| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm reading! I'm reading! *ducks head in shame* The chapters are really good, I swear. Because of you two I've become a Zarbon/Jeice fanatic!!! LOL!!! The hidden chapters were just delicious! (And no, I never emailed for a link. I just clicked the dropdown box and found them listed there. *smirk* That's probably why you've got 100 or so hits.)
*grins and pokes dyn* Poor girl is terrified! What did you say you were gonna do, dyn? Teach her a lesson of some sort!? *snicker* Wish I could be there to see THAT lesson!!!
See you two demons around DBX!
~Jady |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
exuse me!
what is this?!
you wont give me what i want unless i walk amongst your.. pathetic drooling corner street slaves!
*turns her back on them* i really dont think so!
*waves her hand at her expensive golden boots* how will i ever get these clean if i trundle my way amongst the grime and milduew of the peasents that line your little sham.
pah.. never.. i refuse!
*suddenly smirks, a glint of fangs protruding over her lower lip*
though.. perhaps..*giggles evilly*
i AM rather thirsty.. perhaps i could.. how should i put this.. clean up the scum?
i mean who knows what rotten fiends are prowling about.. threatning your customers.. i mean i know you have those two yummy saiyans.. but since they are too busy *playing around* half the time..
perhaps i could.. dance about and bite a few necks?
you dont want you're sadly depraved little friends to get hurt now.. right?
hehehee..
it would be so much fun..*smirks with the delightful evilness of her plan*
*taps her lips with a finger, struggling not to burst into satanic laughter*
*a little giggle escapes*
BUT on one condition..
heh.. you do a favour for me some time in the future..
i wont say what, just when i ask.. perhaps?
*grins*
well.. tell me what you think..
*wanders over to her large window that looks out over the streets high above everything..*
*smiles grimly*
~The Great And Powerful..
Dynishra The Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know every time i try to review the computer flunks on me..
i think its the demons..
the little black metre demons..
any way.. this story is definatly a masterpiece.. i think ill print it out and glue it to my walls..
that way i can read it every day.. >>
any way..
great story guys.. girls ..kittys.. demons.. what ever you are.
i love it, im not ashamed to say.
it would be nice if you could send that linky to me at, dynishra@hotmail.com.
*hums to her self and glances out the window of her 40 storied penthouse.* ho hum
well girls if you want to read my sad depraved story, Distant Light Years at fanfiction.net, then the very evil sequal i am in the process of creating called fall of the lost.. all about evil trunksie..
well chow then..
~The Great and Fantastic Dynishra The Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around guiltily*
Oh the shame, oh the humanity...
Yes, please send the link for the hidden chapter. I must know what Zarbon has in store for Jeice.
MelizaMac@comcast.net
*Sigh* |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 11:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Written like the godesses you all are, as always ^^ |
Reviewed By: Saijin princess On: March 15, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very original and well written. The characters have been portrayed exactly. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(pops head out of a giant pile of papers) GAH!! Bout time I got out of that evil bog of homework... SOOOOOOOO Sorry for not reviewing for such a long time. (latches onto street signs) I MISSED YOU ALL!! (CRIES)
Kurai: -_-;; baby....
Shut up!! (sniff) In any case, D.S., Rogue you two are still beyond compare! This epic rocks and we wait with bated breath for every new chapter!
Kuari: Kaky really is a bit dense about the whole 'Game' thing...I feel kind of bad for him.
Yami Gemi: YOU TRICKED ME!! KAKY AND JITA WERE NOT BACK IN THE ALLEY!! (shakes video camera) A TAPE OF A WALL!!
Hehe....silly cherub. Well, we look forward to the next chapter!!
Later Dayz & TAnx!! ^_^
-Chibi Gemi, Kurai & Y. Gemi |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*After getting their latest fix from the dark alley behind them, A'nore and L'orn casually stroll (and trip once or twice) out to their little bistro table to find Jeice and Zarbon back from their latest escapades...*
A'nore: There's nothing like the addictive pleasure of a well written story. *eyes glazed over, she stretchs dreamily, then sits down pulling Jeice chain to move him close enough to pet*
L'orn: *curled up in Zarbon's lap and playing with his braid* The interaction of Goku and Vegeta in this chapter was very nice. Even if the monkeys haven't gotten it on yet! This chapter left me with that nice afterglow only the very finest of drugs can produce.
A'nore: Oh yes, very nice...I think just one little lemon with Goku and Vegeta will definetely keep me addicted to these two Lovelys. I haven't enjoyed a story quite as much as this one...in a long time.
L'orn: Yes, the alcohol just isn't cutting it anymore...I need the hard stuff... *Zarbon leans forward and whispers in L'orn ear Oh yes...that's exactly what I mean...*drags Zarbon back to that nice little dark alley by his green braid*
A'nore: She'll be gone for a while... *sounds of ripping cloth can be heard* Hey! Wait! That's my favorite shirt...I mean was my favorite shirt. *mumbles as she pulls Jeice up into her lap to cuddle* Never letting her wear my clothes again... |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*In a dark deserted alley between two building just out of the glow of Dark Serapha and Rogue's street light, we find our ever dedicated reviewers A'nore and L'orn huddle together as they watch this hidden chapter unfold...*
L'orn: Well they stole our toys...I mean boys, from us again, but I must say that was most certainly worth it.
A'nore: I'm just so glad my little Jeicey enjoyed it this time! But now that Zarbon has him I won't ever get to play. *pouting*
L'orn: But sis it's almost as much fun to watch as it is to participate.
A'nore: Now, now I thought I was the sadist in this twinship...I know I'd much rather participate than torture myself with just watching.
L'orn: You're definitely a player, Huh? Well I guess there is a little sadist and masochist in us all...after all that is the whole reason we are reading these little hidden chapters isn't it? Now let's leave our dark alley to talk to Dark Serapha about a little recreational drug to help encourage Zarbon to play with us...... |
Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: March 14, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your good, may be even beter in this chapter than in the last one!! |
Reviewed By: Thugmiss On: March 14, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the whole plot of the story! The hidden link was great also! Could you send it to me? You guys please please update! |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh joy - another update.....more, more, more....great pics too. I have a kind of love/hate relationship with Vegeta (some authors make him a total, complete, utter bastard), but I really like him here. But can someone slap some sense into Goku - I mean, is he really that, well, out of it? I guess his mind just isn't in the gutter enough......*smirk*. I enjoyed the first hidden chapter and look forward to the next....likeacat@earthlink.net |
Reviewed By: Leigh On: March 14, 2003 09:09 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO COOL!!!!
I want to have the link as well!!!!
My addy: gina_geta@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Lully On: March 14, 2003 09:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta's disdain for Goku's obtuseness had me rolling on floor at one point. *shakes head* Obviously, goku will have to see things to understand. ok...not sure since this is AU and all...but goku mentioned Vegeta being so powerful and that not fitting with the Vegeta he meets in future...so does something rob him of part of his power or potential or is this another timeline? I always look forward to the next posting. I meant to review the last chapter but wanted to do so after reading the hidden portions which I have not done yet. Really enjoying both your efforts! |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh I really liked the second secret chapter. It was very well written. =^_^= |
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