down like that. I wouldn't think he'd want anyone else to know that happened...it was something personal between him and Kagome but she seems to still be thinking as mostly his nurse and thus reporting his progress to their superiors. I do hope that at least Sango and Miroku will realize just how broken their friend is and show a little more compassion for him. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 01:00 EDT
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sangos been quite the bitch hasnt she... i was beginning to wonder if she was ever going to play nice... i mean hell, her life has been hard but my god, shes just been horrible. especially to kagome... anywho, great chapter, made me giggle. update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good one. Although the bathroom scene sounded really gross (poor Miroku), Inuyasha was still so adorable here. The part at the end where he wanted Kagoe to come in so he could sleep was so cute! He's like a kid needing his blankie or favorite toy when he goes to bed. :) And it definitely shows something more than friendship, for both he and Kagome. Sango was right when she thought there may be more going on from Kagome's side, too. Excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 19:26 EDT
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aww Inuyasha asking for Kagome to sleep by him was so cute! And poor Miroku haha. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha does when he's coherent. Keep up the awesome work as always! ^_^
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