"Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 ›  » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2011 17:41 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Time to get down to business, I guess, though I can't blame Kagome for still being so shaken up. And then enter Sesshoumaru, and bam. I think that meeting went rather well, LOL, all things considered. But I want to see what happened with Inuyasha. Did he really go drown himself in the sauce again, or did he somehow miraculously manage to stay sober, and he's been wallowing in more lucid misery for the last few days? Is he going to end up showing up at the end during the big battle like a night in shining armor to save the day, or is the war going to more or less drag him into it against his will when the whole city goes to hell in a hand basket with demons running rampant in the streets? Is Kagome going to be injured, and Inuyasha will somehow see it and then that'll cause him to snap and destroy Narkau once and for all? And what of Kohaku? Has Naraku brainwashed him, or is Kohaku pretending to be brainwashed? So many questions! Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out the answers, huh? ;-) So hurry up and update again! (when you can) Good job! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2011 21:55 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh man oh man oh man...! Inuyasha's reaction(s) are perfectly understandable, under the circumstances, but I do hope that he comes around somehow. I hope that right now he doesn't go off to drink himself into oblivion. Also, I think Naraku's vanity and desire for manipulative revenge over physical destruction will ultimately be his undoing. He could have stayed hidden until he was truly ready, at full power, and then surprised and obliterated all of his enemies in a single bound, but instead he wanted to flaunt himself, 'warn' them so that he could relish in their fear, convinced that they are still powerless against him. Instead, he has inadvertently given Kagome the confidence - and determination - to succeed in the war against him. Now she wants revenge, against what Naraku has just done to Inuyasha, and in turn for what Naraku had done to Inuyasha and the others in the past. And she also knows that her powers injured him more than he tried to let on. Sure, she's temporarily an emotional wreck right this minute, and I can hardly blame her, but I know Kagome, and she won't crumble into herself the same way Inuyasha did, and the way Sango and Miroku nearly did before she pulled them together. There's nothing she can do about Inuyasha right now, and that helplessness will translate into determination to destroy Naraku once and for all, for Inuyasha, for the city, for everyone. Can you tell I liked this chapter? LOL, just try not to keep us waiting so long till the next one! Although I'm glad you had a good summer. :-) | Reviewed By: secret35 On: May 31, 2011 15:11 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAHHHH!!! i was holding my breath the entire end of the chapter!!! I was so happy that you updated. I couldn't beleive it XD i love this story so much XD! and seriously i felt like i was going to die of a heart attack with that cliffy XP by the way well done on this chapter, it really keeps us going and anticapting. keep up the good work we are all rooting for you XD | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2011 14:19 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Holy shit-balls! You're forgiven for taking so long! Damn...this was like the most epic update of all time. As soon as Kagome first had her 'ingenious' idea I cringed, just knowing that something would backfire, not that I've ever been a fan of that type of manipulation to begin with, even if it is for the greater good. As soon as Miroku said he was sending them to the quarry I wanted to reach into my computer screen, grab the phone out of Inuyasha's hand, and shout at Miroku that he was the biggest idiot on the face of the planet...not that they knew what was down there. Oh yes, let's send Inuyasha on a fake assignment that isn't really that dangerous to build his confidence back up. Where should they go? I know! Into Naraku's lair! LOL. I am really glad, though, that this story seems to be moving along at a swift pace and there isn't any more dillydallying...not that you were dillydallying before, well you know what I mean! Naraku has shown himself! Huzzah! Now all they have to do is get out alive... Keep up the awesome work! :-) | Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2011 23:49 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: gosh it's been so long since i signed into MM and i'm glad I've still got great stories to read (: Still enjoyin the story! can i get that link to the story pics on your DA? keep up the good work | Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 05:47 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed this chapter! It was very well written and I loved the characters. I could just imagine Kagome's suprise as she blasted the demon. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 19:30 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome update, as usual. Really wicked cool battle scene, too. I wasn't expecting it to be quite so intense. Glad Kagome was able to pull it out of the bag with concern for Sango, though I'm sure her biggest wallop will be at some point down the road when Inuyasha is in immanent peril. Things are certainly starting to pick up, now that they'll have the apartment to themselves. I wonder how long that'll really last, though. I'm sure Juromaru and Kageromaru had to check in with somebody from time to time, so it's probably only a matter of time before somebody realizes they've got 'missing'. That'll just mean they have to work fast...though I will understand if you can't always work that fast, what with 'real life' and all. Update when you can! Great job! | Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 22:01 EST Comment/Review: ooooh this is getting really exciting. I love that Inuyasha has a drive now, and that Kagome is improving too. I wonder if she'll be more of a motivation for him? I can't wait to keep reading! Keep up the awesome work. ^_^ | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 17:17 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! This time the update is real! And really good, too. That's crazy that Sango and Miroku have to talk in notes like that and then burn them, but what else can they do? I wonder how they managed to get their message to Kaede. And you know, I didn't even make the connection myself about Inuyasha getting upset over Kouga beating him during training, but Kagome's absolutely right. In order to have wounded pride, then that means he has pride in himself once again! Yay! And I sure hope it doesn't take Kagome too long to figure out it was her determination to be strong for Inuyasha's sake that gave her her power boost. Really looking forward to seeing what happens next. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2010 22:32 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awww...I was hoping there was another new update again! But of course, you must repost chapters that mysteriously up and disappear along with all of their corresponding reviews. I hate it when that happens. Anyhoo, great work, as always, and looking forward to whenever the next new chapter is posted. Keep up the awesome work! | Title: Nothing in chapter! Reviewed By: anon222222 On: December 02, 2010 12:13 EST Comment/Review: ?? :( | Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 16:47 EDT Comment/Review: o.O wow.....Naraku is such a crooked bastard isn't he? ^ ^ I love how you're going about the story. It's very interesting! Hope you can upload one more chapter by summer~ >w< Thanks for your hard work. The story is awesome!
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 02:14 EDT Comment/Review: Thank you for another great chapter! Now worried about both Inu & Kohaku! I hope Inu gets back on track for his recovery so he will be shape to take on Naraku when he finally comes out of hiding.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 01:23 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay, an update! Inuyasha's reaction actually makes sense. It was established that he never felt comfortable with people liking/praising him. Things are definitely heating up now. Can't wait to see what happens next with Inuyasha and Kagome, and of course Kohaku! Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 17:53 EDT Comment/Review: Another great (and upsetting)chapter! Poor Inu, two steps forwards and one step back. Hope he starts to make significant progress soon! He will need to be in tip top shape when Naraku makes his move.
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