| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kristin M On: June 02, 2009 23:43 EDT
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When InuYasha asked Kagome to help him stop drinking, it almost sounded like a proposal...!!! And his first Christmas stocking! So cute and sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 21:57 EDT
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awww that entire chapter was so sweet! I love how Inuyasha was so overcome with emotion that he finally figured it out! But I guess this is just the beginning. I can't wait to see how Kagome will help Inuyasha stop drinking. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 21:18 EDT
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Inu figuring it out was unexpected. Have to say i almost forgot about that. Guess that was the point though probably. I guess that means job well done :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAH! Yash FINALLY gets it. I am so glad that he finally sees that he deserves more than to spend his life drowning in himself in liquor. The whole Christmas "morning" scene was just sweet. They clearly love each other so much, even though it's still in that sweet and innocent stage. Yes, Yash finally valued himself enough to wnat stop drinking and start living again. But, I wonder if Kagome realized just how much Inuyasha bases his future happiness on....HER. When he described being happy again, he went on and on about how he wanted to share things with Kagome outside of his apartment and that he knows that his drinking limits that. I wonder if EITHER of them even realize how significant that is. Kagome was so happy that Inuyasha finally loves himself enough to want to quit that she didn't notice. And I don't think Inuyasha has any idea how much he's already allowed his life to revolve around Kagome. This story if TERRIFIC. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: June 02, 2009 18:53 EDT
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I'm smiling a big goofy grin after reading this chapter!!! I'm soo happy he figured it out that he had to quit for himself so he could be happy again!! It was soo great!! I loved it!! You never disappoint!!Thanks so much!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 18:33 EDT
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T^T so ubber cute!!! This IS a really freaking sweet and adorable and awesome chapter! Thank you thank you thank you! Thanks for uploading really quickly!
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 18:30 EDT
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YAY! He's finally figured it out and wants to quit! Good chapter, I loved his rection to getting a Christmas after so long of not having one. Patiently waiting for the next for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Twix2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 17:03 EDT
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Awww...what a wonderful chapter! Thanks so much for the quick update. I really liked how you created this scene- the emotions and plot were very believable and quite enjoyable to read. It was worth the wait. Now i can't wait to see what is next!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 14:54 EDT
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eeeeeh! i love it! very fluffy, but very lovely! fantastical. i love that you included the tree topper, and the blanket was ingenious... i had forgotten about her knitting... anywho, great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 21:57 EDT
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Amazing; you really did good work in the mind of an alcholic. I'm thrilled for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 00:45 EDT
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*.* that was so freaking sweet! Yay, holidays!!! yay for cutesy moment! *bouncing off the walls* I can't wait when the truth dawns upon them! Great chapter, and very good job! Thank you thank you!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I think the smile on my face will last for a while! That chapter was great! So cute, I just hope to see the progress in later chapters that were so evident in this one, he seemed so happy! Great job!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 02:40 EDT
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TERRIFIC chapter. You did such a great job with the conflicted emotions in this chapter from both Kagome and Inuyasha, but especially Inuyasha. He just absolutely broke your heart here. He tried so hard....but you can't just get over the problems he has just like that. I love this whole story, but this is definitely my favorite chapter so far.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 01:40 EDT
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oh it was perfect! very fluffy, but hey its christmas, what more could you expect? anywho, seriously, it was great, now you need to hurry and update soon. cause i want to know what his reactions going to be when he wakes up... i hope she gets a topper for his tree... and why didnt she have any presents for him? that doesnt seem very kagome like... but maybe they're in the bag with the others and she'll bring them to him after shes done opening presents at home... i just kept hoping he'd find one from her hidden away somewhere... but like i said, update soon!
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Title: WOOOOO
Reviewed By: Jasmine1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 23:37 EDT
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Holy crow I LOVED it! It was amazing!! Too cute. Wow, i find it really funny that you updated just a few hours after I sent the review. Keep up the AWESOME work and UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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