| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Title: ch2
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing, I am thoroughly enjoying the intricate world you have created. I am fascinated with the subtle yet pronounced nuances which make the alternate timeline Vegeta different to his 'real' timeline counterpart, and how this affects how Vegeta and Goku interact with one another. Goku seems more comfortable having an openly protective attitudefor Vegeta, an attitude which would not be permitted by the other Vegeta. I also love the format of the story, the way it alternates between Vegeta and Goku's point of view, allowing us an insight in to the character's mind's.
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Title: why all the reviews are so old
Reviewed By: topbear1974 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does that mean the story discontinoued? I love it so so much. Please please write more!! Thanks
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Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 22:44 CDT
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I must have more. Have computer will review.
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Title: Sephykoi
Reviewed By: Yousi On: December 03, 2004 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D00de... Where'd Rouge go? *cries* I know we discussed this before but... X_X *just finished reading ALL these chapters & goes crazy w/want* Nooooooo...! ^^;;
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Reviewed By: roze kitsune On: August 22, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When's the next chapter comming out?? Please please please write more, I can't wait to see what happens next!! This is such a great story!
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Title: PiccoloLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 14:38 CDT
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Okay, that does it. What happened to you guys?! I have finally narrowed down the list of possibilities to a grand total of two: #1) you have fallen off the face of the earth, and #2) you have a major case of writers block. As per the solutions: for #1) find someone related to a demon and sell your soul for a computer and internet access (be careful to list the details of what you want, though -- demons can be tricky). And for #2) Eat chocolate. Lots of it. I mean TONS. 'Cause chocolate cures all...with the exception of pimples and related things like that, but that's another story...yeah. Well, anywho, your story still rocks, so please, please, pleeeeeease find a way to update soon!!! As for me, I'm off to throw chocolate off the face of the earth... ^__~ Later!!!(HOPEFULLY?)
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 21, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so loving the story right now please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: May 18, 2004 14:02 CDT
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OK, what happened to you guys??? Don't you know that you have tons of adoring fans sitting on edge waiting for you to write more of this story? You can't just leave us hanging! I'M GOING THROUGH WITHDRAW HERE, FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!! Please, please, please, pleeeeease write more soon!!! We need you guys! *looks around at other reviewers* Right? Okay, then! It's unanomous... WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: April 13, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW................................................................ummmmmm, more please!!! (I love your details, and originality, and creativity, and, and, and...well, write quickly!!! I know you haven't updated for several months, but don't give up -- we love you guys and I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 08:30 CST
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hey what happened to you two? did the yaoi-con suck you down and you're lost in a void of bishonen-goodness unable to get back to us and update us on this scruptios ficcy?? Please, PLEASE post soon! I miss you two and want the rest of this fic! Chibi Hoshi*
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Reviewed By: hitchhiker On: February 16, 2004 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. This is an absolutely amazing fic, where the hell did you get such brilliantly hentai ideas? But you have deprived your yaoi-loving audience for far too long! PLEASE update! If what's coming up is anything like the video files *licks lips*....i can't wait... but please update soon, this fic is way too good to be abandonned! and i'd hate to have to use my still-in-it's-shop-wrapping electric sporker on you guys!
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Moosie On: January 07, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAA!!!!!!!!! hahahahahaha at last an author who can rival my own sadistic tendencies. some of those scenes were just plain wrong. were do you get this stuff??? it's amazing!!! this is, by far, one of the best fics i have ever read. this is coming from someone who spends waaaaaaaay too much time reading on the net.0_0 but you my dear Dark Serapha, are a talented and gifted author. SO SIT YOUR ASS DOWN AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER please?
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Reviewed By: Maylar On: November 29, 2003 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story UpDate Soon!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, amazing, fantastic!! I can't wait to read more, especially about how the Present (sans Goku) timeline is going. The way you are presenting point of view is really great, and you are both doing wonderful jobs with charaterization. I would also like to add that the art that you've done for this story really wonderful. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update (which will hopefully be very soon!).
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