| "Return of the Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelStarFire On: June 09, 2003 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^o^ Wow... that was cute... poor Seto! He's not gonna be able to get those images out of his head for DAYS! *grins* And don't get me started on the Ryou/Bakura lemon... I'm a sucker for those. ^o^ |
Reviewed By: Kitsune On: June 09, 2003 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait as always! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: physh On: June 09, 2003 02:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD WHOO HOO! Great chapter, and well worht the wait. . . though if you make us wait that long again. . . *sharpens axe*
o.o I liked the Yugi/Seto stuff. I'm a major Yugi fan, so anything that focusses on him. . . And I liked the bit of Yugi/Seto Bonding. That was cool.
Poor Yugi though. ;_; he's the only one in the Y/YY/S relationship who doesn't really have his own magic. . . just stuff he 'borrows' from Yami. o.o; He can't even handle the puzzle!
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Reviewed By: Alpha Slave On: June 09, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xD. I spoil you two, really. I listed all tens, cause, even if your spelling and other crap isnt perfect (I don't pay attention in fics this good!!) THIS STORY ROCKS SOCKS!!! *slaps "Alpha's Seal of Approval" on it* And I do read the authors notes. And, hey, if you EVER need someone to host this biznitch, give me a ring..or an IM...which ever. NEXT CHAPTER HAYAKO KUDASAIIIII |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: How can anyone pick just one line?
Karen: I love everything Bakura says! Mmmm, lemon flavored Bakura. One of my favorites, next to chocolate flavored and sugar coated ^_^
LD: Loved the various and sundry inappropriate mushiness. Some time you just can't help when you want to screw.
Karen: Dammit, don't be so crass. You know, magically powerful Seto is even scarier than pissed off CEO Seto. Friggin cool!
LD: You know, I really did like that Nubian line. It was a very Bakura thing to say, all violent and, to use one of Karen's words, crass. ^_^ I just love it when he talks dirty!
Karen: But it is so cute, he is trying to protect Ryou and Joey. Underneith all of that roughness, there is a real sweety.
LD: Ugh, don't say that. he is going to kick major ass. Maybe Pegasus will be so terrified of him, after that whole eye incident, that he will run screaming like the girly man that he is. I mean, come on, not even Ryou wears pink.
Ryou: Hey!
Karen: She didn't mean it, Love. |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Finally, Chapter 11. I love all tthe stuff between Yugi and Seto. It kept switching between dark and mysterious to sweet and light! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I really love this story so far. You two are really great writers! I hope you post more soon! I really want to see what happens when they find Yami! |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 08, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! (On the floor, begging) Please! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
YEESH! Can you say, "Pleasant surprise?" That's what I got when I looged on and found this here. WAHOO! I don't think it's possible for me to pick a single favourite line, because quite frankly I adored the whole thing especially that bit between Yami and the BM! It was just so cute!!
Oh, and thanks for the clarification of that aff.net thing. I was afraid it was just me! Phew! (I'm paranoid)
Anyway, thanks again! I'm just a succour for you guys' (well that sounds odd) stories and I can't wait until you can update more of them. (Such long chapters too!)
Bye! |
Reviewed By: Setzer On: June 08, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Solitaire and Xpyne RULE ALL! Hehehe ^^() that and I like my Bakura and Ryou getting off with Jonouichi-kun... who wouldn't? Umm... I also have the (c) of teh RABPA (Ryou And Bakura Protection Agency), so if I ever catch anyone abussing them they go to jail...
Ryou: **Sweet smile**
Bakura: Solitaire pinched my ass before... **shudders** it took 58 consecutive showers and deep scrubbings until I felt clean.
Ryou: **giggles**
Setzer: .... **sigh** |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. I have it saved in my fav folder and can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! *Giggles.* Continue soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ChibiChula On: April 19, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed the story so far immensely. The characterization is almost perfect, the plot (what there is of it) is interesting, and the lemon is yummy. =^-^= This alternate version of events is wonderful. All in all, a great read.
Heh... Must say that I also enjoy the author comments. They can be pretty amusing. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
BTW, I must give thanks to Akira for recommending I read this. ^___^
@}~~)~~~ ChibiChula ~~~(~~{@ |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: April 14, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Oh my friggin' goddess!!
Duo: She likes it.
Vega: OMG! I can't take this!!
Wufei: Really likes it.
Vega: Please! PLEASE! MORE!!
*Wufei and Duo look at each other*
Wufei: We think you can translate that one.
Duo: Yeah. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
:-( Awwww, I've run out of chapters to read. Now, like everyone else, I must wait for you to update.
The freaky sniffing habit is creepy...but that just lends so much more to the mood of the setting.
I'm ready to drop, so I can't think of any glowing praise that the chapter deserves (sigh). Suffice it to say I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Go, D-Mag! LOL! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Coming down the home stretch...
Chibi Joey - LOL!
Ah, the return of D-Mag, er, Dark Magician. And Joey's flashback was certainly interesting!
One nitpicky spelling thing I noticed (and that's pretty good, considering that I usually bypass that stuff when I'm enthralled with the story as I am). Facetious is spelled with all the vowels appearing in order. (One of those boring trivia facts. Facetious and absetemious are the only two words in which they all appear in order. And facetiously even includes "and sometimes y" ha! I'm rambling, don't mind me.)
I am eager to see this artwork you keep alluding to! (Huffing indignantly at mm.org's inability to show me that which I so desire to view!)
The chapter had a lot of focus on the Bakura/Kura Joey/Jono past relationship, but still managed to squeeze in a bit of Yami/Yugi/Seto action (claps delightedly). Can I blame the two of you for my recent obsession with seeing (so to speak) these three (both sets of three) "in action"?
One more chapter to go and then I will have no excuse for postponing the demands of the real world (but this story is much more enjoyable, ne?) |
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