| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 16:48 EDT
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awwww Inuyasha was so cool going to defend Kagome like that! And staying off a drink for her too. Now he just has to give it up completely... I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Once Inuyasha came out of his drunken stuper he remembered what he did....I'm just glad kagome didn't just up and leave.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 00:08 EDT
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awesome chapter. I liked how he was all innocently confused and wanted to know why she was so unKagome-like
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 12, 2009 23:38 EDT
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Loved this chapter soo much. I loved the vulnerability and the hug and how they seem to fit soo well. Thanks for all the great updates!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 22:31 EDT
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oh i love it... it made me cry and everything... and i love your promptness with updates...
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 15:22 EDT
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awww I love the way they made up. Inuyasha was so cute wondering why Kagome wasn't there to take care of him. hehe Maybe he can defend her when her (I'm assuming) bad review comes in. I can't wait to see what these two do next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 22:18 EDT
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awww poor Kagome getting torn up like that (figuratively) I actually thought Inuyasha might accidently hit her or something. I wonder how she's going to be able to fix him now? I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 03:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Very well written story! Very enjoyable! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 01:04 EDT
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Ok, I've stayed up much later than I should have, but I'm officially caught up, and I must say, I throughly enjoy this story, the chapters are a bit short, and i feel as if not enough detail has gone into Kagomes life, incomparison to the detail and effort put into Inu Yasha's... But I don't know, maybe you have something planned, and idea to reveal more about her later on? I don't know... Anywho, like I said, I enjoied it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 20:25 EDT
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aww and Kagome was doing so well too. I wonder what she's going to have to do to make it up to him? I can't wait to see their next confrontation. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 19:45 EDT
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It's so great to read a new chapter every day! Keeps me interested. I really like your story. I find myself looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 09, 2009 17:45 EDT
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I'm really loving your fic. Alcoholism is such a tricky thing to deal with and I'm so glad that Kagome is letting him come to terms with it himself within reason. It doesn't matter if Sango and Miroku want him to quit, he has to want it. I think your story has a lot of depth. Thanks for a great read and keep those updates coming.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 01:43 EDT
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i only made it to chapter 3 tonight, working my way slowly through the story... anywho, i like the way you take your time, to slowly bring us into the situation, exsplaining everything and giving us that extra detail, im just beginning to wonder when kagome is going to show up...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 16:19 EDT
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Yay! double update :) I just loving this story :) can't wait to see how Kagome's diets work ^^
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 15:22 EDT
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Oh you've tantalized me with a preview. Now I really want to read it haha. I wonder how Kagome will get through? Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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