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Reviewed By: (blazingnymph7) On: January 15, 2004 03:39 CST
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ohhh, what ever happenned to the swords? will kag-chan forgive sesshou-kun? And what king of youkai is Katrina? to many questions,too many questions...Ahhhh!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: January 14, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my gosh, this has become such an tightly woven story of secrets and everything has been revealed in one chapter. There are things in this chapter that I forgot about (the necklace) that are a key part of the story. By the way have I mention that you have an excellent way of writing a complex story and keeping the readers also coming back. Love the sence between Kagome and Sesshoumaru when he tries to wake her. I was beginning to think, finally they can get over their fighting and the once cold-hearted youkai would listen to the voice inside his head. But oh NO, he has to give her the last piece of the key and act like her life wouldn't be in danger. Sometimes I wonder if Sesshoumaru has a brain. Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: January 14, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story is getting depressing...so let me see it will be like in her dream where he is in the glass tube and naraku is sucking the youkai out of him, she has to save him, hmmm what about that sword she made for him. is it still working or did he break her heart and made it stop? thanks for updating. it is good. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:58 CST
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YAY! You just made my day! ^-^ I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! I'm trying to get my sister to read it too, but she's stubborn. So happy you updated, and no I am most certainly not pissed... right now I'm just really curious to see how Sesshou and Kagome get out of this one. As long as neither of them dies in the end, I'll be just fine! ^-^
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: You're very welcome. *smacks her forehead* Sesshoumaru is my favorite character, and let's face it, I'm pretty much in love with him, but sometimes he is sooo stupid. Like Kagome said, she had the key to the free world around her neck, and Sesshoumaru said it was none of her business. *sigh* Three strikes you're out Sessy. But on other notes, this was very long, and very good. ^__^ Inuyasha: O.O You're in love with Sesshoumaru? Isis: *blushes* Um, yeah, pretty much. Kagome: Aww, how cute! Isis: But shhh! He's the only one who doesn't know it! So you can't tell Sesshou anything! Sesshoumaru: What can't you tell me? Isis: O.O *gulp* Never mind. Update soon please SF.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 08:35 CST
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*sighs* Another wonderful chance for Kagome to purify Sesshoumaru...missed. *ducks sharp objects thrown by fans* Hey, hey, it's not that I don't like him! I just think he deserves to be roasted by Kagome's spiritual powers! I'm still trying to decide if Inuyasha is in love...or just stupid. I mean, come on...he was handed over to the enemy on a silver platter! *stares* Wow. Twenty-nine chapters! This is the longest AU fic that I've ever remained interested in! Where have I been? I've been neck deep in holiday cheer...and my son's 2 week vacation from school! Now that I have the time, I really should be working on my Kou/Kag fic. I really should. Yep.
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *too lazy to log in* On: January 14, 2004 02:54 CST
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*is cheering* Go Rin! ^-^ see, cook wear is good for more than just food. ummm…wasn't Shu the FBI guy from the beginning of the story? I don't remember and I'm too lazy to go look.-_- hehe, sounds like something I'd say if I found out it was the weekend. *bonks Sesshie on the head* that evil you know, tickle attacks. I've had to deal with them, and they are EVIL!!! That's evil, making Kagome suffer through one. *blinks* @_@ wow, talk about a plot twist. I wasn't expecting Kouga's assistant to be undercover… ARGH!!! Sesshomaru, you IDIOT!!!! *looks at SF* you really like writing these rocky relationships, don't you? *sighs and pats Inu on the head* poor Inu and Kagome, both of them had the people they love lie to them about the fact that they weren't human. *sighs again* but I do feel sorry for Katrina. *pokes at Kagome* she's not dead, just passed out for a week or two, right?
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 23:00 CST
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: January 07, 2004 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no problem. loved the new chapter. sheesh sesshomaru has a thick skull. hope he realizes his feelings before he breaks her heart.
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Reviewed By: AWSM On: January 05, 2004 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST LUUUUUVE IT!!! i like the way u write!! and i luve ur other fics too!!! hope the ice in sessho's hearts melts soon, cause is takin a while. NO I"M NOT complining!!! i luve log fic cause i enjoy a good long-entretining(spelling?)fic shuch as urs!!^-^ well hope u update soon!!!! and take care!!!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy'slova4life{::To Damned Lazy To Sign In::} On: January 04, 2004 21:42 CST
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ok i have to review in the middle of the chappy. cuz if i don't i won't be able to. ok! {::big sigh::} love the chappy as always. now if you'll excuse me i left in the middle and i would like to get back before my little brain goes into a big frenzy.
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Inuchan182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: sessieluv2 (not signed in) On: January 03, 2004 20:23 CST
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Great story!!! I love it! Plz update ASAP! ^_^
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! It's brilliant! I sat down and read this all in one sitting. Go SF you genius you! I love all of your fics and I mean all of them. Unexpected Allies, Kiss for a Prince, To Bear Witness, all are brilliant. Oh, and I'm so glad you made Inuyasha the way he is. In some Sess/Kag fics he's a stubborn jerk, but in this one he's actually nice and smart. Wow! O.O what a thought. Just kidding Inuyasha. Anyway I'm waiting for your update on the edge of my seat. Ja ne!
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Title: to bear witness
Reviewed By: whit On: January 01, 2004 13:35 CST
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nice chappie you wrote i look forward to your story every wed.!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so kawaii its AWESOME keep up the good work :) OVERALL RATING AS USUAL: 10
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