| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: nene On: February 05, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not often here, but I enjoy this story very much. Please continue soon.
It's good written (at least as good as I can think of as a german) and I think it will become even better.
I like how Vegeta is confused and how Goku tries to cope with the situation.
.... by the way... DarkSerapha... Wann gehen Schattenseele und Kriegsmond weiter? |
Reviewed By: MegumiAmano [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, funny too
Vegeta
No identifications signs, but surely he's from one of the higher classes. You could tell just from looking at him.
That really cracked me up ^_____^
And the dilemma is hideous, letting things go as they should and allow the planet Vegeta-sei to be blown up by Freeza, or save the planet but wipe out his own timeline, no Trunks, no turning super saiyajin on namek-sei, no Genki Dama against Buu...
Hmmm no mirai no Trunks = no heart medicine for Goku and no android warning...
He can't save both worlds, I wonder what he'll choose.
And I wonder if Raditz is going to say: Hey, you look just like my dad! ^_______^
Slam |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: January 31, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!I love it! I really haven't seen a fic quite like this before. This is wonderful. I'll tell my friends about it and have them review. Please post soon?! Ja Ne! |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: January 31, 2003 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,no!! What happening to Goku?! I hope he didn't die! That stupid Vegeta, its his fault this is happening to Goku! Will Gohan and Piccolo be a couple in this fic? |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU!!!!!! You've gotta continue. UR soooooooooooo evil for stopping there. It was really getting good too. Rite more soon, you don't want to see a psycho like me good crazier than I already am he he he!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: January 30, 2003 08:28 CST
Comment/Review:
You two are off to a great start! I like the way you guys have decided to write this (each taking one of the main two)and it promises to be a very involving fic. That cliffhanger is killing me! I know this is greedy of me, but I am hoping to see the next part soon. |
Reviewed By: Kikoro On: January 29, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! This is a great story so far. i love the writing style, its different and i love how its from each persons perspective. This looks like its going to be some epic. Update soon! look I'm begging you, im down on my knees as i type this. Please please, must find out what happens, damn the cliffhanger! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! *pants* come on now you two! That was just cruel :P Cliffhangers are dangerous for fans... *feels blood pressure rising*
more! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must...find...STREET CORNER!!!
Kurai: You guys make an excellent team. Very impressed I am.
Shut up Yoda! BEG, DAMN YOU!!
Kurai: (drops to all fours and smaks head on ground...repeatedly) PLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE! See?! We beg!
(whips out a map) Street corner...(mumbles incoherently)
Kurai: -_- Uh...kay. My authoress has totally lost it right now.
HOLD THY TOUNGE, NAVE!! (threatens w/map)
Kurai: YOU shut up! Don't make me get the pillow!
WAH!! No!! No fluffy soft badness! (dives under the desk)
Kuari: God. So sorry. This story is wonderful, we look forward the next chapter.
-Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoooaaaa!! This is a VERY promising fanfic! Your writing talent is fantastic! And you've gotten me so interested that I can already feel myself going crazy waiting for more. How could you leave it at such a cliffhanger?! HOW?! Excellent work! Please update soon! *puppydog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Cat On: April 11, 2003 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to give you my e-mail address! It's Akaina2001@aol.com |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM!!!!! U 2 must continue soooon! I know u guys r good authors, and one chapter's not NEARLY enough! Which, of course, is an understatment! ;) |
Reviewed By: Neo Zekele On: March 18, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a very good writer, and you also express your talent a lot in this piece. Very nice work. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I think Dark Seraph wrote Radditz and Rogue wrote Jeice. Am I right? I like this, it's different than the usual going into Vegeta's mind and reliving memories to know who he is, he's living them. And getting to know his dear brother. |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sob* How sad!!! Always wondered about the lust for fighting... *whimper* Very interesting fic, quite curious about this little machine. (Don't have time at the moment, read the next two chapters as soon as I can, promise!)
And just a note to you: Never challange me. *sadistic grin* And sorry about the tiger thing. Didn't occur to me to actually read the prelude to the Dragon fic. *slaps forehead* That would have made it even more... interesting. o.O'
Lotta love
Master of Squickyness!
Hehe... |
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