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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 22:33 EDT
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awww that was so incredibly adorable. I love how Kagome rushes back to him and how he was so lonely without her, and then so happy she came back. The way you described their emotions was really stellar. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jasmine1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crow I really love your story. Please update soon! I can't wait for more action. =)
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a powerful chapter! I feel bad for Kagome. It must have been so hard for her to drag Inuyasha in front of that mirror and make him face his guilt and pain knowing how much that was going to hurt him but also knowing he couldn't move forward without it. I know she's hopeful that it will be the turning point for him but I can imagine how much it hurt her to do that and how worried she is that he'll understand why she did. Then there's Inu at Kikyo's grave...what an iconic image that evoked! I can see the image of him crouching in front of the headstone...clutching onto it like an anchor, head bowed...powerful. Great writing! Lastly, YEA! He's finally forgiven himself and can start to live (and love) again. Sooo looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 07:25 EDT
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so is he dare i say it.....cured?? no more drinking?? i hope so and i hope he thanks Kagomr even though really its her job to do that but it wouldnt have happened if she didnt care for him. Well luved the chappy cant wait till the next one! -FoxyLove
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMMMMMMMMMGGGG whats a puuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfeeeeeeeect chapter!! soo swweeet and Finally hes made HUGE progress!! Excellent chapter I like you logic in getting him to realise that its ok to life life again!! interesting twist Fingers crossed hell get better sooner! rather than later then!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 02:03 EDT
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This could be a very educational story for some, especially for those who unconsciously force themselves to suffer because of unwarranted guilt and because of others using guilt to get their way. This was a lesson that I had to learn. I had to learn that I was worthy of taking up space and breathing the air. You are doing a great job with this. I do find it uncomfortable when I read about the discussions going on between Kagome, Sango, and Miroku about Inuyasha. I can tell you, coming from Inuyasha's place as a patient and not as a medical professional, that he would most likely feel violated by Kagome getting his most personal information from other people. I know from personal experience. Unless Inuyasha is accustomed to the intrusion, to having his most personal secrets given to someone he barely knows, he should have reacted horribly in the beginning. I'm just mentioning it because you appear to see much from the medical professional end and I thought you might like to see that the patient might see it as a betrayal of trust. On the other side, though I was wondering why you were making Sango and Miroku appear to be harsh, you made it clear that you were showing us how it is that people can manipulate someone without realizing the harm they are doing. I loved how Kagome approached that and that it worked out well. She was right. If they couldn't stop helping Inuyasha dig himself deeper into depression, they needed to stay away from him. I love how you present the small things that we don't consider important as an outward sign of what is important. The state of ones living conditions and appearance can be a sign of their mental and emotional health. Showing the smaller details was an excellent idea. Oh, and though I've never had an addiction, aside from cigarettes, I think you've done an awesome job displaying addiction to alcohol without judging and condemning. You've done a great job with this and I appreciate your courage in writing about it. Maybe it will help someone. I've got your story on my favorites. I can't promise to review every chapter, but I appreciate your hard work and will be looking forward to every post. Snow
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 00:47 EDT
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Aww poor Inuyasha. I'm glad at least the spirit of Kikyo wants him to be happy or at least that's how it seems. Keep up the awesome work! :)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 00:31 EDT
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oh it made me cry... i think this story has made me cry up until now so kudos to you.. you've now accomplished the last goal, you are officially one of my favorite writters...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 22:42 EDT
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*sniff sniff* that was such a lovely chappie. T.T wonderful work! Thanks for the very quick upload. Finally his wounds are starting to heal.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 21:34 EDT
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oo so what happens next?
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I loved the ending. Inuyasha's misplaced guilt was smothering him...so I'm glad that he was able to get some sort of absolution from Kikyo. Maybe now he will finally be able to start truly healing.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is great! A few grammar errors but whatever its only a few and i can still understand what your saying. ButI love this story!! I fell asleep reading it and the first thing i did when i woke up was start reading again!I cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really sweet. It shows how strong Kagome is when she feels Inuyasha has been hurt. Definately not someone to mess with! :) Even tho she was upset with Miroku and Sango she saw how stressed they were and worked to help them as well as repair their relationship with Inuyasha a bit. I'm glad they decided to show Inuyasha that he's still important to them...not just a weapon (that was a nice touch, too). They never seem to realize that, while Inuyasha doesn't want to be the savior of the city again, he'd never let anything happen to his freinds and would fight to protect them. I wonder if Kagome realizes how close she seems to be getting to Inuyasha? I know she cares for and about him. I think that started out as caretaker/patient but their relationship has grown beyond that...I just wonder if she realizes it yet. :) I think Inuyasha realizes it more but, as usual, he shies away from it thinking he's not deserving of it while at the same time knowing how much he needs her. He's getting better tho...his ability to let loose and play and have fun at the park was a big step. Yea!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: May 14, 2009 10:38 EDT
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Reading your chapters always has me including the word WOW to describe it!!! Kagome's lecture was absolutely amazing!! Rather than letting them off the hook, she made them think about their current and past behavior...genius!! The moments in the park were adorable as well. Miroku and Sango traveling the world...I love it!! I also loved how he tried to play it off like he wouldn't cherish every single second with her ANYWHERE ha ha. As for Inuyasha and Kagome, you make their chemistry effortless!! Thanks so much for a great new chapter. It left me sooo happy!!
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Title: rinzechan
Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've had my share of favorite fics, but this one has definitely blown several of them out of the water! I can't remember the last time I was so excited for an update! =D
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