| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: cobaltprincess On: December 08, 2002 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!!!!!!!!! and i really love the way you guys wrote bakura, he's hilarious. everything is just great. i love this. you have to write more soon. *holds up a box of chocolate* i'll let you have this if you do. onegai...? |
Reviewed By: Yami Callista On: December 06, 2002 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT! I haven't even finished this chapter yet and already have to review...seeing as Yami had Gyakutteno Megami in his hand! Love that card!
Uh anyway, the story rocks so far, and i haven't even gotten to the latest chapter yet, keep up the writing! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 06, 2002 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story. I only have found 2 other storys i realy like. |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome job once again you guys! Love your work, love what you've done, chapter eight is wonderful! |
Reviewed By: shadowedhalo On: December 05, 2002 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! i'm so happy you guys added another chap!!! 32 more pages of lemony-fresh bishieness!!! yayness! keep it going, and get that scanner!!!
p.s. - who be da sweat pants dude? |
Reviewed By: Aya Ishtar On: December 04, 2002 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the absolute best story i have read. I am so glad that you are at a new host so i can read it finally!!!! please please please get the next chapter out soon. More bakura/ryou please!! (Gotta love that pairing!!!) |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Bishies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 12:52 CST
Comment/Review:
-twirls baseball bat- My Spider Sense is going nuts.
Bakura: HE HURT MY LIGHT!
-whacks him with bat- Calm down, Baku-kun.
Bakura: -whacks her with bricks (with an 'S')
I GIVE UP! GO FUCK RYOU!
Bakura: -smacks her- watch you language |
Reviewed By: Akemi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*frowns* Where the hell is the rest of it? I want the rest NOW! ^^ -lol- Lovely chapter again
-Akemi |
Reviewed By: Akemi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts to sob* You guys, so wonderful for getting two chapters up!!!!! O.o It was so loverly and good. ;_; *bows to the Queens of Lemons* ^_^ I wuved it. Now, i must read the next chappie. OMG! having the D.mag come out! *squeals* Brilliance! :D |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: December 04, 2002 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girls!!!I'm so happy to see you guys switched to mediaminer....for a while there I thought you guys were gone for good...*sob*...You did a great job as usual...Please keep up the good work. I'm waiting for the next chappie on pins and needles.Don't keep us waiting too long! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This, without a doubt, was one of the funniest, most entertaining YuGiOu stories I have read on this site!!! You gotta hurry and finish this...all that hot shounen-ai had me sweatin'......congrats, you are now one of my fave authors!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 04, 2002 03:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting and very cool fic.It's getting intense now so need to read more! ^_^ Please continue!!! SOOON! ^_^ I like it very, very much. =D |
Reviewed By: AnimeFan On: December 04, 2002 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! I'm so glad to be reading the newest chapter!! You two just have to continue!!! ^-^ I'm also a writer here, Ya think I should post some of my stories? All I've been doing is posting Yami/Seto pictures that I drew. Hmmmmmmm...Love it, get the next chapter up soon please!!! |
Reviewed By: Nalan Li On: December 03, 2002 22:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Fffft. You don't want numbers assigned to this.
Chapter Nine. Now. I demand it.
Also - side story with poor D-mag. He needs... something. I have this image of a foursome, but the dynamics.... |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya On: December 03, 2002 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm too lazy to actually critique this! >P (if your wondering, it's not in enough to know originality, and I don't pay attention to petty things like spelling and grammar)
Ne, anyways....
Teikimon- "WHO DID NOT LIKE THE PAIRINGS!? OMAE O KOROSU!!! IT IS MY PARTNER'S FAVORITE AND I WILL INFORCE IT!!! YOU SHALL PERISH!!!!!"
Wow, it's so nice to have you around, Teikimon. Eee! I wan't to see some of your pics! -even if they are hentai.... O.O I think.... ^-^ Anyways, as always, great job, can't wait for the next, and.... **pauses** Er, One Winged Angel just turned on, I better not review anymore, or I'll end up seeming like an evil psychopath. Which I AM, just not that much of one. **sweatdrop**
Teikimon- **smiles evilly** "Whahahahaa...." |
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