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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter ... your the best keep going ^_~ I like it Thanks for the fast update... |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 00:55 CDT
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Two chapters in one day! You totally rock (and you inspired me)! I am sooooo enjoying this story... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo. He got shot by his Hee-baby. I want you to patch this up right away cause I don't like to see the babies unhappy. They don't deserve it in any way. Please write again soon I absolutly love how you are updating every day now!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another great chapter ... I look rorward to reading and will look for your next update |
Reviewed By: PlaidDragon On: July 21, 2003 16:25 CDT
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Calic0, this better work out or I'll have to crawl down the phone lines and hurt you.
Have some chocolate. LOTS of chocolate...
PD |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:23 CDT
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Ah... what a great way to work in their first meeting, and provide an awesome cliffhanger at the same time! My understanding is that head injuries do filter memories back in - having survived a severe concussion years ago, I recall that short term memories did work their way back into awareness over a few days - so it makes sense that eventually Heero would remember Duo shooting him. But you make it twice as good by making the timing (and visual trigger for the memory) just so... grrrr! cliffie!
gah, got me waiting anxiously for the next chapter now... ;-) |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 01:34 CDT
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Heero is in deep shit. Not rembering who he is completly, with only a half kicked back training and no idea about the complete background to this mission, just jumping from one assumtion to the next.
How will he get out of this without Duo?
And what about Duo? Did he kill him? |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE NOW!!! No time to say anything else but please I am begging you, write more soon!
Love ya,
Aria Lerendeair
P.S. I got confused. Did Duo really shoot Heero or was that the memories overwhelming him? |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i reallt love this story your doing great thank you for the update I can't whait to read more!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: July 19, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, tension! interesting! i already wanna know what happens next, with the mission and, obviously, with those two...
What i specially liked was the first-person POV. it's my favorite style. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 03:58 CDT
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Interesting thought of Heero's, that knowing bits and pieces is worse than not knowing anything at all.
I laughed at the visual image of the two of them trying to dance, and at Heero's stunned reaction to Duo's mindless chatter with Mattis.
It will be interesting to see Duo's opinion of Heero's stiff behavior at this party as well as of Mattis. |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 23:20 CDT
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I find myself checking back to see if you've updated yet - and this time I find you've updated two chapters since the last time I came around. Woo, and may I add, hoo!
I am liking this story. Majorly... honestly, not sure why, but it's got good angst, an actual plot (other than "let's all suffer for the sake of the readers' enjoyment") and demonstrates some historical understanding (of the story) without slamming us over the head with it. The subtle touches are particularly nice, where you've implied past events without being obtuse.
Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter keep going I love this story |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have much time to write a lot, but here is the gist of it. WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!! DO NOT STOP THERE AGAIN!!!!! UPDATE VERY SOON!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What in the hell are you doing stopping it there?! It was just starting to get pretty damn good. Poor Hee-chan, he has just started to get his memory back and I can understand why he is scared. I would be too if I were in his position. Who in the hell wouldn't be? By the way, I am the Aria who is reviewing, but someone took my name so I just added a last name. Please update again soon and please don't leave me hanging, that drives me nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya lots and lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
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