| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 18:58 EDT
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oh man the ending was just too cute and funny!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 14:03 EDT
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It sounds as if "Release" is leading up to the curing of Inuyasha. I like that, he has carried misplaced guilt long enough and it is time he was freed from it. I think that if Miroku and Sango knew about the true torment that Inuyasha suffered through they would be more supporting. But I also think that Kagome and her loving heart are the only things that can truly cure Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 01:41 EDT
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I was really curious as to how you were going to end the night... I'm glad you had her go to him, but I easily saw it going the other way as well... Him drinking himself to oblivion at home and her worrying all night... It would have make the story longer, significantly, because then we would have had to wait another year to see what would happen (because that day, and more importantly that night needs to be in the story)... But it was definatly good the way you had it flow. Maybe, I don't know... A little fast, but definatly good...
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 22:29 EDT
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awwww poor Inuyasha. I'm glad he's letting it out, but he's probably not going to remember it, is he? Kagome was really brave and kinda stupid to stand up to him like that but it all worked out in the end. I can't wait to see how he's going to react in the morning. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. This chapter was heartbreaking but very well done. I'm just so glad that Kagome is able to reach Inuyasha. He was hell bent on destroying himself at the begionning. But, maybe, just maybe Kagome has been able to convince him that he is worth saving...or has at least started the process. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 21:22 EDT
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TT.TT *sniff sniff* This chapter was among the most tear jerking ones I read. Great chapter like always *i need to find a new phrase; I'm starting to sound like a broken recorder* and seriously this was such a great update.
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 19:43 EDT
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I'm so hooked! I come home every day and have to check if there's another chapter! Today there was....yay!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this last chapter, its so sweet! Yay, he finally opened up! And you update so fast, thank you so so so so so so so so so much!!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: LustfulBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 06:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I read all of your chapters in a day, but I must say, it took me a while. I laughed a lot in some parts, and then I would have a shocked expression on the next. I really love this story already
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 01:06 EDT
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yay! Update :) funny....the mayor is still an idiot for being ignorant. :P Still, the story rocks! Keep up the wonderful work :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Inuyasha's story was sadder than I could have imagined. And you did an excellent job with all of the angst. Beautifully written. And I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 24, 2009 18:34 EDT
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I really loved the raw emotion of Inuyasha in this chapter and I can't wait to read more. A small part of me hopes that this time he won't drink himself into oblivion, but I've trusted your story so far and it hasn't let me down, so however it turns out I'm sure I will love it a lot. Thanks again for the new chap. :0)
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Reviewed By: Little_Red On: March 24, 2009 16:47 EDT
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That was awesome! The tears were just starting when the chapter ended... My compliments on the cliff-hanger, very nicely done... I'd still be headed to Canada though... or Germany... Whichever...
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 16:23 EDT
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Aww poor Inuyasha. I'm glad the Kagome finally knows why though. Now she can start fixing him. Although I wonder how Inuyasha will be after drinking so much And how he'll deal with Kagome... I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:59 EDT
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Holy Crap! Oh poor Inu Yasha, I can just imagine the night he's going to have after this... Screw the one and a half bottles of whisky(sp?), I'd be flying to Canada... It was beautiful and heartbreaking. Now hurry and update!
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