| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Animom On: January 22, 2003 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
some very good guffaws.... I'm so happy I'm rading this now, when there are so many delicious peaches, er I mean chapters, to savor...... |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 22, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, very fun... I'm giggling almost non-stop. Nalan Li sent me in search of this, BTW. (P.S. I rate hard; don't be offended!) |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 22, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, very fun... I'm giggling almost non-stop. Nalan Li sent me in search of this, BTW. |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 18:17 CST
Comment/Review:
"WHY Yugi And Seto! Seto Is so hot I would of even like him better with Mai! OR EVEN TEA! cum on! Wat the bleeps your problem!
0_o;
hehehe"
What the heck is YOUR problem, GOODwriter123456"? If you ask me, that sounds like a flame. If you don't like something, don't read it, don't insult the authors.... or the fiction. It's probably a lot better then what you could do, and personally, it's MY favorite pairing.
Teikimon- **roars and turns into Kaya, leering menacingly over ADK** |
Reviewed By: Kari_yugi On: January 19, 2003 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic its great. I hope you post the next chapter the suspense is killing me. |
Reviewed By: Rez On: January 13, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not gonna explain how I rated stuff, but I am gonna express my opinion. I like this story, and even the authors notes. Poor Seto and kawaii chibi Joey. But don't tell me it's gonna be ANOTHER month for another update? sheesh.
In any case, good story. You are very detailed with the backgrounds and histories of the characters. Good stuff. And yeah, about the names, you were right when you said rip-offs. Oh well. And why do you call everyone by the english name but Honda? Shouldn't you be writing him as Tristan, just for consistency? Oh well. Good story! Write more! |
Reviewed By: Hikari and Kurayami On: January 10, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari: This is a great story!
Kurayami: They've already heard you say that...
Hikri: I dun care! I LOVE IT! MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE NOW!
Kurayami: Geeze... and I'm the one with handcuffs, and a whip.
Hikari: *Edges away scared*
Kurayami: As My Hikari was kind enogh to point out... great fic! You've goten into my top 2. (one being 'Gather Ye Rosebuds' on Elfwood.
-Hikari/Kurayami |
Reviewed By: LQ On: March 03, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow...guys this fic is a dream come true. ^_^ All my fave pairings!! And in such nummy situations. *drools for about 20 mins straight before getting slapped out of it by her muse* Ow...what was I saying? Oh yeah. ^^;;;
I enjoy your authors notes as much as the fic itself; i was about peeing my pants with the gangsta type names. Anyway, my point is this is one of my top five favorite fics ever. ^^;; I even saved it to disk so i could re-read even when i don't have net access.
I have a bit of constructive critiscm though:
1) I think Joey capitulated too soon. You had him in such denial then he does a complete 180. I know it was because of the memories, but even before he got them bacl he told Ryou he loved him. It would have been, not better, but more realistic if he had slowly come to terms with it.
2) Kaiba is 18, not 15. ^^;;; (and if you go to www.kabalarians.com you can find almost 1000 egyptian names, most of which resemble the names the charas have now.
But please don't be offended. This is truly a great fic. You have set the bar for YGO fiction. |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 08:03 CST
Comment/Review:
**dances around** There's a new chapter! There's a new chapter! ^-^
**sniffle** ....and it's so sad....
Teikimon- "Another month before the next chapter? Uh oh...." **glances at partner**
**twiches** A whole month before another chapter on the wonderful fic???? O_O |
Reviewed By: sarah the yaoi fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! A new chapter! Well, Tea and Yugi are fine. That's good. We got a little insight into why Bakura is such an a**hole all the time, and hopefully we'll get some more B/R/J action soon. What's gonna happen to Yami?!?!?! It better not be anything really bad. Bad is fine, really bad isn't. ^_^ Well, great job overall. Can't wait for more. See ya!
Sarah |
Reviewed By: Arwynn On: January 07, 2003 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! Ohmigosh, ohmigosh! Screw FF.Net!!
WTF?!?!?! Someone reported you?! Grr, that's why I couldn't find this fic.
I have to tell ya'll that this is quite possibly the best fic I have ever read. (One of the two... I'm a loyal SSJ Sky fan. ^_^) I got so po'ed when they said ya'll weren't members anymore.
I don't care what Gem said. Your story is magnificent, and the love scenes are beautifully written! If she can't appreciate that, then screw her!
The characters are amazingly true to the original characters.
I've never laughed so hard at a fic! :3 (I especially liked the "Oh, yeah! Spank it!" in the notes on an earlier chapter.) ^O^
Your grammar and vocabulary is SO COOL! I loved reading this because it was obviously thought out, and used higher level words.
Uhgn! I just can't tell you how impressed I am at this fic. *mutters* Stupid, closed-minded...can't readf the friggen' warnings... Why is it always the excellent writers that get screwed over?
You go, girls! |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba On: January 03, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUCH better than the version I had to read last night. Soli, there were so many "censored"'s in Jou's memmory! It's like trying to read jiberish! ^_^ But at least this straightened that bit out. ::glares:: You're so MEAN to leave it there! I'm beginning to REALLY dislike the fact that you're not updating again 'til next month.
Lara: Edited versions are absolutely TERRIBLE. They completely ruin the fic!
LK: Agreed. E-mail me whenever you get to reading your e-mails again! Ja~!
~LK ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeehaaaww! Chapter 9 was awesome, and yes, tearworthy as well. Great job! |
Reviewed By: BluJay On: January 02, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, pretty cool! But a month before you update! x_x You must try to update sooner then that! I first found this fic on FanFiction.net but saw that you posted the 1st version here. I like this fic because both of you write well and are funny. ^_^ Plus, some of the ideas you guys wrote in. Like giving the Eye to Joey. Never would I even think of that. You have to go more into everyones past lives. Okay, enough of my demands, you guys are great ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelHideki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angel: Th-that's just meeeeeaaaaaannnn!!! *points to Chapter 9's cliffy*
Ayame: *sighs* Well, -I- thought it was a good place to end the chapter. Besides, I really don't care what happens to Yami Yuugi. I wanna know what happens with Ryou, Bakura and Jou!!!
Angel: Looks like we'll just have to wait, then...
Both Girls: *sigh* |
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