| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Queen of the Bishies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 19:02 CST
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IF THEY DON'T LIKE GAY PRON SO MUCH, SUE 'EM!!!
Bakura: ANGEL!
sorry, CONTINUE!!!! -grin- Make Bakura, Jou, and Ryou have a... 'moment' -hand motion- CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Hikari/Kurayami On: February 02, 2003 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari: OH! WUV IT! I want chappie 10!
Kurayami: *grins* we're writing a story of our own thanx to you! It's taken us two hors and we havn't finished the first fricken chapter.
Dun be mad at them... don't take it out on me either... hey whait! What do you mean we! I'm doing al the work. Writing, typing, research!
Eh... heh heh heh |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
It's January 31st!!1 That means new chappie'll come up soon! Yay!!! ^-^ **does happy dance**
Teikimon- **watching partner do happy dance** **sweatdrop** |
Reviewed By: Youko Fujima On: January 30, 2003 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic!^^ I love how Bakura is characterized in here, and Ryou is great too^^ Bakura's lines are just so...funny^^ especially during the lemons^^ |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: January 29, 2003 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ruby: I want to see all 3 boys at one time!!!
Yami Ruby :Me too ...(Drools)
Ruby: We are on a quest to find a boy in real life who looks like Seto!! find us one and we will PAY YOU!!!
Yami Ruby: No we won't!!!
Ruby: you so...evil...why are you so...evil???
Yami Ruby: I am the Yami...
Ruby:Anyway...i'm working on a fic...my other fics have ummm... not gone over well
Yami Ruby: are you kidding me ? some no reviews.. ..the most you ever got were 8 reviews and one was from a bf and 2 were you!!!
Ruby:So i wanted to run my idea by someone before i write this thing and everyone hates it and i make myself look utterly baka....
Yami Ruby: You always look baka...
Ruby: anyway if you could e mail me???? and i could tell you two my idea and you could help me..... i'm all alone....(sobs wildly)
Yami Ruby: our e mail is themonsterunderyourbed16@yahoo.....
love and bloodly kisses
ruby |
Reviewed By: Setzer On: January 27, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I neeeeeeeed more BakuraxRyou... C'mon guys... please?
TOOT TOOT! |
Reviewed By: Dee Jay On: January 25, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally go a chance to read all those chapters over again! Yeesh! Anyway, I'm greatly looking forward to your 'plot'. ;) j/k, I love it! What I love even more is what you two have done with Tea. In my opinion, you've characterized her perfectly. You should be proud of yourselfs, not many people can boast to that, O.o |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: January 23, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to tell you two that you inspied me so i'm wirteing a fic called cherry candy lips
it's a seto mokuba fic (mokuba gets aged 10 years do too a spell ) will u help me ??? wirte me at themonsterunderyourbed16@yahoo love ya ruby redman |
Reviewed By: Kiraya On: January 23, 2003 12:10 CST
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Hot damn, this is beautiful. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 23, 2003 01:41 CST
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got a bit confused with the egypt flashback parts. look forward to seeing how you conclude this! animom@earthlink.net |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 23, 2003 01:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Gasps. Corn Puffs, Otogi, and hey, is that Demon Game's motorcycle gang? (wildly adores Bad to the Bone) .... I'm sad to know ther's only one mare chapter ..and I'm afraid it won't be the conclusion....and I'll be so u n s a t i s f i e d ...... |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 23, 2003 00:43 CST
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OMG! almost 2 am and I can't tear myself away! (plus you demanded reviews!) I LOVE D-Mag! more! |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 23, 2003 00:18 CST
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YOu know, for all the silliness (and it is GOOOOOD silliness)this is quite well-written! |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 22, 2003 23:55 CST
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still reading, still emitting aa variety of sounds (giggles, guffaws, and mmmmmms.) Onward! I submit! (Horny Seto is SO much fun!) |
Reviewed By: Animom On: January 22, 2003 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
continue to enjoy....must read next chapter immediately..... |
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