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| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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A’nore: Damn it! Vegeta fed him! Waaah! I like my Saiyan hungry! Damn! *starts tossing pieces of batter-fried chicken to Kikoro, Chibi Gemi, Tank-girl, punker182biatch, Goku’s Goddess, Kureeji, Talon Sage, Xero Sky, Naturi, SaintMe, Jady and Dynishra the Vampire in her penthouse and any other unnamed individuals, then pours each a nice and large pina colada*
L’orn: *reading authors’ notes* Hum.... angelic smiles? Never had anyone say that before! *glances in mirror and practices her smile then looks up trying to find that damn halo, spots the one over her twin’s head and makes a grab for it only to get slapped back*
A’nore: Now don’t touch! I earned that feeding the masses. Remember the story of the fishes and loaves of bread? * waves her hand at the large group of people who are setting up chairs to watch the rest of this astounding fic, while eating fried chicken and drinking very strong pina coladas.*
L’orn: *now looking up for a fatal lightening strike at her sister words.* You’re tempting fate again! It is sacrilegious to talk about God and this story in the same review. Dark Serapha and Rogue write a much better story. Besides you know I hate fish, give me a very rare steak instead!
A’nore: I really liked this chapter! I found a couple of things that I really never thought I would hear thought or said about Goku and I just had to laugh. “Son showed his intelligence.” When? “I guess you *are* useful” How?
Oh and by the way, running around naked is *always* an option!
L’orn: What about what they wrote about Vegeta? Diplomatic and respectful? Relaxed and Calm? Acted so Considerate? Acted too Innocently? That is enough to make a Vegeta worshipper, such as myself, cry!
Wait!... Innocent Vegeta, isn’t that an oxymoron? *shakes her head in shames as she secretly reread this wonderful fic again*
A’nore: Poor sis, I don’t know how she’ll ever get over this. But I’m sure she’ll manage.
Oh by the way IT IS THE TAILS!--EVERYONE LOVES THE TAILS!
*looks around to make sure no one is listening before whispering to Dark Serapha.........“Pssts...Where can I get one of Vegeta's "souveniers" ?”* | Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: February 25, 2003 12:35 CST
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hi... um, i am new *blushes, looking at feet* just wanted to say that your story is awesome.*fidgets, smiles nervously* can't wait fir the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Kikoro On: February 22, 2003 10:40 CST
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Again awesome chapter. I have nothing to say other than, my poor Veji-chan! damn Jeice, Getas mine! How dare he lay a finger on him, only im allowed to touch him like that!.....*ahem* sorry for the rant but still i cant wait for more. *paces back and forth on the street corner* update soon. Onegai! *puppy dog eyes* | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(fidgets)
Kurai: (glances up from Dark Serapha's leg)...she's up to something.
(chains fall away) MWHAHAHAHA!!! (glomps Rogue) Awwwww!! (nuzzles) lovelovelovelovelovelove (bats at Rogue's tail, entranced)
Kurai: ZARBON'S SCAREY!! (squeezes D.S.'s leg tighter) JEICE IS SUNBURNED!!!
smutsmutsmutsmut...(still batting at tail) Smart Kaky is good...(pouts) want Kaky and Jita make hot monkey sex! (nuzzles) You such a good authoress.
Kurai: Yeah, so is Dark Serapha. (purrs) ^_^ They even better together.
Trio: More soon? (Son puppy dog eyes(TM))
Later Dayz & tANx!!
-Gemi, Y.Gemi & Kurai | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really addictive stuff, once started I just can't stop reading, uuuh this suspense ist teriffic ! | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cooool Goko's first encounter with this younger Vegeta's it's soooo fascinating and thrilling, can't wait to read more ! | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 20, 2003 18:02 CST
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*snickers* how's THAT for attention-getting? | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 20, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^0 Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier... damn teachers and their "homework"...*grumbles* They're draining my mind power and I cannot think of any creative way to summarize how good ur workings r. *takes a look at the long line of insane fan reviewers* I'm sure it would be a bit difficult to stand out in this crowd anyways...
But as I said... journalism and creative writing have taken a toll upon my brain... I just have one thing to ask of u two... considering ur grammar.
" I humped and turned away, folding my arms indignantly. "
I ran into phrases like this a few times where our saiyans "humped" where they should have "humphed". And suprisingly enough, it was ONLY Goku and Vegeta... Coincidence or conspiracy...?
Oh well... they'd better be humping SOMETHING soon in this fic or I may have to get as aggressive as a few of ur other reviewers... ;)
PS- Thanks for the compliment... ^_^ it's not everyday I get called "too smart for my own good" *snickers and frolicks off to wait by the corner* | Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 16:19 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
u 2 have put alot of work into this... well at least it seems that way.
KEEP IT UP!!!
i am want more... no i NEED more :D | Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 16:16 CST
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Hey there. Just wanted yout o know how much I enjoyed this fic so far. You are doing such a wonderful job, I doubt anyone could do it better. Thanks for writing this and good luck with future chapters ^^ | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light, we find our dedicated reviewer A’nore quietly twirling the purple umbrella in her pina colada as she reads Chapter 4 of this rather awesome fan fic. She is blown away by the interaction between the naive Goku and the immensely seductiveness Zarbon. By the way she believes Zarbie’s character is written by Dark Serapha. When is Goku gonna get a clue? Unfortunately she is interrupted by the gagging, breathless remains of her older twin, L’orn, collapsing in the chair next to her.
A’nore: What happened to you? *raises one eyebrow in question, then goes back to reading*
L’orn: She choked me. *waves over at a smirking Rogue as she coughs and hacks painfully for a few minutes* I just wanted to touch Veggie, only managed to grab his hair when I really wanted to grab his--
A’nore: L’ORN!!
L’orn: -arm...What?
A’nore: Um...Nothing! I’ve got another great idea, though. *L’orn groans as she wraps arms around head and waits for either nuclear explosion or lightening to strike her dead*
A’nore: No, no really this is a good one! Much better than the last one! *A’nore pulls out several capsule and throws them on the table*
L’orn: Okay, I’ll bite. *winks at Vegeta, then indicates capsules* What are these?
A’nore: Well since you didn’t have much luck with Vegeta, I thought we might try a little tamer prey...my favorite Saiyan...Goku.
L’orn: Oh Yes! Sweet, powerful, cute, buff, cuddly, naive...I meant innocent Goku. *rubs her hands together in anticipation* Just what did you have in mind for your special Super Saiyan?
A’nore: Bribery! *pops open several capsules that contain buckets and buckets of deep fried chicken* Plus I’ve got a half a dozen gallons of my own special pina colada mix to wash it down with! Oh here’s a good one! How many pina coladas does it take to make a Saiyan drun..I mean... inebriated?
L’orn: Inebriated? Oh... I understand...big words to keep Goku...perplexed. *winks* I don’t know sis, how many?
A’nore : I don‘t know either, but it’s going to be so much fun finding out! Oh Goku! *waves large yummy chicken breast and a gallon of pina colada at poor starving Goku * Sweetie! Would you like a bite? I know I would! | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light, we find our dedicated reviewer A’nore quietly twirling the purple umbrella in her pina colada as she reads Chapter 4 of this rather awesome fan fic. She is blown away by the interaction between the naive Goku and the immensely seductiveness Zarbon. By the way she believes Zarbie’s character is written by Dark Serapha. When is Goku gonna get a clue? Unfortunately she is interrupted by the gagging, breathless remains of her older twin, L’orn, collapsing in the chair next to her.
A’nore: What happened to you? *raises one eyebrow in question, then goes back to reading*
L’orn: She choked me. *waves over at a smirking Rogue as she coughs and hacks painfully for a few minutes* I just wanted to touch Veggie, only managed to grab his hair when I really wanted to grab his--
A’nore: L’ORN!!
L’orn: -arm...What?
A’nore: Um...Nothing! I’ve got another great idea, though. *L’orn groans as she wraps arms around head and waits for either nuclear explosion or lightening to strike her dead*
A’nore: No, no really this is a good one! Much better than the last one! *A’nore pulls out several capsule and throws them on the table*
L’orn: Okay, I’ll bite. *winks at Vegeta, then indicates capsules* What are these?
A’nore: Well since you didn’t have much luck with Vegeta, I thought we might try a little tamer prey...my favorite Saiyan...Goku.
L’orn: Oh Yes! Sweet, powerful, cute, buff, cuddly, naive...I meant innocent Goku. *rubs her hands together in anticipation* Just what did you have in mind for your special Super Saiyan?
A’nore: Bribery! *pops open several capsules that contain buckets and buckets of deep fried chicken* Plus I’ve got a half a dozen gallons of my own special pina colada mix to wash it down with! Oh here’s a good one! How many pina coladas does it take to make a Saiyan drun..I mean... inebriated?
L’orn: Inebriated? Oh... I understand...big words to keep Goku...perplexed. *winks* I don’t know sis, how many?
A’nore : I don‘t know either, but it’s going to be so much fun finding out! Oh Goku! *waves large yummy chicken breast and a gallon of pina colada at poor starving Goku * Sweetie! Would you like a bite? I know I would! | Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 06:46 CST
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Heh. Silly Goku, messing with Bulma's inventions. You are a very very talented author. Your writing style is great. You write out every thought and intricate feeling of the characters, and its easy to beleive what they are feeling. The way you switch back from each POV is very cool, it is easier for the reader to understand why a certain character is feeling the way he is. | Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...so wonderful...I look forward to loosing myself in the rest of this truly original and wonderful fic. YOu KNOW how I adore angst, ne?
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I've only had a chance to read the prologue and the first chapter...I intend to read the rest tonight and leave you both a review.
Serapha, you've teased and tantilized me with tidbits and pictures from this for a couple of months now...Kami-sama...even with those to go on, I still was not prepared for the sheer SCOPE of this fic.
As I said...I look forward to losing myself in this...just as soon as the chibi goes to bed. *grins*
*hugs Dark Serepha and Rouge tightly*
Later!!!! | Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh!!!!! EEWWWWW i hate Jeice! i hate Zarbon!
they disgust me with their gay pretty boyness!!
and and... eww i just hate them...
Oh well..
hmmm...*looks about her nice top story penthouse* its amasing how far i am from that dirty little street corner that i refuse to visit!
I WONT!
my lovely velvet will get ruined you know. theres only so many places you can visit with out it geting dusty. >>
besides i wouldnt be caught dead there.. oh wait i am dead.. damn it!
still i will not go! im quite happy gaining the um.. chapters through my handy laptop..
well any way.. if either of you are interested, check out my story Distant Light Years, it would be nice to hear either of your oppinions on it...
well chow for the mo..
~the great Dynishra the Vampire~ | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
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