| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 05:48 CST
Comment/Review:
::quivers in ecstacy::
I don't think there's any other fic which has me sitting on the edge of my seat quite like this one. Hidden Chapter 2.... Oh god. The RP format, despite occasional awkwardness, almost heightens things because it seems as if there is no plan; anything could happen. Events are being acted out, right in front of you!
I await with baited breath for more! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 05:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh I want the 2nd hidden chapter!! Please send it to me!!!
My email addess is kamehameha_roshi@dbzgtlegacy.com
thanks heaps! Oh and keep up the good work! This is GRRRRRRREEAAATTT!!! |
Reviewed By: -_- () On: March 11, 2003 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Grrr...
update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update!
It's been over a week! e_e Gah! Don't make me come through this computer! |
Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: March 10, 2003 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ this is fic is BEYOND awsome! I can't wait till you update! I tried to read it all in one night..but...my computer decided to become evil (once again) and disconnected me. I couldn't finish the fic until today. Oh well. ^_^ the suspense was great. Heh. Vegeta and Goku fighting over food. I could SO imagine that. Update soon! ja ja! |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: March 10, 2003 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I give you a perfect ten!! I would also love to take you up on your offer!! my email is dragonballztrunksgoten@hotmail.com did i tell you that I live for this fic now? I would also like to know which street corner is the best to hang out on.... that would be great! Thank you!! |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGH! damn computer wont let me review!
confounded modern technology!
my addy is: dynishra@hotmail.com.
send me the link thingy..
*glares*
you DO know i only come online once a week... sigh
oh well
Chow any way, great brillent chapter!
~Dynishra The Vampire |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: March 05, 2003 14:37 CST
Comment/Review:
That was disturbing, in a number of ways. I can see why that would change the timeline quite a bit.
It's about time Goku did something to protect Vegeta, even though it wasn't much. I hope that he unleashes his power more now that he's already blown the timeline. His dithering is getting a little frustrating.
I wasn't really all that interested in the hidden chapter -- not really a huge fan of all-out torture, or of a Zarbon X Jeice lemon. He may have been revealed as a more sympathetic character, but in the un-hidden story he's still a complete jerk.
I look forward to more developments between our favorite couple soon! |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi it's me again ! Just had to tell you that the sceene where Goku cares for Vegeta and keeps him warm went straigt to my heart. Soooo lovely !!!
Und ähähm.... kannst'e mir das 2. verstecke Kapitel schicken ? villa-chinchilla@gmx.de
Habe die Ehre
*Bows low*
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good, gooooood, getting better by the moment !!! This is just beyond words and I'm so fazinated by the development of the characters that I can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter !
*cheers* Keep the teriffic work up ! Reading your stories really makes my live worthwile *happygrin*
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: March 03, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic rocks!! I love it!!!! ^.^ Woooow! I'm so glad my sis told me to read this! I can't wait to read the next ch.! Keep up the good work!
btw-my e-mail is teddy1999@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
*glomps you both*
that was spectacular (sp?) as usual!! you two never cease to amaze me ^_^
The hidden chapter was... um... well, lets just say that my views on Jeice and Zarbon have been altered considerably... I still think Zarbon is cool, more so now that I see the darker side ^_^
and Jeice... well.. I usually don't feel pity for one such as he, but DAMN... POOR GUY!! I'm really happy that he didn't die from it though... I've grown fond of him in a way
and awww... Goku and Vegeta all curled up... how sweet ^_^
yes yes SaintMe... have patience... how long is THAT gonna take?? *smirk*
Im sure, no matter how long it be for the hot monkey sex to surface, it will be worth the wait ^_^ you two rule
and, I WANT THE SECOND HIDDEN CHAPTER!!!
sweetie_can_kick_your_ass@yahoo.com
send send send!!
I love you two!!
update sooooon!!! |
Reviewed By: Kikoro On: March 02, 2003 15:28 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG that was :drools: excellent! More more yaoi goodness! I want that second hidden chapter! please please! anywhere i dont care, here fanfiction.net it doesnt matter to me, as long as i get my yaoi fix. Oh and i loved the ending, awww so kawaii! Goku and my Veji-chan all curled up and sleeping. cute!
e-mail me the link! Kikoro_san@hotmail.com Onegai! |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I really love your fic. I am not, however, thrilled at the characters changing every five sentences, but that is something I will have to live with. I would really like the link to your hidden chapter. My e-mail address is on my profile. So you can go there. Keep up the good work and if you can add more angst. I love it. |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I really love your fic. I am not, however, thrilled at the characters changing every five sentences, but that is something I will have to live with. I would really like the link to your hidden chapter. My e-mail address is on my profile. So you can go there. Keep up the good work and if you can add mor angst. I love it. |
Reviewed By: Mariel On: March 02, 2003 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote out a long-ish, properly thought out review for this, but then my computer declared that the window had performed an illegal operation and shut it down. For no apparent reason. So your stuck with this:
This fic is incredible. Just...wow. You're left with a feeling of mild awe at the end of each chapter, and the knowledge that you cannot write a review that would do it justice. So I kinda gave up on trying to ^_^; Sorry.
Anyhow...put me down for the hidden chapter? |
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