| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: January 01, 2003 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn fanfiction.net is messed up on my compurter, any way love the story. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: January 01, 2003 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Even though I reviewed this at ff.net, I thought "why the hell not and just review here too." ^_^ Great story and it was so much easier without having to flip back and forth XD like i did with the ff.net version. :) Continue! the whole BxJxR is always so sweet. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: January 01, 2003 05:09 CST
Comment/Review:
nice!! *grinz* hope you update soon, ok??? pleasepleaseplease??? can't wait...what happened to yami??? O.O *sigh* well UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tenshi On: December 31, 2002 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but you all are downright sadistic with your cliffies |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: December 31, 2002 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ruby: i loved it was so funny!!! "well some of uss are trying to FUC-"
yami ruby: you just liked the SEX!!!!!
ruby: well it was hot!!! |
Reviewed By: Dread Wulf On: December 28, 2002 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo i wanna read more plzz!!! *kicks ff.net* stupid bastards! i hope yoo continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 20:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sweet! It took a while but it was well worth the wait, some nice YugixSeto bonding, another three-way lemon the apperance of the BWD and Pegasus being a freak!
Here's to hoping I see more of this and Bite-Sized.
Icz |
Reviewed By: Nkoah On: December 24, 2002 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it ^-^ There aren't enough R/B/J fics out there and I adore them! I cannot wait for that lemon!!! Please get 9 out soon! |
Reviewed By: Angel On: December 31, 2002 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
FF.NET IS EEEEEVIL!! That is all I have to say, bye-bye.
Yami Angel: Just ignore her... |
Reviewed By: Shindou Shuichi On: December 22, 2002 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE BEST FIC EVER!
God you two are good...
I mean, who doesn't love Bakura, Yugi, Ryou, Yami, Seto and joey in a fic like this getting mentally tortured and gettin it on and slowly falling in love...
Makes you want to do that "Ahhh..." nose
:: "Ahhhhh..." ::
Anyways, keep it up!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
HeartlessDreams@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: sarah the yaoi fairy On: December 15, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girlies! This is Sarah85 from ff.net. I went to check on this story... and it wasn't there! So I went looking for you guys... and it looks like I found you!!! ^.^ Anyway, great story! It's well written... but I'd expect nothing less from you two. Poor Ryou... why must Bakura be an a** all the time. v.v What's gonna happen to Tea and Yugi...? Will Jou ever admit his feelings... and what about the 'package deal'...? You have to get more out soon... I'm totally hooked.
Luv ya lots!
Sarah
Ja~ |
Reviewed By: Mystik-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
continue dammit!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When's the rest coming out! This is the first Yugioh story I read, and I'm glad I did...all though I have a new fandom to keep up with! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Kuroyama-san On: December 10, 2002 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^; absolutely hilarious. I love your (both of you) style of writing. It's very unique and interesting. You've both done an amazing job so far...(^o^; just wait until I tell nee-chan I like your stories better than hers!) Update again soon!
~Aoka |
Reviewed By: balura love On: December 08, 2002 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you guys can just write and i really love your fic, that's all. please write more bye now |
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