| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Daydreamer999 On: February 26, 2007 20:33 EST
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Great chapter...sorry I'm not signed in at the moment.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 15:08 EST
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So why did Fluffy not turn back into a dog? And will he be? Or will he stay a person for awhile? Grr... need more updates!
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:27 EST
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*bounce giggle* Wonderful fluffy chapter! But this decision that he's made sounds very ominous, I hope he's not planning on leaving her! Will Kikyo explain why he got an extra day in humanoid form? I'm glad you've started updating this story regularly again (Though I love all your stories anyway so it doesn't really matter which one gets updated) Will Naraku/Onigumo ever reappear to give Kags trouble? Not complaining, but knowing you you'll probably throw him back in to give us trouble! ;-) Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's kind of sad, that she forgot all about Chance. Doesn't know when he went missing. But I'm sure she'll start to feel all guilty. What was the decusion that Sesshoumaru made? Sounded like it was something that he didn't want but thought it had to be done. I like this story so much! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and I'm so glad that you updated!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and I'm so glad that you updated!
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 17:29 EST
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Sorry I meant Now lol
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 17:29 EST
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I love it...but I cannot find the chunk that is missing ^^;;....I'm not put in suspense for the next character omgosh cannot wait!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:18 EST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 17:36 EST
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~Cries~ Meanie!....lol...This was really good please update soon!!! And what did you promise to Sesshomaru o.O;;...hope you outrun him!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 12:50 EST
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I love this story!!!! It's so great, and this latest chapter has been the best so far! you write so wonderfully, and i truly can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:25 EST
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I wnated them to do it, but you were right in how you wrote it. He is honorable and you shouldn't take advantage of a girl when she is drunk. Please update again soon! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 11:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaargh! How can you be so cruel? TT_TT You must update soon! *threatens with rotten tomatoes*
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 04:07 EST
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The second chapter is all one big run together mass with no paragraphs. Also when a new sentence starts the first word is gone. I don't know if it is like that with all the chapters since I have only read up to chapter 2 but I just thought you should know. The story is very interesting and I would love to read it. Can you please fix it?
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