| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitty (Sage of Darkness) On: March 03, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Glad you kept continuing. That sucks about FF.net. I'm reading this one since Kitty loves her lemons. -Snicker- Thanks again for the Doujinshi scans. |
Reviewed By: Kulu On: March 03, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ Good story.I can't wait for you two continue. And it's a real shame about the whole getting reported thing. Some people are just so stupid now. |
Reviewed By: Teb Teb On: March 03, 2003 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I love Return Of the Demon!!! Fanfiction.net is soooooo stuuuuuuuuupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
77 reviews is pretty good!
I love your characterizations!!!
Maybe I'm wearing my slash-coloured glasses again, but I kept thinking Dark Magician Girl was gonna pull something on Tea...hehehe...
...yeah
Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 08:59 CST
Comment/Review:
YAHOO! MAN DO I LOVE YOUR STORIES! I'm so happy right now, there are no words to describe it! YAHOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: March 03, 2003 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How the HELL did you guys' story get deleted...AGAIN?! Oh my god...this is getting ridiculous on ff.net...*scream* WHO REPORTED YOU?! *grumbles something incoherent*
Now I'll understand if you don't feel like getting the next chapter out soon...I mean, who the f*ck would want to write when their story had been deleted after ALL that? And can you believe someone reported Sweet-lil-Amychan's sequel to the Agony of the Defeated? People...are just getting plain ridiculous!
Ergh..anyway...Wonderful writing _as usual_ and I'm truly sorry to hear that some close-minded closet FREAK reported your story on ff.net. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED how Kaiba thought "Note to self. Call Joey a dog again. Soon." AND then he DID!
His physical reactions to Yami/Yugi are funny, too. And yet...bring to mind more naughty visual images (similar to the ones Seto himself was having).
I also like the dialog you've given Yami Bakura. He's both sarcastic and funny. |
Reviewed By: Kitsune On: March 02, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
And please kill off Tea, I can't stand her! |
Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 27, 2003 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic! Please update! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 16, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!!! Now where's the next shapter? *pouts and huggles Seto*
Seto: *can't breathe*
Next chapter? Please? This is a really good story! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well! The scenes with Bakura are always entertaining. His sudden attack on Joey's lips was priceless. Mai is jealous? LOL! Joey has a rocky road ahead of him.
As far as the word "hotness" - perhaps you're looking for something like "rampant sexuality" or "raw animal attraction" (laughs hysterically, then stops to fan self thinking about Seto being drawn to said magnetism...gulp!)
The little episode with the nurse and Yugi's face in her breasts was silly and funny. Sometimes you just need those characters! |
Reviewed By: M-chan On: February 16, 2003 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeheheee...
this is quite cute. (However, now I'm pissed at you people for leaving off Chap. 9 just at that point...and after threatening a character death, to boot! You'd better not hurt anyone, especially not Yami-kun, or I'll be righteously pissed off! *Grumblegrumble*)
Yaaay, well-written S/Y/Y triangle fics. *drools* And the A/Ns are positively hilarious, to boot. Extra points for correct spelling and usage of "Tristan's Big Word" *grins*
P.S- can I use Emclass in one of my fics? (The O/C that Mai falls for has good reason to use it, and it suits her perfectly ^-^)
P-Diddy...*snerk snort* will haunt me forever. Even better if you started calling Jounouchi-kun "J-Lo". Mwahahahaaaa!
Pleeeeze finish the fic! |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Bishies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
-scratches head, too- you had a plot? Jou isn't admitting his feelings? when the hell is Bakura going to rape jou!?!
Bakura: -smacks her- |
Reviewed By: Anime Fan On: February 11, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! You have my favorite couples and I have never read a story like this before. you have to update soon because the story was getting really interesting. |
Reviewed By: DeAsjauna On: February 06, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely beautiful! One of the best fics I have read in a while. You two are the best yugioh yaoi authors around - and you are so dang funny! I can never tire of reading you guys little misadventures with the yugioh cast. Keep up the good work and get the next chapter up soon!!
Sincerely
DeAsjauna
P.s.- Awwww Chibi Joey is just too cute! ^_^ |
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