| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 04:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get me home fast, Heero... Well, get the new chapter updated fast would be better. I love this story. You give them time to develop a relationship before they have sex. And everytime Duo's secret might be discovered it stays hidden. And your lemon are wonderfull. I hope the next chapters has some.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 10, 2004 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is what I was waiting for (YES0 Know all I need is for you to update ,write more and update Please I want to read more TTFN I just love this story...
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 15:03 EST
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YEAYY!!! finaly update*hugs* whoohooo... go duo go herro! wheeeeeeeeee.. sorry i ish just wakin up...but lookin good darlings!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 14:23 EST
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Hehe, love Wu's reaction when they told him, that was excellent. And quite likely that a Preventer investigator would have noticed the way they were acting together even if they'd been discreet. But man, way to leave the chapter!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 15:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHH! I love this fic, but the cliffhangers are nearly killing me. LOL! I simply can't get enough of this fic. So update soon and keep up the AWESOME job.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 23:43 EST
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**WAILS** NOT AGAIN!!!!!! You and cliffhangers!! Jeez!! Nice lemon. ^.^ Please, please, please update!! And address the chat with Sally from before!! ~Wanders off to find Midol for poor Duo-chan~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 03, 2004 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait until your next update so please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 19:50 EST
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oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh*drool*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 31, 2003 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till Duo gets pregnet.. What will Heero do or say? this chapter was great really look forward to reading more please update again soon TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 10:27 EST
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The 'iron' thing was a well-thought out piece of suspence; it looks like Duo's 'real' condition is still unknown, which means...an eventual surprise! *evil snicker* Excellent so far, and I'm still addicted. And I loved Heero's mother hen streak :D
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 02:00 EST
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Dang you leaving us with aother clify...*threttens you with a baseball bat* btw the flu sucks...update quickly while i'm sick at home and can read it!
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Title: Too lazy to log on, so sue me!
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny (FB for short) On: December 26, 2003 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started to read this, it was a bit slow in pace... And I thought, oh no, a detail freak has arrived in my midst. Then, the details any Gundam fan (except a few manga only maniacs.) would know. Though, I didn't skip the added details. Then, things picked up a bit. You left me hanging at the end more than once (this is a method I use to catch attention of the reader, you do too, obviously.) But, leaving us here of all spots was just a little bit... Too much because right now I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat, wide awake at 2:10 in the morning! Jesus tap-dancing Christ (Sorry if it offends you do to religion, I prefer just studing the Bible without being told what to read out of it thus not going to church), I'll be up until four still with the near to caffine rush bliss you brought me to! (Adrenaline, the body's natural coffee!)Sorry it's so long, but my ratings speak for themselves (Except Spelling&Grammer cause I suck at it and I know humans make mistakes, even best-sellers.)
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Title: Too lazy to log on, so sue me!
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny (FB for short) On: December 26, 2003 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started to read this, it was a bit slow in pace... And I thought, oh no, a detail freak has arrived in my midst. Then, the details any Gundam fan (except a few manga only maniacs.) would know. Though, I didn't skip the added details. Then, things picked up a bit. You left me hanging at the end more than once (this is a method I use to catch attention of the reader, you do too, obviously.) But, leaving us here of all spots was just a little bit... Too much because right now I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat, wide awake at 2:10 in the morning! Jesus tap-dancing Christ (Sorry if it offends you do to religion, I prefer just studing the Bible without being told what to read out of it thus not going to church), I'll be up until four still with the near to caffine rush bliss you brought me to! (Adrenaline, the body's natural coffee!)Sorry it's so long, but my ratings speak for themselves (Except Spelling&Grammer cause I suck at it and I know humans make mistakes, even best-sellers.)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 25, 2003 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Merry Christmas and thank you for updating.... I just love this story... Have I told you lately what a great writer you are ? If I haven't I should have..This story is the best and I hope you update again soon.. I really am awed by your talent and hope to read more of your stories... so until next time TTFN...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 14:51 EST
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**Chews Nails Incessantly** O.o OMG! OMG! OMG! This is it! Oh Boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! ~Resists urge to wander and impatiently sits at pc waiting for an update~
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