| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why must you stop updating? T-T This story's awesome so far! I wanna see what happens! >< *Waits with pocky*
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Reviewed By: crazy one [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading this in chunks for the past three days and i have to say that it's one of the best stories i've ever read (and i'm not just talking about the lemons). this, of course, means that i have to cry and complain until you post the next chapter. though, i've found that death threats work well too. *grin* btw, this has to be my favorite line: "'My jacket!' Joey whimpered. 'You couldn'a done that on Ryou's??'"
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 11:30 CST
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Goddamn you why don't you update or at least post that your not going to update but tell us what was gonna happen so we're not fying with suspence, come on pleeeeasseee!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that's so kewl!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: July 27, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:OMG i cant beileve i didnt think of this before now i know who it is the guy who took yami its Setos egyptian father if u will or also known as Akunadin i forgot about him right it ancient egypt during the battle between kaiba and Yami in the past they dueled against each other kaiba/Akunadin controling kaiba attacked and destroyed yugi's Dark Magician but before The BEWD could finish off the pharaoh he stopped disintergrated into blue sparkle kind of like how a monster is destroyed in duel monsters then he goes into kaibas mind and frees him frim akunadins grasp and per the rules of the shadow games was sent to the shadow realm cuz technically he lost jeeze i cant believe ididnt see it before and i read bout this from janime not too long ago heh some yugioh fan i am well if thats the answer to your mystery villain pls tell me in the mean time U HAD BEST UPDATE pls hehe i really really really really really Love yur stories andi would be VERY happy if u UPDATED well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^___^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(not logged in) On: June 25, 2004 13:15 CDT
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I didn't review!!! *gasps* You can't just leave us like this! We're dying! See? *points to various readers/reviewers and muses/yamis/whatever: *dying from lack of updates* See! You guys are too good to not finish this story(or Firemoth...but this is about ROTD)Anyway, update! Please? I'll give you cake!
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Reviewed By: celia On: May 25, 2004 19:16 CDT
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ahhh!! you need to finish. ;___; i'm so sad! its so good, but its not doooneee.. and you guys haven't updated in a loong while! noo!!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Wha? Wh.. why did you stop updating???
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Reviewed By: Velvetina On: March 16, 2004 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 18:29 CST
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UPDATE! I love all the lemons! ^_^ UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Xiamandelaine On: February 11, 2004 15:34 CST
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Well, you SAY it's almost done but....where's the NEXT chapter??? I'm absolutely dying to know what happens to Yami! And whoa, Bakura's being semi-nice now. heh Who would've ever seen the day... Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: autumn+obs seto On: November 17, 2003 20:14 CST
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ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD! :autumn::Wispers:were still on strike! :obs seto:Shut it! :Autumn:*^_^* ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!RTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ect.
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Reviewed By: autumn+obs seto On: November 17, 2003 20:13 CST
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ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD! :autumn::Wispers:were on strike! :obs seto:Shut it! :Autumn:*^_^* ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!RTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ect.
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Reviewed By: autumn+obs seto On: November 17, 2003 20:13 CST
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ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD! :autumn::Wispers:were on strike! :obs seto:Shut it! :Autumn:*^_^* ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!RTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ROTD!ect.
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 16, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:autumn:I do 2 like the story.I love the way you chang all of the emotions. :obs seto:Yeah. I went from happy to sad to angry to horny :autumn:Especily horny!/smiles and walks of/ :obs seto:Told you it was the lemon.and you dont want ot know what she is going ot do.I love dthis chapter. It was so good. :autumn:/has cocme back after a little witha very red face and sweat beeds lining her forhead/there was defanetly plot. It came out alot in this chapter. :obs seto:What were you doing? :autumn:/blushies lightly/Nothing.-_- :obs seto:RRiigghhtt.any please continue.Im thinking about posting one of my storys. :autumn:OUR storys :obs seto:~_~ fine.OUR stors. please read and see what you think. :autumn:More lemon please!^-^/walks off again/ obs seto
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