| "To Bear Witness" Reviews/Comments [ 370 ] |
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 03:27 CST
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Reviewed By: Lease On: December 10, 2003 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jumping up and down......an update!!!! Did I mention, I love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: December 10, 2003 01:19 CST
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I am on the edge of my seat! I can't wait until your next update! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:10 CST
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Ooo the good part is coming up!! Well all of its good but the really good part is coming up .. I hope you dont physically hurt her .. because a sword coming back to her sounds a little painful to me. Especially if it comes back to her heart. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 16:48 CST
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Reviewed By: Sesshoulover On: December 07, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is killing me, when does Kagome find out about the real Sesshou. By the way I read all your Unexpected Allies stories so far, and they're great. I love them, almost as much as I love this one. So when my friend told me about this story, I knew I had to read it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh this is really good!! I'm getting worried now, though. Why do I get the feeling that what Sesshou did to Kagome's grandfather is going to come back to bite him in the... you know?!? Troouubble is coming to Paraadisse!! Fang: "Stop predicting things! That is so annoying! Duchess: Shut up Fang! Who's muse are you anyway?! Sheesh! Fang: Speaking of muse, shouldn't you be writing, not reading?? You're already getting death threats. Duchess: Must we talk about this here?! Goodness! (ignoring Fang, now) Anyway, as I was saying... Loved the chapter... love all your storiesm, (except when you left me hanging in "...When there are two." story of yours! Argh!) Kay, must go now, Fang's left eye is twitching which means hes getting impatient with me! Take care and still loving the story! ~*Duchess.
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Reviewed By: 5 On: December 05, 2003 09:55 CST
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: December 04, 2003 04:00 CST
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Awww! But it's so fun to encourage the wily little canine! *pouts* But, I get your point. Cheers to successfully passing exams and not blowing up the oven! And a little bit of angst on the horizon, I see. Yay! I'm a sucker for punishment.
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi1 On: December 03, 2003 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love ur story and cant wait for more ur a awsome writer
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Reviewed By: VampireMiyu On: December 03, 2003 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great chapter. you raised my heart level. the sword thing was so creative. loved it. and you got me so tense w/ the scene w/ kag's grandfather. i like how you portrayed sess's character in that scene--so in character! i can't wait till the next chapter, but it's finals week. but no matter how busy i am, i just have to read. this story is like an addiction. =o)
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: December 03, 2003 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. love the visit with her family. so she finds out next chapter. that one will be really good.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 10:07 CST
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Ji-chan isn't too happy about Sessho is he? Nope nope. I would think that Sessho would hold his temper in a bit more when he was confronted by ji-chan. Oh well. Great Chappy! I understand the delay!
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple (not logged in) On: December 02, 2003 21:37 CST
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Hey great chapter! Can't wait til Sesshoumaru finally finds out all about the sword. This is so cool! Update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 02, 2003 20:49 CST
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I love the fic! Great stary! Update when you can! Adios!
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