| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 01:01 EDT
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oh shit
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 22:57 EDT
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NO!!!!! YOu idiotic mayor! How dare you DX just when the couple were starting to get cozy T.T *i'm done* Lovely chapter like always. I really loved the walzt :)
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really like the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha...they are starting to open up to each other! I've been struggling through the whole story with thinking Miroku and Sango aren't very good friends to Inuyasha. I know there's lots of extenuating circumstances but they seem more concerned about the Order's image and that Inu can fight than with him. It's awful that they force him to go through that gala every year basically shoving the day he had to kill the woman he loved in his face. Poor Inu with that damn video! Will Kagome be able to stop the blowup?
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 17:05 EDT
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the dance was so cute! But the video was very unexpected....poor Inuyasha is probably going to freak out, huh? I hope Kagome can deal with the backlash. What a cliff hanger! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little_Red On: March 18, 2009 18:07 EDT
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I'm curious as to how this is going to work out... and how was the gala changed? Did you say, or are we going to find out in the next chapter? Anywho, I loved the chapter, can't wait for more...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 22:54 EDT
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O.O I can't wait for the next part! I seriously love your story :) keep up the wonderful work
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good again. I can't wait for part 2!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 14:34 EDT
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aww poor Kagome getting so much stage fright! At least it gives Inuyasha something else to focus on besides depression. I can't wait to read how the rest of the evening goes...and after... Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 00:53 EDT
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I loved it, though the "battle scene" (if thats what you want to call it) was kinda, I dont know, it didnt really, "flow" ya know? Like it was jaunty and broken. But eh, practice makes perfect so... Anywho, I absolutly addored Inu Yasha in the last two chapters, and the way you ended that last one gave me one of those warm fuzzy feelings on the inside. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 21:44 EDT
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Good chapter. I really do love your characterization of Inuyasha!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 18:40 EDT
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aw inuyasha's behavior round Kagome is so cute
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 16:06 EDT
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hahaha Inuyasha is so cute when he's trying to make Kagome happy. I'm really curious how the gala will turn out... something tells me the Kagome might have to get hurt for Inuyasha to change his behavior around... but I dunno, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 15:44 EDT
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Updates :) Yay for updates! This is getting really interesting :) The increasing intimate relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is awesome :) Thank you for posting the story here *huggles*
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story. Inuyasha is such a complex character anyway, and you do such a good job with that in this AU. On one hand, he is an obnoxious and mean drunk.....but something about him makes people see that he has a sweet side that he tries desperately to hide. That's why Sango and Miroku have been so committed to trying to save him in spite of seven YEARS of failure and disappointment. And that's why Kagome came back the next day to try to help him even after he scared her so badly the night before. They don't want to give up on him because they KNOW that he is more than worth saving. I LOVE this story.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: March 13, 2009 17:22 EDT
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Wow, I am really impressed with this story. It has a great gripping effect and it makes you want to find out what happens next. Also, I really do want to commend you on your ability to update daily. Thank you so much for doing that. I hope to see other chapters of your story soon. Good luck!
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