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Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: December 31, 2003 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great chapter. It does seem a little too easy for Kagome to forgive him so soon. But, I guess that is just her nature. I believe I remember you asking about a story where Sess is a slave. Well, there is one on AFF.net called Captive Soul and it is GREAT! Currently it is about 37 chpts. long and it is a Sess/Rin. I know, I'm not too fond of the idea either, but, this story is based on her being a young woman who happens upon him being sold in a marketplace. I think after the first three chapters you will be hooked. Anyway, keep up the good work on your end. I look forward to all of your updates. TTFN and Happy New Years!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: *Marie* On: December 31, 2003 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so sorry i havent reviewed. I mean, ever since i started reading this, second chance, unexpected allies, vengeance, and a kiss, i mean i have not reviewed at all. i absolutely love all of your fics and im dying to see what happens to fluffy in second chance, which might i add is taking waaay to long to get updated. But this, to bear witness, its killing me! first they get so close, then she finds out hes a demon so they seperate all because of that arse naraku. Is he dead yet? tell me he's dead and not coming back. I love the Sess/Kago relationships you tend to write with that even drama/action style, even though i like the me/Sess relationship better *lol*. Ne wayz, if you dont stick to your schedule sleep with both eyes open because i will break into your house and steal your computer just to see whats going to happen. Ciao! *Marie*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 08:44 CST
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YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!! New chapter! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! I'm glad that things are okay with Sesshou and Kagome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 07:34 CST
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Sesshoumaru is so mean Y_Y He's just toying with Kagome, even if he doesn't know that deep down he cares for her. I'd love to see that blow up in his face, but I'm sure everyone else wants a happy ending *laughs*
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: S1Cherry *stupid mm wouldn't let me log in* [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 03:28 CST
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yay! you updated, AND its snowing out! *sees everyone giving her odd looks* What?! it never snows here, can't I be excited every once in a while?! *grumbles* anyway, good chapter. *cuckles* Kagome definitly was NOT happy with Sesshie. *sees a pissed Sesshomaru* what? you deserve it, you jerk. *has a glaring contest with Fluffy* stupid jerk. *looks outside, and grins* yay! there's about 3 inches of snow on the ground already, and its still snowing hard! anyways, later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (not logged on) On: December 31, 2003 01:25 CST
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Oh Kagome's not gonna be happy when she finds out that Sesshoumaru's just messing with her. When will you tell us what Sess's plans are? I'm really curious since his plan was mentioned in the beginning. Great chapter! Oh and Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i not one that reviews often but i do try. i actually have time even though its 1:30 in the morning. -_-' anyways, i felt like forever till you finally put this chappy up!! i should be a shamed of myself, the computer is the only thing i look forward to now a days.....well, ill stop my self pity now. cant wait for the next chappy!! Bye! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Vampire Miyu On: December 31, 2003 00:35 CST
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*giggling uncontrollably* you updated! i'm so happy...i was waiting til 2am last week (*crying* at the memory). i'm still curious as to what sesshie is up to.
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Title: Yeah!!!!
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: December 31, 2003 00:12 CST
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Yeah another great chapter! I think Kagome is going a little soft but I can't wait until she finds out Sess is messing with her...she does find out eventually...right...and then goes rambo on him right ... ahhhh thats just what I would do. **wink, wink** Till next week then...JA!
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Reviewed By: reed On: December 27, 2003 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. its so sad that she said she doesnt love him! aw poor sesshomaru. please update soon!
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 13:51 CST
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
k, finally finished reading! yay, k so when do you update???????????????????????????????? wow this is so incredible! i absolutely love it! This has got to be 'the best' story i've read yet!!! plzzzzz hurry up with an update!! excellent, excellent, excellent!!
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i've been here all day reading your story, getting to ch 21 getting sleepy, then all of a sudden the whole house is awake as i sit here laughing my ass off! it's 1:30 am... my hubby is sooooo gonna kill me... Great story!! bye nan
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate it when someone thinks they dont love them but they do i allways cry when that happens please update soon bye
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 17:46 CST
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