| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yira On: July 29, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm telling you, a good slap on the head might help o_o;; For both parties. That and a "Get yourself together, man!"
Okay, maybe not so dramatically, but yeah. Bluntness is a good tool and a lethal weapon. XD In this case, I'd say it would be a tool. Maybe...possibly...o_o;;
n.n Write more onegai! *pounces and then saunters off* |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see you tomorow and I will keep reading!!! |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter, but here it is summed up in two words
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please listen to my request.
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 04:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed in a while, but I am so pleased to see so many updates!
I think you've done a marvelous job by using the alternating POVs. You've shown Heero's struggle with recurring memories at the worst possible times, as well as his remembering his relationship with Duo, and Duo's previous attempts to get closer.
And Duo's own stubbornness, requiring Heero to make the next move, is quite understandable.
I look forward to seeing their reunion now that Duo is conscious. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter and I'm still here reading your story ... I wan't more and I know i'll get it ...Sooo until tomorow keep going it's a great flic ... Thanks |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 27, 2003 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
..*Dies of suspense* x.x;;; *munches a cookie, while listening to "Yo Pumpkin Head", though how it's done while dead, she's not sure* Yes, I'm being silly. ^-^;; I don't particularly care. *waves half eaten cookie in the air* Sugar rush, you know...
Blah, I can't repeat enough times "Poor Heero! Poor Duo!!" o_o;; I am a woman of little words x.X I've used most of my discriptive vocabluary in discribing my feelings toward this fic..blah! Previous reviews apply... >.>;; I try you know... |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this story is soooo great I just can't wait until tomoro till the next update you go girl ^_~ keep them coming |
Reviewed By: lissabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 17:05 CDT
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omg. i am just so drawn into this story. i can't wait to see what happens next. please keep the updates coming quickly. ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have time to write much, but poor Duo-chan
he doesn't deserve treatment like that. He really doesn't. He should be able to talk to Heero the minute they comandeer the ship. Please write more soon cause I wanna know what happens!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story Please keep going thanks for the update |
Reviewed By: Turtlefire On: July 26, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great!!! Your stories are so exciting and fluent. Thanks for the frequent updates, I am checking mediaminer at least twice everyday! You have brought so much joy to my life! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 26, 2003 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww poor Duo! I bet that Heero was scowling because he was feeling guilty though. Hehehe. ^-^ Heero's like that. He can be sweet when he wants >.>;; This fic proves it...even if he didn't have his memory at the time. ^-^;;;
Can't wait for the next one! ^0^ Yosh! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 25, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, More!! I can't wait to read more, so update soon. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW what a great chapter ... This story is soooo great... You keep writing and I'll keep reading
Thanks for the update I look forward to the next chapter...^_~ |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero plays the knight in shinning armor, I like! I can just picture him doing that too, I wonder if that would make a good fanfic.....anywho
please write more again really soon because this story deserves it! Please make it a happy ending though, with no one getting killed, cause I swear if you make this a death fic where any of the main characters die I will stop reading this fic right now! Update soon!!!!!!!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
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