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| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 04:39 CST
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This fic is sooo good! I luv it! Please update very very soon!! | Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Whoa... This fic has like gone to epic lengths already and Goky and Geta aren't even in the sack yet. O_O;;; Still, I'm enjoying the read quite a bit and I want to know more about this second hidden chappie... *grin* The only thing that bothered me was the thought of a pink planet. I had horrible visions of Chibiusa shaped clouds. *gags* I don't even want to think about a pink planet every again. I also want to know more about the fishie people. It has been such a while since I watched DBZ, that I'm feeling a bit rusty on the types of aliens. *curls up into a shameful little ball of fur* Ah well, I have the DVDs, I can catch up again some time. I can't wait until the next chappie, keep up the great work! | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: March 01, 2003 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo... damn, didn't see THAT one coming... but still... still good. U can really keep ur readers in suspense. ^_^ Don't think anyone else has tried that pairing before, and u get quite the... "cultural experience" from that Repta-jin and, um, whatever race Jeice is...
*ponders upon what Jeice's race is called for a moment then ADD sets in again and she continues her reveiw*
And that post almost-rape scene, where Goku and Vegeta r all cuddled up.... ^-^ Soooo kawaii... Awwwwwwww...
*curls up deeper in her hammock and yawns*
Mm... I'd leave a longer review, but I'm not coherent enough at 1 in the morning... Oh, and I'm definetly interested in any hidden chapters u might make in the future
psycho1828887@yahoo.com
Just drop me a line! I'll see u at the next chapter update! ^-^ | Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: March 01, 2003 20:34 CST
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hmmm...a little more blood than used to, but hey! always keep an open mind! yes, i am back at your corner! i seemed to have picked up a boost of self-assurance or somethin'... anywho, would love to read your other hidden chapter, am so totally relieved that fotm is still being worked on, blah blah blah... i am the queen of mindless drival^-^'
my e-mail is mistressbythearts@gundam-wing.net
yes, it is rather long. *coughs* urm.. great story! gotta run! au revoir! | Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: March 01, 2003 05:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say. There is not much left only that both chapters are awesome and very amzaing. Sure it was not the lemon we all waited for, but you get not everyday a fanfiction with zarbon and jeice in it. i would not mind to be able to read the other hidden chapter too.
i have eventuel read to much moneky moon from firecracker, but somehow i can not get the idea out my mind goku being with his brother or his cousin (or whatever he is)tales in a roll and a furios zarbon.
for the saiyajin word in the titel. i don't have a clue. that could be means anything from mating terms to destruction and power and pride.
but i can tell you both you are doing a really great job. i am enjoying each chapter so much that i read it more as once. your both should
made more out of yor writing talent. maybe
trying to write a book with a orignal story.
you too a good enough for a try. | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light,we find our dedicated reviewers, panting desperately from the onslaught of emotions this chapter has invoked. Neither is to proud to beg Dark Serapha and Rogue for the Second Hidden Chapter! After reading the First Hidden Chapter they decide to aquire a couple of new pets, since Dark Serapha and Rogue are so overly protective of their own Saiyan toys. *POUTING*
A'nore: "Oh my my my!" *breathes heavily while she fans herself rapidly with the pages from this awesome chapter and gulps downs yet another pina colada* "L'orn you have to read the the hidden part with Jeice and Zarbon again."
L'orn: *rubbing ice cubes down the curve of her throat letting it cool down her rapidly beating pulse* "Oh I did! You know how much I love my pretty Zarbon and I've always hated that red skinned lunatic. But then I'm a bit of a sadist at heart myself. Besides Jeice deserved it, he almost got Vegeta! Bad Bad Jeice!"
A'nore: "Now that's no way to talk about my
little Jeicy. After all red is my very favorite color." *pulls chain and drags forward the still mangled and beaten red skinned beauty and eagerly pets his white mane while crooning quietly to him* "Poor poor baby, Zarbon was such a horrid meanie! We'll just have to make it up to you now. Won't we? L'orn make your pet be nice to mine!"
L'orn: "I thought he was very nice. I know I enjoyed it! * Zarbon is elegantly sprawled on the ground next to L'orn's feet, leaning against her while she runs her hands through his lovely long green hair the strands flowing through her fingertips, while he smiles wickedly at the terrified Jeice cowering behind A'nore*
Zarbon: "Yes it was good wasn't it? Would you like a repeat performance? I am more than Up to it." *Licks his lips at the hentai thoughts while Jeice screams and tries to chew through his chains to get away*
L'orn: *purrs softly while stroking her favorite evil pet, then smirks evilly* "Sounds Yummy, but let's save some for later, Lovely. Besides I need to ask Dark Serapha where she got that nice little drug Jeice used on our favorite saiyan boys, I was wondering just how effective it would be on a certain Repta-jin."
Zarbon: "Aaaarrrgh." *tries frantically to tear himself away from L'orn's clinging hands* | Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still waiting for the hot monkey sex....but poor Jeice. Wait, I'm not supposed to feel sorry for the bastard.....
Great story, although I find it hard to believe that even Goku is that naive about Zarbon.
Nope, I'm not even going to try to guess what the title means....I'm lousy at that.
Ummmm....this is just a little thing, and just one of my pet peeves, so ignore as needed, but lose and loose are two different words....sorry... *ducking for cover* | Reviewed By: Jam (to family) Dilan (to friends) On: February 27, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG , I demand to know what hapend next ,I cant wait till the next chapter comes,
::I'm Going Scream If I Wait Any Longer:: | Reviewed By: Jam (to family) Dilan (to friends) On: February 27, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG , I demand to know what hapend next ,I cant wait till the next chapter comes,
::I'm Going Scream If I Wait Any Longer:: | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 26, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Relaxes in a cozy little hammock she set up between two lamp posts eating the free chicken and letting her tail hang lazily over the side as chaos ensues*
Ahh... just when u think it doesn't get any better. Thank u, A'nore, but I do believe I'll pass on the pina colada. ^_^ I perfer to be the designated driver... well, once I get my license that is. Watching other people get drunk while ur perfectly sober sounds fun.
*Hands her drink to L'orn instead so she can drown her sorrows of Vegeta's difference in personality*
This is so cool, I've even finally got the hang of the font sizes! ...Well, I think anyway. I gotta remember Goku hates pastels... ^_^ Funny stuff.
But NOW I'm going to be thinking about the name of this fic until my brain starts to make connections... Hmmm... it could be about time travel... nah... or if it's a saiyan word, it COULD be a word for something that is genuinely saiyan... Like it could mean going into heat!! I even found a nice little quote in the A/N of Ch 2 that supports my new theory! ^_^
Rogue: *smirk* I was quite impressed by one particular assertion…. If I may quote...: "In'lar-anth" the new hormonal wonder drug..." I think I would like to borrow this from Ginia for future advertising if she has no objections.
Hey... what's with that look? Yeah, I knew what you two were doing to those poor defenseless saiyans last chapter, even if Zarbon didn't... And of course I must praise u upon it. ^-^
Especially since I heard about the supposed "sky-rocketing rating" next chapter. I look forward to it very much. ;) Hmmm... I guess it's my turn to bring the snacks next time?
*Momentarily considers leaving her cozy spot in the hammock before remembering her multi-useage purse*
*Reaches down into the denim depths to pull out her handy-dandy cell phone and calls for pizza*
Moshi moshi!... Yes, are you delivering right now?... Great! I'd like 75 pizzas with extra cheese, 82 with pepporoni, 54 with... What? No this is not a prank phone call! I'll have you know I'm a very important client AND friend of the Briefs family!
*listens smugly as the pizza guy stutters apologies over her little white lie*
Oh sure, I understand... They can be delivered to the corner of Lemon Ave. and Angst Drv.... Uh huh...Yeah...And 54 with mushrooms and black olives... 39 with everything on 'em... Ooo, throw in several gallons of Pepsi with that too... Just estimate... Mm kay! Just ask for Punker... Mm hmm, u too! Byes!
*Hangs up and puts her phone back into the bottomless pit of her purse*
*Pulls out Volume 1 of the DBZ manga and leans back to relax and await the next chapter grinning triumphantly*
Lemme know when the pizza gets here. I'll just charge it to my parents' credit card like that little bitch Bra does... Uh, ... I mean, ...like that little blue haired princess... Heh heh... 0^-^ You didn't hear it from me... | Reviewed By: Lully On: February 26, 2003 12:01 CST
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AW...finally we see a little spark of something besides animosity beginning in our heroes. Hmm...very curious about why Frieza wants Vegeta away from other Saiyans....other questions ...from earlier...just what was Raditz' purpose in being assigned to Vegeta? Anyway, really enjoying this fic. I adore AUs....and this one has so much going on in it. Hehehe....so Goku felt a little warm. I'm sure I would have burst into flames if I were in his position. | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phenomenal ! Please keeep up the good work I'm absolutely addicted *whooopeee*
Tank Girl | Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 04:39 CST
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WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW WOW!!!!! I think that sums it all up. I can't believe how incredible this fic is. The two of you have done a Marvelous job. and my guesses for the other characters? Jeice-Rouge, Radditz-Dark Serapha, Zarbon-Rouge. did I get it right?? lemme know! Other than that, you can expect me to become one of your regulars. AND I WANNA SEE THAT VIDEO TAPE!! You know, the one you recorded end of last chapter! (chapter 4) *giggles* And I think you're right. I'll never be satisfied with regular Lemons again... *sigh* That just means I have to come and pester you two! How fun!! *Flutters fairy wings* Anyway, I hope you have lots more waiting to be posted. Until then, I"ll be here! *perches on a mushroom cap* Now where did I put that honeysuckle nectar...??? *has idea and wings flutter furiously* Hey Vegeta... Goku... c'mere a minute.... *winks* ^_~ he he! | Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 22:41 CST
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.... punker182biatch wrote in very large, purple font. Um. Original.
I'm going to state the obvious, I don't like Zarbon. I never have, now I dislike him more! Kill him! Oh wait.. that would interupt the time line right? *snickers* not like it hasn't changed already. You don't seriously think that 'Geta could forget an Sayajin like Son now?
You know what I've come to notice? There are lots of showers in z fiction, or is that me? Every story I've read in the past 2 months has showers in them. Not that they shouldn't shower, coz then they'd be all smelly... but.. I dunno. I just noticed. *shrugs* not that I don't like the idea of those sexy Sayajins in the shower ;)
http://www.geocities.com/gogetaoo/shower_vegetathumb.jpg | Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 25, 2003 19:37 CST
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*snicker* ya know... I enjoy your notes almost as much as your chapters... silly people
great chapter as usual ^_^ ugh... HATE Jeice... stupid red skinned bastard... Although, I kinda like Zarbon in this story... *shrug* I'm a freak... sue me
and, of course, the building relationship between Goku and Vegeta is just getting better and better ^_^
though... as I've already stated... WHERE THE HELL IS THE HOT MONKEY SEX ALREADY?!?! ¬_¬
heh... I'll be waiting | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
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