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Reviewed By: Amreld On: January 24, 2004 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, heh,.....O.o *sweatdrop* Well, DON'T FORGET TO USE STAIND!!!!!!!!!!! And, maybe if you even got the chance.....LINKIN PARK!!! or, Disturbed, or Metallica, or Staitc X, or MARILYN MANSON!!!!! Sorry, I know he's a freakish transvestite, but he's cool!!!!! ^^' Ja ne!!! Amreld
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: January 23, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I am soooo sorry for not reviewing lately! I ahve completely forgotten about this fic and this site while things have gotten so hecticv on ff.net. v.v IT realy sucked for a whiule over there, buit now things are getting bett, on ff.nrt, ot your story. ^^ DON'T FORGET ABOUT STAIND!!!!!!! JA ne!!! Amreld
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Another great chappy as expected! As for the cliffy, I love cliffy's! Knock 'em dead! Nan
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:24 CST
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Whoops! I meant to say Katrina not Kira, heh heh heh been reading to many MARS's
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:24 CST
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THEY'D BOTH WISHED THEY'D DIE!!! Nooooo that doesn't sound anywhere near a happy ending! Oh well. Sonia's cool! What type of music does she listen to? Oh dear, Kira is just sooo mixed up! I love her, but I hate her too! Ugh. Oh well! I've been pestering my sister to read this fic, but she's being stubborn. I'll get her yet! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:57 CST
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*shakes head* Katrina got Sesshoumaru naked. What would Kagome think? What would Inuyasha think. What? It wasn't a love scene? And I thought his death threats were his way of showing affection *laughs* Cheers for Kagome, who is going against the law to save Sesshoumaru. What a blow to his ego, that a mere mortal much save his furry hide. Why hasn't he killed Naraku? Scratch that...he shouldn't kill Naraku. Naraku is a nice guy...really (>_>) Your poor sister...do you want to scar her for life?? *grins* No, no, the funky chicken is a good thing *slowly steps away from SF*
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Reviewed By: Inu-Amacatisia On: January 21, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! Ok, I'll say this first. Your story is awesome...but, YOU DIDN"T PAIR KAGOME WITH INUYASHA!!!!!You should have. I'm not telling you how to write your story but it would have been way cooler with that pairing. But anyway good story.
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *mm.org hates me, I just know it!* On: January 21, 2004 18:26 CST
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*is jumping up and down* hey! isn't that...thing...from Kagome's dream?! when she was dreaming of Sesshomaru before whe knew about him, and he ended up in the..thing..in her dream?!^-^ *looks at Naraku* *in a sarcastic voice* gee...I wonder WHY no one understands you. *looks at Shippo* poor Shippo, always inder appreciated. *gives Shippo a hug* *looks confused* it was THAT bad of a cliffie. *looks at Sliver* I beg to differ about sex being able to solve anything. anyways, later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:11 CST
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you cant kill kagome!! that would be too cruel. but that whole sword coming from her and coming back to her when her heart gets broken thing worries me. .. hmm i wonder what you have planned for that?
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hiss* evil, evil I say... *sigh* why must you do this to us? I'm not saying I'm not grateful for the fact that you've got long chapters and you've been pretty good at updating regularly, but seriously. One of these times you need to end on something other than a cliffie. anywho, this was another excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next *dreamy sigh* i love wednesdays
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Reviewed By: SessKagForever On: January 21, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOHOO! NEW CHAPTER! A great chapter, if I do say so myself ^_^ SESS/KAG is the best pairing ever... please update again soon for if you do otherwise... it may be dangerous to mine and many other people's health! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: January 21, 2004 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dawns mad sciencist costume* He's alive! Alive! Always wanted to say that. Poor Inu and Sesshy, their going to get the youkai sucked right out of them. Well, maybe our favorite miko can stop that from happening. The whole thing with Naraku posing as Katrina's father remains me of Star Wars. *Naraku appears as Katrina's father* "Karina, I am your father" *shivers at the thought of Naraku being a daddy* Really good chapter, glad Sango is awake. One question: What does her nickname for Miroku mean? I know very little Japanese. And another thing, Kagome just jumped out of the heliocopter with nothing, leaving everyone else to stare in wonder? Boy, she really does want him back. Hope she's fully charged. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Blazingnymph7* On: January 21, 2004 00:49 CST
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Ok, i normally HATE cliffies, but this one was actually well written! Loved the chapter. Ummm, do you think Sesshy will ever use the supper cool swords??? What about Yashy and the regenerator??? Oh, what will Kagome's reaction when she finds sesshy naked and tied? will she tell the real Sesshy from Naraku?please answer
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 22:18 CST
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Reviewed By: Nan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another great chappy! loved it my dear, loved it.
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