| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Furie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best thing!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Wonder what Yami will say about the DM and when will they all remember their past relationships?
and I LOVE the couples! Y/YY/Seto is SOO cool
I REALLY HATE TEA!! |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Bishies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 12:53 CST
Comment/Review:
that would be kinda bad if he did tell ya mom... -scratches back of head- Now that you think about it-
Bakura: -smacks Angel again- |
Reviewed By: Yaoi Princess Serena On: December 03, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so HAPPY that your story is now to be found again! I also LOVED the chapter, it was well worth the wait! I can't wait for the next one, but I'll wait, with.........OH OH Yu Gi Oh is on!! Gotta cut it short, I'm taping! BUT keep up the awesome work, and I can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully there will be a good bit of R/B/J slashy goodness in there? maybe? hopefully? PLEASE?? I'll bake cookies!! |
Reviewed By: Problems On: December 03, 2002 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree. FF.net is evil.
Vvvveeeeerrrryyyy eeeevvvviiilll! |
Reviewed By: ChibiBoko On: December 03, 2002 13:49 CST
Comment/Review:
^o^ YESSS! IT'S BACK!!
And better than ever, too. ^_^ Hey, you've got Otogi in there! Figures he and Mai would get along. Heh.
I can't wait to see your guys' artwork! I'm getting a scanner for Christmas too. ^_^
So, are there going to be any other characters making appearances? Like Malik? And poor Joey, now that he seems to have everything figured out, something crazy happens. *shakes head*
So is that how you un-summon the Dark Magician? *smirks* No wonder Yugi was having so much trouble. Yami's definitely got some explaining to do..
MORE!! I can't wait to read chapter nine! |
Reviewed By: ChibiBoko On: December 03, 2002 03:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Alright! Found it again! ^_^ For some reason the story got erased on ffnet *again*, so I thought I'd try my luck here!
But you don't have chapter eight up! *wails*
Please update this soon, I barely had the chance to start reading chapter eight on ffnet before I had to go to work, and now I come home to find it GONE! -_- *pouties*
Hey, have you ever thought of submitting this to smoochies? |
Reviewed By: Achika-chan On: November 30, 2002 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I read this on FF.Net. WHy aren't you guys 'active members' anymore? |
Reviewed By: Jade_chan On: November 17, 2002 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really liked. I read most of it on ff.net. Btw, ummm, what happened? It says that your account there is no longer active. I hope you continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Zheryta On: October 12, 2002 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please keep going. |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami On: September 29, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That rocks! PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!! OH YEA!! WRITE IT!! By the way..this is da author of the Shadow Games..and as for your question earlier.. about where the puzzle was..it has vanished. As for Anzu/Tea thing..I was aware..but you will see how they tie in together..dun worry *snicker* |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY Yugi And Seto! Seto Is so hot I would of even like him better with Mai! OR EVEN TEA! cum on! Wat the bleeps your problem!
0_o;
hehehe |
Reviewed By: Sashii On: September 29, 2002 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_____^
Glad this fic has an alternate hom now. Grrr, stupid ff.net...::coughcough:: Yeah. ^_^()
::waits anxiously for the next parts and a new chapter:: |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Bishies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:46 CST
Comment/Review:
ORIGINALLY I WOULDN'T insult my favorite card, but this is an acception. D.M. YOU PERVERT!!!
Bakura: --;;;;;; |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ Hey guys (again)!!! Glad to see you posting this here too, hopefully in all its wonderful lemon-ness. ^.~ Hehehehehehe.... Can't wait to see when things really start to heat up!! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good! I hope you continue with this story. I can't wait to see what plot your going to put into it, though. Please post more as soon as possible! |
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