| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kikoro On: February 14, 2003 19:17 CST
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*Drools all over keyboard* Oh ya! Gettin to the good stuff. Got to love those half naked Saiya-jins covered in blood and rolling around on the floor. *thinks about the fight scene for a while then snaps back to reality.* Excellent stuff. I will remain on the street corner as one of your loyal readers, ever anticipating more lemony goodness.
I will take a stab at the challenge too, I think Rouge did Jeice mainly cause she has a thing for Goku in the Outro. Taking him into the darkness eh? *torture ensues.* |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ (sighs)
THAT...was BEAUTIFUL!!!
Kauri: (pops out of the shadows and stares)...HENTAI!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ (glomps Dark Serapha) Pretty wings! I wanna role around with Kaky and Jita too! (purrs and nuzzles Dark Serapha's leg)
Hey!! YOUR GOING TO CAUSE MENTAL SCARING! LEAVE THE HOLY AUTHORESS ALONE!! (struggles in the chains) Quick, Yami Gemi, get out here!!
(Chibi form of Gemi pops out of NOW WHERE, only with small black wings) WHAT!?!?! (spots Dark Serapha) 0_0 Angel?? BLACK WINGS!! (glomps D.s.'s other leg)
NO!! Ack, the poor H.A. I'm so sorry! When I get out of these, I'll help....or glomp Rogue so she doesn't feel left out. ^_^
All 3: MORE SOON PLEASE!!!! WE LOVE YOU!!!!
-Later DAyz & tAnx!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 17:19 CST
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Hmmm... I'm not sure who's scarier, u two or ur reviewers... *shrugs* Hell, I'm not complaining though! If it turns out chapters like this, the more insanity, the better! ^_^
Evil Jeice, Dodoria, Zarbon, Frieza, and everyone else out to get Vegeta's ass! Goku should've busted Dodoria in the jaw! Grr... evil time restrictions as well... But if it's like Mirai's machine, would it TECHNICALLY screw up Goku's timeline...? *wide grin*
But what I'm wondering is if the food on Frieza's ship is that bad, do Radditz and Nappa have the same eating problem as Vegeta? Or do they just have less sensitive stomachs and tastebuds? Cause they've gotta be almost, if not more than, twice Vegeta's size... Hmmm...
Oh well... my mind's on overdrive right now. Can't wait for the purging chapter and for the lemon meter to go up a few notches ^_^ Happy writing and good luck! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: February 07, 2003 18:59 CST
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I just love AU's. I have to admit that I am really curious as to what you two have planned. I like this Vegeta but feel for the Vegeta left in the future. This is definitely a great deal of fun to read. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 02:54 CST
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Ohh this is a really good fic! I like it! Ive never read one like this before! I hope vegeta somehow remembers goku, although I guess he hasnt really met him yet! Oh well!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Chapter great!
Can't wait to see how Raditz takes this. Hehehe...
Kurai: I hope he spaz-ez. (can't spell. -_-;)
Kay, we'll go and wait immpatiently for the next installment of this wonderful epic. GO ROGUE AND DARK SERAPHA, WE LOVE YOU!! ^_^v
-Later DAyz & TAnx!!
Gemi & Kurai |
Reviewed By: SaiyanTrombone [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off: AAAGH!!!! I love that song!!!! ^_^;;; Anyways, it fit very well... Love what you're doing with this. The whole "switching between two POV's" thing makes for an interesting read. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: nene On: February 05, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm not often here, but I enjoy this story very much. Please continue soon.
It's good written (at least as good as I can think of as a german) and I think it will become even better.
I like how Vegeta is confused and how Goku tries to cope with the situation.
.... by the way... DarkSerapha... Wann gehen Schattenseele und Kriegsmond weiter? |
Reviewed By: MegumiAmano [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, funny too
Vegeta
No identifications signs, but surely he's from one of the higher classes. You could tell just from looking at him.
That really cracked me up ^_____^
And the dilemma is hideous, letting things go as they should and allow the planet Vegeta-sei to be blown up by Freeza, or save the planet but wipe out his own timeline, no Trunks, no turning super saiyajin on namek-sei, no Genki Dama against Buu...
Hmmm no mirai no Trunks = no heart medicine for Goku and no android warning...
He can't save both worlds, I wonder what he'll choose.
And I wonder if Raditz is going to say: Hey, you look just like my dad! ^_______^
Slam |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: January 31, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!I love it! I really haven't seen a fic quite like this before. This is wonderful. I'll tell my friends about it and have them review. Please post soon?! Ja Ne! |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: January 31, 2003 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,no!! What happening to Goku?! I hope he didn't die! That stupid Vegeta, its his fault this is happening to Goku! Will Gohan and Piccolo be a couple in this fic? |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 17:11 CST
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DAMN YOU!!!!!! You've gotta continue. UR soooooooooooo evil for stopping there. It was really getting good too. Rite more soon, you don't want to see a psycho like me good crazier than I already am he he he!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: January 30, 2003 08:28 CST
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You two are off to a great start! I like the way you guys have decided to write this (each taking one of the main two)and it promises to be a very involving fic. That cliffhanger is killing me! I know this is greedy of me, but I am hoping to see the next part soon. |
Reviewed By: Kikoro On: January 29, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! This is a great story so far. i love the writing style, its different and i love how its from each persons perspective. This looks like its going to be some epic. Update soon! look I'm begging you, im down on my knees as i type this. Please please, must find out what happens, damn the cliffhanger! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:59 CST
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! *pants* come on now you two! That was just cruel :P Cliffhangers are dangerous for fans... *feels blood pressure rising*
more! |
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