| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2003 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,Zechs is a pain in the butt... I'm glade Heero and Duo get to be together again ... And I'm glad Wufei has goten the stick out of his butt... This is a good story like the others and I hope to read more ..Update soon..TTFN
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Title: Great fic
Reviewed By: REI_Kat On: October 07, 2003 23:52 CDT
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Hopefully that's not that's not the way you plan on ending this great fic...I had almost forgotten about it though. In fact when I saw the new post I decided to re-read the entire thing, and boy was it worth it. I like the fact that you don't jump to much and it has a rather natural feel to it. I also like the switching perspectives between Duo and Heero because it rounds out the plot nicely. Especially since this is a very involved fic with a lot of emotion, a third person or a single perspective just wouldn't have done it justice. I hope to be able to finish this fic before I forget it again...so please update soon. thanks! ~AKA Shadow_Kat
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 06, 2003 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. In fact I love it... I can't wait to read about their wedding. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Title: don't have one
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 06, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story... I love weddings ... I can't wait to read more...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 22, 2003 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... this chapter was sort of sweet. They both realized their mistake. Keep up the good job and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: nooo On: September 22, 2003 08:03 CDT
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!! I leave for awhile and come back to find this fic completely... bitchy Duo! What is with him? He's acting like a woman, whinning about his emotional needs. Watch me while I puke ~.~ Shouldn't he have been concerned with WHY Heero was ignoring him and acting that way... maybe something was wrong with HIM not DUO. Ugh! I feel sorry for Heero cause he didn't do anything wrong in the first place! (in my opinion) Thats just who he is! and Duo equals Drama Queen. Ok, that's enough of my rant... just got a little pissy cause i liked this fic... and I do not see how it can possibly keep my attention anymore.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 01:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Still as good as ever. Yay, they started to work it out! The previous chapter had left me with a bit of a down feeling in my stomach. Sigh, relationships are tough...WHen can we expect the next chapter?
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Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 22:02 CDT
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this story is coming along great...I am glad to see a real relationship with all the normal problems in it...poor Heero having to try so hard to change...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 22, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. Keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Matti On: August 22, 2003 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, talk about Duo PMS-ing ^^' Shouldn't he be worried about Heero instead of getting mad at him? *sigh* they are both screwed up! |
Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started off reading 'Life with Heero' (erm, finish that one soon maybe? Pretty please?) then started reading your other fics. This one is by far my favourite of yours and that's saying a lot. I don't think I've seen such an original twist on the amnesia thing anywhere, and the whole reaction to this, first by one then the other, is well thought out and realistic.
(My fav part is when WuFei takes one look at a smiling happy Heero photo and just knows that something is wrong :) )
Please write more! Give those rabid plot bunnies a few more kicks! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW and I mean WOW, This story is? ..Sweet...,Moving,good,no great ...I like it and I need to read more ..No I have to read more please update soon your writing ability astounds me...update...update...update...please....Have you ever red a story you didn't want to end? that is what this story is like for me...I will save it and read it over and over again... |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 21, 2003 22:42 CDT
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*is annoyed at Duo* ~.~ I'm glad he's realized that he's been unfair. Yeah, Heero's treated him bad but really. J did a number on him. Slip ups are bound to happen.
Though I'm curious as to what Heero's working on so intensely...*prods Heero* ?_? What you working on, He-mo-sabi? |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 14, 2003 02:38 CDT
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*giggles* ^-^ kawaii. I liked this chapter. It actually got somewhere o_o;;; *waves little flag* ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 00:06 CDT
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Whew. I'm glad our boys aren't jumping into anything. Too often one sees fics which follow the formula "angst + angst + angst + angst + smooch + smut = super happy ending". I am glad that it appears that we'll get to watch the relationship develop and deepen and so on and so forth. Just be careful not to let it all drag too much.
Excellent, as usual. (",) |
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