| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yira On: July 25, 2003 01:26 CDT
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*pounce* Yay!!! He saved them!!! *gives you a huge bag of your favorite snack* ^_^!!!!! Happy. Bored as well now. *sniff* There's nothing good to read right now. v.v
Now all they need to do is get to the shuttle...why do I have a feeling that it's going to be somewhat of a hard thing to do? n.n;; Is it your evilness? Or is it just common logic? o.o Cause that would be a first for me. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 24, 2003 21:12 CDT
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;0; Poor Duo. He has no hope!! Heero will show him different, right? He'll rescue them!! ^0^ Right?? *scoots toward you on her knees*
Anyway, it was a real nice chapter. ^-^ Hehehe. Wufei can read Duo like a book! It's cool. XD |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter Please keep them commong |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously love the new chapter. Sally is being kick ass and I love it. Poor Wuffers though, getting hurt when he is just trying to protect his future wife. That is just too sweet. I guess it conflicts with his whole honor thing if he doesn't try. Sadly though, Wufei lives in my head as well as Treize and Zechs and there is the little fact that all three of them are constantly boinking each other he really doesn't appreciate being paired up with her. It's not that he doesn't like her, it's just that she is well....a woman. I am so fucked up. Bye now, write more!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Sake-chan On: July 24, 2003 00:10 CDT
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Maybe the site's having some sort of problem, but Ch 20 has no words in it. Just thought I'd letcha know, sorry if you already did.
Anyway, I love the story so far (go 1x2), I like the way you handle the first person so that we can still get the POV of both characters. Keep writing :). |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 23, 2003 15:31 CDT
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People need to knock some sense intot he both of them. ;0; Lock them both in a closet for a day or two..or something.
No, Duo could pick the lock and if that failed, then Heero could just break the door down O_o;;; Um...yeah...they need sense knocked into them. *nod*
I want him to rescue them already!! *is all strung out on suspense* You like dragging your readers along, don't you? *poke* You're evil. I like that >:3 |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Know, I don't have to review each chapter... But I like to encourage you to continue and to let you know your doing a great job and that I love this story... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! You need to write more really soon
cause I want all of them to end up happily! Please, Sally and Wuffers and Duo and Heero need to get together. (In their respective couples of course.) Please let this story have a happy ending, I don't want this to end up being a death fic cause it is too nice and after all this angst they deserve some of the damn happiness! Write again soon.
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:10 CDT
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What a great chapter! I really LOVED seeing Heero's perception of the relationship he had with Duo before this mission. The two of them were really both loving and hating the pretense of being married, and since we saw Duo's POV on it earlier, it was so rewarding to see Heero's now.
I think the part where Heero reflects that Duo knew at which point Heero started to rebuff him was an excellent way to show the irony of the situation - both then and now. |
Reviewed By: shy_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, I love this fic, but where's the rest of it? *pout with puppy-dog-eyes* Update please? This fic's sooooo good! *waits for next chapter* I can barely wait!!! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 23, 2003 01:13 CDT
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Damn, you're on fire!! I take it that you're getting a lot of inspiration for this story.
I feel sorry for Duo somewhat. Blah, surely he'll realize that feelings like that can't just..appear, right? O_o I don't think you can fake love..Someone needs to tell him that. *nods*
^_^ I hope you can get the next part out as soon as you have been. If not, that's fine. n.n It's a good story. I can wait to read it XD It's worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 22:34 CDT
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This is a good place to go for updates on all of
Calic0cat's Gundam Wing Fanfics it is her live journal http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=calic0cat http://calic0cat.freeservers.com/
you will love it I know I do so go check it out... |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the fast update, I just love this story and I will keep reading all the storys you write....... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There was nothing of what was going on with Duo in the story. What's happening to him, is he dying? Is he all right but resting? Please update really soon you know I can't wait until you
do. I really love this story.
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair
P.S. It will have a happy ending, right? |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 04:18 CDT
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moo....You are so *killing* me here! You rock at cliff-hangers...unfortunately or fortunately? eh he...Anyway, all your stories are interesting and captivating, and this one is no exception. Serioulsy...you need to hurry up with the next update though! Argh! Though you might be cruel and mean and wait a couple days because of the double-chapter goodness we were treated to today...v.v *sigh* Keep going!
^The Firefaery^ |
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