| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Glorificus On: October 09, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is among the best I have ever read. Your style of writing is excellent. I also like the use of Jeice in the story. It is so hard to find good yaoi with Jeice in it!
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Reviewed By: Gryphon Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd've given you a twelve or thirteen on the enjoyment factor, but MM.org doesn't allow that sort of thing. *smirks* By all means, do continue! Swiftly, with lots of romance on the GokuxVegeta front! Sometimes the many POV switches can get confusing, but you make it lots of fun to read what different people are thinking about each other! Are you gonna' make Goku spill the beans about the future? Or show his SSJ form? *sigh* It would be awesome if you would, but talk about screwing up the timeline! Sheesh! Maybe . . . *smiles slyly* Maybe you could make Goku do all that oh-so-cool stuff that I mentioned above and make the resulting timeline merely branch off from the original one. That might be kinda' cool . . . Hmm. But what would happen to Mirai Vegeta . . . It's too confusing for me. You've got it covered. Keep up the good work! Ja! ~Gryphon Gal~
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Reviewed By: vegetaslillady On: August 20, 2003 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was amazing!!! please please update!!!!i want to know what happens! if u are please E-mail me at ZweetAZrevenge@aol.com.............PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: August 17, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I luv this story! Its great, it has evry thing in it that makes an excellent story! I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter (11)! Poor Goku! He`s tortmented through the whole chapter, though you can say he seems to like some of it very much! ^_^ I`ve waited so long for some action between Goku and Vegeta!! |
Reviewed By: Jada Flame On: July 05, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading the different POVs. Only about halfway through it (as of now), but still doggedly reading. The dialogue thingies at the ends of the chapters are very amusing as well.
Yes, yes, I want the hidden link(s?)!!
jade.empress@wildmail.com
Hurry hurry please! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: FaNaTiC On: June 11, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! This has got to be one of my most, most, favorite fics on the net. You got me hooked on Zarbon x Jeice pairings. You're also a great writer! KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, other than it being evil, sadistic and utterly cruel to the point of...
just plain wrongness... hehe
i loved it absoluely. i believe that has to be the number one most sadistic chapters so far.
made even my skin crawl.
very very nice indeed ^_~
can't wait for more!
~Dynishra the Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: Amaris On: June 04, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and i usually don't go in for ones that change from person to person! keep it up i would love to read more! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
*glances around corner, wary of the croud and watchful eyes*
Hmmm... my, not vain at all are we Dynishra? Very confident, typical vampire.... *chuckles* I think I got a little ahead of mysef though; no threats intended... *smirks* just commenting--creatures such as yourself tend to get on my nerves at times--but you're the Lovelies' customer--not mine. *grins* Thank god.
Though... what could possibly be so horrible with all the other 'customers' lurking about! *laughs* It wouldn't kill you to... 'get your hands dirty' once in a while, now would it? *grins*
Ahhh... anyhow, threats, idle threats... *smirks confidently* I don't need to watch my back... I may not be of this world either but I'm sure you should be more concerned about your back than mine Dynishra... *taps Lionheart strapped to my waist lovingly* *turns away, to walk back to safe 'hiding place', away from the crowds* The only thing I have to worry about is all those people *shudders* I hate large crowds....
*stops and sighs* Anyhow, wonderful chapter as have all your chapters been--I was a little shocked that you finally went back to Goku's real time--I was wondering if you lovelies were ever thinking about that. *smiles* I really wanted to see what was going to happen when Goku woke up, but I suppose I can wait. *winks*
Reading Vegeta's POV was pretty interesting though--i really did like this chapter a lot--it made sense of a lot of things--at least to me--poor Goku...
*starts to walk off* Well anyway, I will be waiting patiently (though patience is certainly not one of my better virtues) for the next arrival of this lovely fic.... Sayonara... for now. |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Finally!
*glomps story she read over a week ago*
That was a very facinating chapter. heh half way though i thought there might be something with vegeta and gohan, but of course not!
HA! Silly me...
Well your courner isnt half as bad as i thought, plenty of ruffians about!
I already killed two stalkers. Quite tasty they were.
Looking forward to the next tid bit.
chow!
~Dynishra the Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: May 01, 2003 07:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so curious, why he reacts so pissed, when someone wants to talk about sayajin maturity. It has definitely something to do with the things Friza did to him. The time line doesn't change, so what does this mean? I'm a little bit confused, because Goku's interference will change things...or not? Oh, I really have to know. Please don't leave me completely clueless for a long time and update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: SSJGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what can I express what thousand others havent said before?
As you may notice, Im from a not english speaking country and so I was a bit afraid to post a comment, because I (still! *damnit*)cant speak or write probably.But after 9 bombastic chapters I just HAD to say at least SOMETHING.
Well, Im totally enthusiastic about it. (is that a sentence? never mind)
I just dont understand why Jeice was stronger than Zarbon at the beginning and that changed later on? Probably I just overread something important or simply mix things up...well, I cant do more than keep on learning. *sniff*
To be honest, I first thought about dedicating a picture about your story, to impress my admiration, but after seeing your own pictures, which I just couldnt match with (especially the coloration), I pushed that thought down.
Well, the only thing I can do, is writing this litle review, just to say: Keep on writing! Where's the next (long?) chapter? and: where are the chips?
How can you write in such a...*searching for words* ...unbelievable, great manner, quality - whatever.Hope u know what I wanted to say with those few lines.
Cya |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weeeeeee!! Jita in a swiming pool!
Kurai: Wet Ouji-sama...
Y.Gemi: (tipsy as Hell w/a video camera) Fun time! Come on Ouji, work wtih me! Woohoo! Shake it!
...-_- I need to put a lock on the Lemon cart...
Kurai: Vejita has a begining bond...hehe...and Trunks is almost as innocent as Kaky-chan...
Poor Jita. Does he not have any rememberance of the things that are taking place in the past?...Or maybe he does remember, just, um...Ow.
Kurai: Aw, poor baby. Well, as always, that was perfect you guys! Gohan was pretty cool too. Update soon please! ^_^
Y.G.: =^_^= More naked Jita!
(hits Y.G. on the head w/a book) That's enough out of you.
Y.G.: x_x
Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^
Gemi, Kurai & Yami Gemi |
Reviewed By: lahelahe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 04:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dear Dark Serapha and Rogue
I have been reading it as time has permited and find it very enjoyable. Actually the interplay between the authors characters is highly enjoyable also(and that is because I really enjoy a well crafted converstion.) You are both skilled in drawing the readers into the story and making them invest in the outcome, either of the chapter or the story as a whole. I find that I am eagerly awaiting the next installment, even checking somethimes at work. That is a BIG no-no too. If possible I would like to see the other hidden chapter cause I am dying to see how you handle it.
You two have a good grasp of the post-assault emotional state of the victems. Both short and long-term. I wish more writers would acknowledge that the characters should not bounce back and go on like nothing happened after traumatic events, there will be long term emotional, psychological and physical reactions.
Thank you for this one. Mahalo Nui Loa.
Lahelahe |
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