| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must...find...STREET CORNER!!!
Kurai: You guys make an excellent team. Very impressed I am.
Shut up Yoda! BEG, DAMN YOU!!
Kurai: (drops to all fours and smaks head on ground...repeatedly) PLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE! See?! We beg!
(whips out a map) Street corner...(mumbles incoherently)
Kurai: -_- Uh...kay. My authoress has totally lost it right now.
HOLD THY TOUNGE, NAVE!! (threatens w/map)
Kurai: YOU shut up! Don't make me get the pillow!
WAH!! No!! No fluffy soft badness! (dives under the desk)
Kuari: God. So sorry. This story is wonderful, we look forward the next chapter.
-Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoooaaaa!! This is a VERY promising fanfic! Your writing talent is fantastic! And you've gotten me so interested that I can already feel myself going crazy waiting for more. How could you leave it at such a cliffhanger?! HOW?! Excellent work! Please update soon! *puppydog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Cat On: April 11, 2003 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to give you my e-mail address! It's Akaina2001@aol.com |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM!!!!! U 2 must continue soooon! I know u guys r good authors, and one chapter's not NEARLY enough! Which, of course, is an understatment! ;) |
Reviewed By: Neo Zekele On: March 18, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a very good writer, and you also express your talent a lot in this piece. Very nice work. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I think Dark Seraph wrote Radditz and Rogue wrote Jeice. Am I right? I like this, it's different than the usual going into Vegeta's mind and reliving memories to know who he is, he's living them. And getting to know his dear brother. |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sob* How sad!!! Always wondered about the lust for fighting... *whimper* Very interesting fic, quite curious about this little machine. (Don't have time at the moment, read the next two chapters as soon as I can, promise!)
And just a note to you: Never challange me. *sadistic grin* And sorry about the tiger thing. Didn't occur to me to actually read the prelude to the Dragon fic. *slaps forehead* That would have made it even more... interesting. o.O'
Lotta love
Master of Squickyness!
Hehe... |
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