| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: obssesobly seto On: November 16, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you HAVE to make more bite sized Yugi hasn't got to be on top. ::walks away and sulks for a while:: COME ON! Im going nuts!!!!! "AND" the lemon on J/Y was very short and undescriptive. I expected better from you. ... Did I do a good teacher impression? ^_^ I practised well please continue all storys. By the way dont mmind autumn(peg) she just liks the lemon :autumn(peg: HEY!! I resent that :obs seto: ^-^
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Reviewed By: Miss Sera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally get my computer and what do mine eyes percieve first? THIS STORY! I have been looking for ths story since it was kicked off back... yeah, I think it was the third time it was kicked off ff.net? *hands ya'll an award for 'The Most Times Getting Reported For The Same Story, Even Though It's Been Edited'. I still love this story, and I'm looking forward to an update! ^-^ Oyasumi-nasai, Soli-tachi! -Sera
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Reviewed By: Topazgirl On: September 23, 2003 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You guys ROCK! I reviewed on ff.net too 'cause I love this story SO much. Everything about it is great! I especially love the R/B relationship, but I'm not a big fan of throwing Joey in there, but that's my opinion. You've GOT to update SOON. (or else...knuckle sandwiches for motivation! BWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA). I just read the other stuff by you on this site, and it's all great, but please work on this too! *bambi eyes* pleeeeeeaaase? *blink blink*
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Reviewed By: YamiKiori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is an invitation from LOTSHA, DRSA and Gramma because you have been kicked off fanfiction.net too many times we would like to have your story on our site.
LOTSHA, DRSA and Gramma |
Reviewed By: Kurayami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheeeeeeeeeeeh! (Heh... BTW... Soli, this is 'Yami Spirit,' if you happen to remember me...)
Anyway... this is the compilation of what I love/think is interesting about this fic:
-Yami/Yugi/Seto
You guys have one of the two stories that can write this triange without me gagging... [sigh] so cute...
-'I will rape you and he will watch.'
My eyes may have popped out of my head when I read that. I don't know why, but I really liked Chapter 10 in general... I'm twisted that way... Even more twisted because I wish that would happen and SOON. Heh... hehe... Seto would kill somebody if that happened... Yay... looking forward to it!
-The name 'Ouiji'
I love it! It's SO cute!
-Seto and Yami's past
Ah.... It's so sad... 'There's always a choice!' because 'love never dies.'
-Yami and the Dark Magician's past
It's kind of cute... ^^
-How the Dark Magician is like Seto
Heh... I hadn't thought of that before... Kawaii
-Djet
I love that... Geeze... the list of stuff I love is getting long, ne?
-Ryou/Joey/Bakura
I only like this pairing when you write it... Bravo. Man... you made it work so... good...
-Screwing on the boat
Bakura and Ryou screwing so loud that people can't sleep is priceless.
-Suggestive Fruit
I will never think of bananas in the same way ever again. ><
-Kaiba chained to Pegasus' bed
Disturbing, plain and simple.
-How Djet thinks of Seto/Sekmehet (I hope I spelled that right)
Funny. Haha... the 'ungrateful mage left him unsatisfied.'
-Yami jacking off while his lovers have sex in front of him
O_o Haha...
-Everyone seems to always be wearing the same clothes
I don't know... I just noticed...
-Most of all, LEMON!
The story wouldn't be the same without it!
-Gangster names
Let's see... I memorized most of them...
S-Dogg
Darkside
Lil' Angel
Three feet
Em-class
T-bone
Big Whity
Lil Whity
D-Mag
Eh... I'm starting to forget... best stop before I misspell any more... But that's just to show you that your gangsta' names won't be forgotten... At least not by me...
-How Ouiji being aroused by Sekmehet was a common sight
-How Seto got turned on by Yami being violent to him
-How often Seto gets aroused (!!!)
-Yami thinks Yugi's cum tastes... good?
-I loved how, in an 'a/n,' you put 'imagine Seto's hot Japanese voice'It SO made the scene that much better because I love the Japanese voices so much...
-Everything!
I love you guys (gals... whatever, same thing..) you are the queens of fanfiction, worthy of all those reviews! Heh... If I misquoted some where along the way, I't because it's only from memory... And I mostly commented on the recent things because they are the freshest in my head.
And... this is non related to anything... but due to a recent development in the Japanese series, Seto and Yami were cousins in ancient Egypt... (oh well... it's not like they know...) Oh yeah... and the blue-eyed priest's name... is still Seto... >_< Except, y'know, it's 'Priest Seto-sama.' Thought you guys would want to know...
I even enjoyed writing the review! I just like thinking about the story...
Anyway, PLEASE update as soon as you can! I'm dying here!
So... I guess... Kono rebiou (review) wa owari desu... demo anata-tachi, matte... I will be back to write another long review... Ja! |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you guys seriously need to update this fascinating story. I want to know what they see when they cross the magical barrier. Also when will y'all update. I need to know. |
Reviewed By: Holly Trest On: July 02, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! When are you going to update this again? |
Reviewed By: White Phoenix On: August 22, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is there NOT like about this story? I mean it has Y/Y/S and R/B/J, which I LOVE!!!!!
You're right, ff.net is dumb. They shouldn't have gotten rid of NC-17 stories. Losing that many reviews is not cool, I mean you two worked on the chapters for hours and revising too.
There is a reason why people who write yaoi stories put up warnings in the first chapter saying there will be yaoi couplings, etc. People should learn to read those warnings.
Anyway, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO COME OUT!!!! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!!
Phiona: Loved it.
Exstacy! KEEP UPDATING!!
Phiona: ^^; Funny thing is, THIS -points thumb at Amy- Is a stupid 13 year old girl... And she loves lemons! Isn't that weird?
--; Ha, ha, keep updating. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 16:38 CDT
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I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!!*Continues to chant.* ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! *Jumps up and down happily.* |
Reviewed By: Kaji The Bloody Harlequin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH!!!! You are the most wonderful writers I have ever read!!! I simply love the plot line and the way you can take somone as BORING as Tea and make her likable!(I hate Tea) You have been an inspiration...Please continue...Or I WILL go medevil on your ass. j/k |
Reviewed By: SeaStorm On: June 12, 2003 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the first chapter very much, very original to make a sort of alternate ending to the duelist kingdom saga. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'd give you a 20 if it was an option!! Great work you two, I loved this to death!! The Nubian thing was great. I REALLY like what you've done with the whole Seto/Seto's past life thing with his character. Did that sentence make sense? Anyways, superb job here. Why the heck did you get kicked of ff.net again? You edited all that! Stupid people...
Can't wait to see more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Ezra On: June 09, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! *bounces* I'm so glad you guys have updated the new chapter! It's been forever!!! ^______^ Keep up the good work! Let's see some updates sooner, ne? |
Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Hops up and down* LovethisficlovethisficLOVEthisFIC!!! Eeeeee!!! *Runs around all hyper, then stops* Ok, I'm calm again. *Sweatdrop*
Ne, you do know that the Black Magician is Mahaado, right? *Has read much of fan-translated manga* Though Djet is a cool name too... And the stuff with Seto is bloody awesome!!! Sounds like he really got abused there... *wince* Geez, what is it with Seto and abusive fathers? At least Sekhmet's was his *real* father, not his adoptive one... yeesh. Oh, er, and you do know that Sekhmet is a *female* Egyptian goddess... right? ^^' Just thought I'd mention that... otherwise tis a fitting name for Seto's original form... Though I *think* Yu-Gi-Oh's creator (can't remember his name right now... > |
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